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Beyond - Legends I NEVER KNEW K/J

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Fireyforce, Jul 26, 2004.

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  1. Fireyforce

    Fireyforce Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Disclaimer: I don't own Star Wars I'm just playing here.

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    There has to be away
    For us to be in love
    Though the war may take us apart
    It won't change who we are

    Time may change us in many ways
    But my love for you will continue
    To the end of time and beyond

    In my darkest hour you were there
    You knew what I was going through

    When the end came I pray
    You didn't feel any pain
    I carried enough in my heart
    For both of us

    You'll never know how I feel
    I never got the chance to tell you
    I was shielded from my feelings
    I realized it too late

    I pay the price each day
    I love you Kyp

    I'll see you in the force someday
    Till then I'll see you in my dreams

    Jaina

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    Yeah, I know it's not a post on any of my fanfiction, but the poem came to me and I had to write it down. I thought maybe some of you would be interested in it. It's not real wonderful, but *sigh* I don't know, see what you think, tell me what you think constructive critsism is always welcome.

    Fireyforce
     
  2. _princess_leia_

    _princess_leia_ Jedi Master star 6

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  3. Abby

    Abby Jedi Master star 4

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    I liked it too...it was sad, but nice :)

    ~Abby~
     
  4. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    Woa that was amazing! Good writing there.

    Time may change us in many ways
    But my love for you will continue
    To the end of time and beyond


    Very touching and a little desperate too!
     
  5. Fireyforce

    Fireyforce Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Princess_Leia: I'm glad you liked it. I've been writing poetry for awhile, but never with Kyp or Jaina or any of the Star Wars characters involved so this was new.

    Abby: Glad you liked it!

    Elfsheen: Yeah desperate things happen when people realize things too late.

    Fireyforce
     
  6. Eowyn_Jade

    Eowyn_Jade Jedi Master star 4

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    Jan 14, 2003
    very bittersweet and a nice read.

    love the last stanza :D

    EJ
     
  7. Fireyforce

    Fireyforce Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Eowyn: I'm glad you liked, yeah it is alittle bittersweet, but a lot of my poetry ends up that way so.... not surprised that this did too.

    If anyone want's to see more of my poetry click [link=http://www.fictionpress.com/~fireyforce]here[/link]

    Some is a bit dark, but I think you guys will like it.

    Fireyforce
     
  8. red rose knight

    red rose knight Jedi Master star 4

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    When the end came I pray
    You didn't feel any pain
    I carried enough in my heart
    For both of us


    Haunting in its regretful tone. Simply lovely.
     
  9. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Very nicely done! Poetry was my first "literary" love so I enjoy seeing one so well done! Bravo! :D
     
  10. JainaDurron

    JainaDurron Jedi Master star 4

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    Aug 8, 2002
    Lovely

    ~~Jilly
     
  11. Fireyforce

    Fireyforce Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Red Rose Knight: I'm glad that you enjoyed this. Yeah, that stanza was supposed to be haunting.

    Vader: I'm glad you liked, I've always loved poetry (nearly have a book full of my own work) and this one just kind of came to mind, glad you liked it.

    JD: :D

    Fireyforce
     
  12. Fireyforce

    Fireyforce Jedi Padawan star 4

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    UP!!

    Fireyforce
     
  13. Handmaiden_Rabe

    Handmaiden_Rabe Jedi Master star 5

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    That was amazing. I could never write anything like that. A little sad too, but nice.

    Cattie
     
  14. Fireyforce

    Fireyforce Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Maiden: I'm glad that you liked this poem I'm really into poetry check out my site if you get the chance most of my poetry is posted there.

    Fireyforce
     
  15. Flaming_Sword

    Flaming_Sword Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Beautifully sad....great job!!

    Flame
     
  16. Fireyforce

    Fireyforce Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thanks Flame, I'm glad that you liked it.

    Fireyforce
     
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