Beyond - Legends I NEVER KNEW K/J

Disclaimer: I don't own Star Wars I'm just playing here.

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There has to be away
For us to be in love
Though the war may take us apart
It won't change who we are

Time may change us in many ways
But my love for you will continue
To the end of time and beyond

In my darkest hour you were there
You knew what I was going through

When the end came I pray
You didn't feel any pain
I carried enough in my heart
For both of us

You'll never know how I feel
I never got the chance to tell you
I was shielded from my feelings
I realized it too late

I pay the price each day
I love you Kyp

I'll see you in the force someday
Till then I'll see you in my dreams

Jaina

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Yeah, I know it's not a post on any of my fanfiction, but the poem came to me and I had to write it down. I thought maybe some of you would be interested in it. It's not real wonderful, but *sigh* I don't know, see what you think, tell me what you think constructive critsism is always welcome.

Fireyforce

 

I like it.

 

I liked it too...it was sad, but nice

~Abby~

 

Woa that was amazing! Good writing there.

Time may change us in many ways
But my love for you will continue
To the end of time and beyond

Very touching and a little desperate too!

 

Princess_Leia: I'm glad you liked it. I've been writing poetry for awhile, but never with Kyp or Jaina or any of the Star Wars characters involved so this was new.

Abby: Glad you liked it!

Elfsheen: Yeah desperate things happen when people realize things too late.

Fireyforce

 

very bittersweet and a nice read.

love the last stanza

EJ

 

Eowyn: I'm glad you liked, yeah it is alittle bittersweet, but a lot of my poetry ends up that way so.... not surprised that this did too.

If anyone want's to see more of my poetry click here

Some is a bit dark, but I think you guys will like it.

Fireyforce

 

When the end came I pray
You didn't feel any pain
I carried enough in my heart
For both of us

Haunting in its regretful tone. Simply lovely.

 

Very nicely done! Poetry was my first "literary" love so I enjoy seeing one so well done! Bravo!

 

Lovely

~~Jilly

 

Red Rose Knight: I'm glad that you enjoyed this. Yeah, that stanza was supposed to be haunting.

Vader: I'm glad you liked, I've always loved poetry (nearly have a book full of my own work) and this one just kind of came to mind, glad you liked it.

JD:

Fireyforce

 

UP!!

Fireyforce

 

That was amazing. I could never write anything like that. A little sad too, but nice.

Cattie

 

Maiden: I'm glad that you liked this poem I'm really into poetry check out my site if you get the chance most of my poetry is posted there.

Fireyforce

 

Beautifully sad....great job!!

Flame

 

Thanks Flame, I'm glad that you liked it.

Fireyforce