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Beyond - Legends I Want to be Your Knight (Ben, Jysella, Seha - post-LotF) - Chapter 38 - 07/08/09

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Kidan, Jul 30, 2007.

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  1. Killik_Twilight

    Killik_Twilight Jedi Master star 4

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    Seems like there should be something more behind this. That almost seemed too easy.

    KT
     
  2. Draconarius

    Draconarius Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Well, that was pretty easy... I have the strangest feeling it's not over.
     
  3. Healer_Leona

    Healer_Leona Squirrel Wrangler of Fun & Games star 9 Staff Member Manager

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    Good that all the pieces fit together for Ben!

     
  4. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Great teamwork with those three!!! =D= :D Glad they got Koo too. :)
     
  5. PHGS_Weyr

    PHGS_Weyr Jedi Padawan star 4

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    great as always thanks for the pm
     
  6. jedimasterjsa

    jedimasterjsa Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Wow, this is a really good story! I just barely stumbled upon it this morning and couldn't stop reading until I had finished. If you're still doing a PM list, could you add me too, please?
    Thank you
     
  7. Darth_Marrs

    Darth_Marrs Jedi Knight star 4

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    On the surface it does seem easy. But this is Kidan we're talking about--nothing is ever that easy.
     
  8. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Vadey looks up.

    Waits for other shoe to drop.

    [face_worried]
     
  9. Draconarius

    Draconarius Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    True, that. You seem to be developing a bit of a reputation, Kidan!
     
  10. Ice1605

    Ice1605 Jedi Master star 1

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    I don't see anything being simple in this story, least of all this kidnapping case (but of course, that is why I love this story). Sorry for lurking for a while! Great chapter, like always.
     
  11. Kidan

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    Killik_Twilight
    Seems like there should be something more behind this. That almost seemed too easy.
    it did? [face_thinking] not everything is going to be too bland



    Draconarius
    Well, that was pretty easy... I have the strangest feeling it's not over.
    heh... seems that folks expect everything to be hard for poor Ben...




    Healer_Leona
    Good that all the pieces fit together for Ben!
    aye! it works :D




    Jade_eyes
    Great teamwork with those three!!! =D= :D Glad they got Koo too. :)
    aye!




    PHGS_Weyr
    great as always thanks for the pm
    glad you enjoyed it!




    jedimasterjsa
    Wow, this is a really good story! I just barely stumbled upon it this morning and couldn't stop reading until I had finished. If you're still doing a PM list, could you add me too, please?
    Thanks! glad you're enjoying it, and it'llbea pleasure to add you to the list

    Thank you
    thank you!




    Darth_Marrs
    On the surface it does seem easy. But this is Kidan we're talking about--nothing is ever that easy.
    [face_laugh] I think folks are starting to give me a bit too much credit ;)




    VaderLVR64
    Vadey looks up.

    Waits for other shoe to drop.

    [face_worried]

    but I just spent a decent amount of money on those shoes.... I'm not going to drop them on the ground




    Draconarius
    True, that. You seem to be developing a bit of a reputation, Kidan!
    heh, it does appear that way...



    Ice1605
    I don't see anything being simple in this story, least of all this kidnapping case (but of course, that is why I love this story). Sorry for lurking for a while! Great chapter, like always.
    now, now... sometimes things may be simple, just as a break for our heroes ;) thanks for reading!


     
  12. Kidan

    Kidan TFN EU Staff star 5 VIP

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    After a long, uneventful ride, we were separated and pushed into interrogation cells. Mine was a moderately sized room, with a one-way transparent window, a large metal table bolted onto the floor and two plastic, non-conform chairs.

    It was as unappealing room as possible, one designed to affront the sensibilities as wide of a range of beings as possible.

    I could feel the girls' Force presences. Their emotions were cold, black stains on the Force. A mixture of anger, frustration and impatience. They worried me a bit, but after a wait of two hours, I was less concerned about them, and more about what was going to happen. As the door opened, I brought my focus back to the here and now.

    The being that entered through the door was another Chadra-fan. The diminutive alien laid a datapad onto the desk, as well as a folder thick with flimsiplast documents. He looked at his datapad for a moment, before focusing on me.

    "Well, Mr. Skywalker, it seems that you have a problem."

    I arched an eyebrow at that. As far as I was aware, I didn't have any problems at all. "And how do I have a problem?"

    "Well, first there's the breaking and entering at the academy, the destruction of private property, and accosting Administrator Koo. Oh, yes, and I can't forget the counterfeit identifications."

    I chuckled. "Now I know you're just reaching. I don't carry any counterfeit identities."

    "So you're Ben Whitesun?"

    "No, I am Ben Skywalker, but that doesn't make those identities counterfeit."

    I felt a twinge in the Force from Seha, and looked off to my right where I could feel her presence. My danger sense suddenly shifted into overdrive.

