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Saga i think we will call you Scorch!-whats in the name?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by jedisamsel, May 27, 2006.

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  1. jedisamsel

    jedisamsel Jedi Master

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    Kal stood atop the great walkway that led to the incubation chambers. Looking at the new commando batch being born. The four man squad already asigned the name Delta were being processed before his very eyes. The four "brothers" already showed attitude and differences.

    The one to be named Boss was quietly watching the other three and almost recording their every movement and gestures. His nearly formed hands would brush against the "womb" as to scold the others when they were doing something Boss didn't like.

    The second in command to be named Sev seemed to calm down after Boss's slight corrective action. Then he would look around the entire complex as to look for ways to defend aganst enimies useen.

    The third member to be named Fixer was the one who seemed to be tinkering with things alien to him. Wether it was pushing levers or wiring control panels, He mimiced everything he saw.


    Then there was the last child, To become the infamous Scorch. Kal noticed this infant cared nothing for boring outside surroundings. He sat in his womb making faces at the Kamonian attendants as they passed. Pressing his face into disorted patterns aganst the sides of his containment unit. Kal thought about the day he found his fifth appendage, Scorch would not let it go for hours! At times Kal thought Scorch actually blurted at him.

    As time progressed the four were sent into commando training. All excelled at their training. Boss the natural leader ran the others like a tight formation at all times. Sev reinforced Boss's commands aa Fixer managed to dissaemble and reassemble everything he got his hands on.

    Then there was Scorch, He managed to blow a hole in the floor of the nursery with some explosives he "found". Another time he wired the tiolets with blast caps so when you sat on them your cage was rattled.

    Soon the squad was ready for their first mission. They had to fly to Geonosis and destroy a major droid processing plant. Boss outlined the whole mission from beginning to end. Sev followed the battle plan to the t. Fixer disarmed all the traps and detection devices.

    Then there was Scorch, All he had to do was blow the whole place. He did his job too well! The others hid behind the troop transport as Scorch finished laying the trip lines. Standing tall like a proud artist Scorch pressed the the firing pin. Boss was the first to wipe his visor clean from the soot that covered everything. Glancing at the troop transport's hull, he saw a white outline etched in the blackness.

    He desintergrated himself thought Sev. Then a cough was heard and a pile of soot moved. Scorch stood and shook himself clean. It took all of Boss's training not to fall over laughing. Standing in front of him was the demo expert Scorch with flash burn across his face.

    "You might want to take alook" said Fixer throwing a tiny mirror to Scorch.

    Scorch saw his eyebrows completely gone!

    "I guess Overkill is the word of the day!" said Scorch

    The team boarded the ship and flew back home with thier first mission complete.
     
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