I Turn To You (A JA Fanfic)

Wow... I don't know which one to feel worse for..

 

Heart stopping... Excelent!

 

Don't hold back Obi tell us how you really feel about the situation.

Excellent job, eagerly awaiting more.

Igraine

 

I couldn't agree more The Butler, Qui-Gon gets off to easy in some fanfic. But I still want them together in the end with a lot of mush in the middle

This is a terrific story, I hope we continue to get updates so regularly!!!!

 

Ohh I knew he had tried something like that. Poor boy. Those were really good post, I look forward to more.

 

"What nerve!" Obi-Wan screamed loudly as he slamed the entrance to Nova's room it made her jump. Wow...he must have really must have told him off. "Trying to act like everything is just peachy!" He flung his jacket onto the bed and floped down into a recliner. Nova came behind him and rubbed his shoulders. "I told him what I did Nova."

She was not suprised. "It was the best thing you could have done." He sighed and stood back up. "Don't dwell on it Obi-Wan. You did what needed to be done." Obi-Wan rubbed his eyes. "Obi-Wan he deserved it...you have said it yourself." Obi-Wan looked at his chronometer.

"Look I need to go." Obi-Wan pulled out a book. "I told Amanda I'd read with her today." Nova smiled, the little kids loved him, he was the older brother they would never have. He walked over and gave Nova a hug. "I promise I won't be out late."

"Okay." Nova let out a sigh. "Don't get into trouble."

"I won't."

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Qui-Gon and Mace Windu sat a at a small cafe that was diagonally across from the apartment complex that Obi-Wan had walked to after the meeting with Qui-Gon. It had blown Qui-Gon away seeing his former Padawan again. Was he responsible for what happend to him? Was it his fault?

"Stop wallowing in self guilt." Mace Windu said sipping on a cup of caffe.

Qui-Gon gave a painful smirk. "I was projecting wasn't I?" Mace Windu nodded and continued to drink his caffe with much contentment. Qui-Gon let his eyes wander back to the apartment complex.

And then he saw him.

It was Obi-Wan. He was holding a small girl, who couldn't be much older than six, walking to a park bench that was right outside the complex. He sat down and put the small girl in his lap. Obi-Wan carefully opend the old book and began to read to the young girl. It filled Qui-Gon's heart with a love that he only gave to those he truely cared about.

Which was Obi-Wan.

But that had changed. What he had with him was gone. Would he want to change the past? Yes. He wanted him back so badly...

But had hurt him too much for Obi-Wan to want him back.

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I'm mean aren't I?

 

Yes, making me cry is mean! But keep it up.

 

That was sad and sweet, a good combination!!!

Please post more, I really really really like this story!!!!!!!

 

Yes, very mean. Excellent posts Renton, just love all the heavy emotions.

 

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Yes, making me cry is mean! But keep it up

Wow... I'll post manana.

 

wonderful story renton, will you be writing exactly what happened ? I would really like to know. (but still love this story nevertheless). Keep it up and post soon

Kim B

 

New Post but sad Qui-Gon But great story

 

This is fantastic!

 

Hey?! Do I have to do it ALL over again? Do you REALLY want me to do it again?

:Tigris waits expectantly. After a few minutes in which no posts appear, Tigris sighs.:

Well all right. You asked for it.

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE....

 

Tigris: Okay Okay Okay!
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Nova stood in the kitchen part of the small cafe she waited on she was on her break. No one could yell at her now. She rubbed her upper right arm trying to get the stiffness out of it from carrying heavy trays back and forth all morning. She took a cup from the counter that was next to her and filled it up with water. Stepping out back she took in a deep breath of the cool Benal air. Almost lost within the moment, she didn't since the presence that walked from behind her.

"Hello." She abruptly turned to see herself face to face with the man she never had met but had learned to hate with a passion. Qui-Gon Jinn, the man responsible for causing Obi-Wan, her best friend, so much needles pain. "Are you the one they call Nova?"

She turned away from him showing she didn't want anything to do with him. Nova desprately tried to control the anger that was enraged within her. "I have nothing to say to you." She went to walk away but Qui-Gon grabbed her by the wrist and turned her around. "Let go, I'll get Obi-Wan over here and believe me he would hurt you gravely if you tried to do anything to me."

"I have something to say to you." Qui-Gon quickly said in retort trying to ignore the girl's last comment. "I am only here to help Obi-Wan not hurt him." Nova rolled her eyes.

"Like you haven't done that allready." Nova said barely above a whisper. "Don't you even realize what you put him through?" Nova snorted in disgust. "I suppose you wouldn't." She held back the urge to sock him in the gut. "I have been here for him. Through everything, the nightmares, the tears, the attempts he has made on his life." She pointed her index finger at him. "It's all your fault Qui-Gon. Everything that poor boy has gone through, is the fate you gave him."

Wow. She must have done something, she saw the Jedi Master turn to wipe away a few stray tears that had somehow fallen. Qui-Gon turned back to Nova with his eyes red and bloodshot. "Don't you think I realize what I had done to him? I just didn't think it would end up like this never. It was my fault, yes. But, if he hadn't of run-"

"Stop it right there." Nova said coldly. "Do you seriously believe that you gave him any other option. He needed you, wanted you, loved you. You were the father he would never know. From what he has told me I would kill to have a friendship like you two had once shared. Qui-Gon you were the one who ruined this. Not Obi-Wan, he was just the soul you tore in two because of your self-pity." She couldn't hold it in anymore. Nova gave Qui-Gon a quick slap across the face. "You are no Jedi Master. If you were, Obi-Wan would be with you."

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Ouch...is anyone thinking Nova is turning out like an older sister figure?

 

I LOVE this story!

 

Dang! Give Nora a lightsaber and she
could kick Qui-Gon's @ss! Heehee!
Excited to read more...this is great!

aa

 

Fiesty, isn't she? so this isn't Obi or Qui torture, this is fan torture, cause we have to wait and find out if Obi and Qui get back together...I guess a little torture never hurt anyone, right???

 

Hate to say this, but Qui-Gon DID deserve this. Rejecting a sensitive teenager is not exactly what father figures should do. And he SHOULD wallow in guilt for a bit- it builds character.

 

Way to tell his Nova, he deserved every thing you gave him and more!!!!!!

 

hmmm, I am torn between feeling sorry for Qui Gon(He didn't know what he was doing when he rejected Obi, give the guy a break, Nova give him a break!) and being so mad at him(You moron! Nova give him a taste of his own medicine!) not many stories can make me a schizophrenic! keep up the heart-tearing posts!

 

Wow. I love this story!

 

I have one work for you Renton, WOW!!! What else is there to say. This story is incredible, and really well written.

I love it!! And you don't get a collection of TFn writters like you've got here with just any story. This is really GOOD.

Now I will join the bandwagon as well and say:
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

OK, I think that should do it?? heheheh

 

Another big WOW. I can't blame Nova a bit for defending her friend.

 

Ooooohhhh... I could almost feel that slap.
Will Qui-Gon be able to fix things?
Looks like Nova's really P.O'ed
Post when you can.. please?