    "We'll see," the interrogator replied, as he consulted his notes again. "Tell me again, why you accosted Administrator Koo?"

    i sighed, and leaned back slightly in my chair. I knew he knew all of this. I also knew that he was hoping that my story would change. "He was using them as navigation computers in order that he could find that legendary treasure that the school's founder had hidden."

    "See, this is what I don't understand. Why wouldn't he just use his ship's navicomp?"

    I laughed. "If you're trying to trick me, you've got to work harder than that. As planetary security you should be aware that all Navicomps are required to record the destinations that they travel to."

    I fought to keep a frown off my face as Seha's Force presence twinged again.

    "That's interesting, as the Investigators noticed that yours lacks that particular feature."

    "And I'm sure that you noticed I have an Official Variance signed off by both the Director of Intelligence and the Jedi. Order."

    The Chadra-fan grunted and opened up the folder as that twinge in the Force shifted to an inferno.

    I focused on the interrogator, knowing that whatever was coming, was nearly here. "So, tell me why you're protecting Administrator Koo's abuse of those two girls?"

    The Chadra-fan immediately started sputtering. "I-I resent the impli-"

    "Enough!" I interrupted, as I pushed back in my chair.

    The Chadra-fan's eyes widened at my sudden movement. Just as a blast of red plasma erupted through the one-way transparisteel slashing through where I had just been.

    I felt a feral grin come to my face. "You resent the implications, huh?"

    The Chadra-fan's eyes widened, and I flicked my fingers at him, sending him tumbling against the wall. Hard enough for his body to leave an imprint.

    Then the Force wailed and Seha's Force presence erupted in pain.

    Growling, I reached out with the Force and grabbed the being on the far side of the mirror. The one who had taken a potshot at me. Once I had him, I pulled him to me.

    The Nikto arrived on my side of the mirror unconscious and sporting a dozen wounds bleeding freely. I dropped him, and then turned my attention to the door. With another flick of the Force it was off its hinges and I was running down the hall.

    I turned a corner and saw two stormtroopers of all things, in dark, reddish armor, standing at the end of the hallway by the lift. One was carrying Seha.

    The other one opened up with his
     
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  13. Draconarius

    Draconarius Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    FIRST!

    See, I told you it wasn't going to be so easy.

    So the conspiracy goes a little deeper than Ben guessed. I hope they can get to Seha in time... I doubt those stormtroopers are planning on escorting her back to the temple. [face_worried]
     
  14. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Seha [face_worried] I see Jysella doesn't wanna give Ben much of a break yet [face_thinking] [face_frustrated]
     
  15. Darth_Marrs

    Darth_Marrs Jedi Knight star 4

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    I enjoyed the scene with the guards and the lightsaber. GOod job as always.
     
  16. jedimasterjsa

    jedimasterjsa Jedi Youngling star 1

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    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    This part with the idiots and the lightsabers was soooooooo funny!!! I can totally imagine a couple idiot guys playing with some lightsabers, thinking it's way cool, and then chopping something off. (Who am I kidding? If I ever got a hold of a lightsaber, I would probably be the one to cut something off myself!! ;))
     
  17. Killik_Twilight

    Killik_Twilight Jedi Master star 4

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    Haha. Poor Ben. Jys doesn't believe in giving him a break, apparently. Not that she doesn't have a good reason...

    KT
     
  18. PHGS_Weyr

    PHGS_Weyr Jedi Padawan star 4

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    sliced off leg lol

    thanks for the pm
     
  19. Healer_Leona

    Healer_Leona Squirrel Wrangler of Fun & Games star 9 Staff Member Manager

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    I feel bad for Ben as well. :(

    I can't believe I chuckled at someone losing their leg. [face_blush]
     
  20. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Loved it! I can't wait for the next update. :p

    =D=
     
  21. jadesabre75

    jadesabre75 Jedi Knight star 4

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    I swear, Ben could find trouble if he was the only person on a moon rock for thousands of miles. *shakes head*. I'm finally caught up and let me tell you this story just keeps getting better and better! I'm waiting for the girls to kick his butt sometime in the near future too. Just because they can! Excellent job my friend!
     
  22. SilverWolf77

    SilverWolf77 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    I haven't been on here for forever..
    And when I do, I find many pms!!
    Now I have to go back and check them all....
    Wow, when I first read that I was thinking "that was way too easy"...
    But of course, now it gets complicated!!:rolleyes:
    Ben and Jys are still fighting...I can't wait for more one them, too!!
    Thanks for all the pms!!
    Can't wait for more!!

    ~SW[face_peace]
     
  23. Allana_Djo_Solo

    Allana_Djo_Solo Jedi Youngling star 1

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    picks it up and dusts it off any hope for more?
     
  24. Draconarius

    Draconarius Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Will it improve our odds if I help with the dusting? :D
     
  25. Allana_Djo_Solo

    Allana_Djo_Solo Jedi Youngling star 1

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    it might help continues to dust
     
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