Beyond I NEVER KNEW K/J

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Fireyforce, Jul 26, 2004.

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  1. Fireyforce Jedi Master

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    Jul 23, 2003
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    Disclaimer: I don't own Star Wars I'm just playing here.

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    There has to be away
    For us to be in love
    Though the war may take us apart
    It won't change who we are

    Time may change us in many ways
    But my love for you will continue
    To the end of time and beyond

    In my darkest hour you were there
    You knew what I was going through

    When the end came I pray
    You didn't feel any pain
    I carried enough in my heart
    For both of us

    You'll never know how I feel
    I never got the chance to tell you
    I was shielded from my feelings
    I realized it too late

    I pay the price each day
    I love you Kyp

    I'll see you in the force someday
    Till then I'll see you in my dreams

    Jaina

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    Yeah, I know it's not a post on any of my fanfiction, but the poem came to me and I had to write it down. I thought maybe some of you would be interested in it. It's not real wonderful, but *sigh* I don't know, see what you think, tell me what you think constructive critsism is always welcome.

    Fireyforce
  2. _princess_leia_ Jedi Grand Master

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  3. Abby Force Ghost

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    Jan 7, 2004
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    I liked it too...it was sad, but nice :)

    ~Abby~
  4. Elfsheen Jedi Grand Master

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    Feb 9, 2003
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    Woa that was amazing! Good writing there.

    Time may change us in many ways
    But my love for you will continue
    To the end of time and beyond


    Very touching and a little desperate too!
  5. Fireyforce Jedi Master

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    Princess_Leia: I'm glad you liked it. I've been writing poetry for awhile, but never with Kyp or Jaina or any of the Star Wars characters involved so this was new.

    Abby: Glad you liked it!

    Elfsheen: Yeah desperate things happen when people realize things too late.

    Fireyforce
  6. Eowyn_Jade Force Ghost

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    Jan 14, 2003
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    very bittersweet and a nice read.

    love the last stanza :D

    EJ
  7. Fireyforce Jedi Master

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    Eowyn: I'm glad you liked, yeah it is alittle bittersweet, but a lot of my poetry ends up that way so.... not surprised that this did too.

    If anyone want's to see more of my poetry click here

    Some is a bit dark, but I think you guys will like it.

    Fireyforce
  8. red rose knight Force Ghost

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    When the end came I pray
    You didn't feel any pain
    I carried enough in my heart
    For both of us


    Haunting in its regretful tone. Simply lovely.
  9. VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus

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    Feb 5, 2004
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    Very nicely done! Poetry was my first "literary" love so I enjoy seeing one so well done! Bravo! :D
  10. JainaDurron Jedi Master

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  11. Fireyforce Jedi Master

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    Red Rose Knight: I'm glad that you enjoyed this. Yeah, that stanza was supposed to be haunting.

    Vader: I'm glad you liked, I've always loved poetry (nearly have a book full of my own work) and this one just kind of came to mind, glad you liked it.

    JD: :D

    Fireyforce
  12. Fireyforce Jedi Master

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  13. Handmaiden_Rabe Force Ghost

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    Nov 2, 2003
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    That was amazing. I could never write anything like that. A little sad too, but nice.

    Cattie
  14. Fireyforce Jedi Master

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    Maiden: I'm glad that you liked this poem I'm really into poetry check out my site if you get the chance most of my poetry is posted there.

    Fireyforce
  15. Flaming_Sword Jedi Knight

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    Dec 18, 2003
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    Beautifully sad....great job!!

    Flame
  16. Fireyforce Jedi Master

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    Thanks Flame, I'm glad that you liked it.

    Fireyforce
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