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Saga I Won't Say (I'm In Love) Ani/Ami songfic

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by diamond_pony2002, Feb 19, 2004.

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  1. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Nov 6, 2002
    Title: I Won?t Say (I?m In Love)

    Author: diamond_pony2002

    Summary: Padmé tries to deny her feelings for Anakin.

    Disclaimers: I don?t own them and I never will, sadly. They all belong to Mr. Lucas :-(
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    If there?s a prize for rotten judgment
    I guess I?ve already won that.
    No man is worth the aggravation
    That?s ancient history, been there, done that!


    Her mind spoke these words to her. Every night since she had seen Anakin again, her feelings grew more strongly. No! She couldn?t fall in love! He was five years younger than her, for cripes? sake! And he was a padawan! How would that look to her people? They would think she was a pervert! Plus, their ranks just didn?t match up. But?

    Who'd'ya think you're kiddin'
    He's the Earth and heaven to you
    Try to keep it hidden
    Honey, we can see right through you
    Girl, ya can't conceal it
    We know how ya feel and
    Who you're thinking of


    ?Her heart spoke these words. It was like there were muses in her heart telling her one thing, and muses in her mind telling her another. She wanted to follow her heart, but if she did, it could mean the end of life on Naboo. She couldn?t just let her people die because of a silly crush. It?s just that?

    No chance, no way
    I won't say it, no, no


    Padmé could hear her mind screaming these words at her. What should she do? Her mother would know, but she wasn?t here and it was too late to call. So, she tried to work it out on her own, until her heart spoke.

    You swoon, you sigh
    Why deny it, uh-oh


    No! Stop! Padmé put her hands over her ears and started to sob as the voices got louder and louder. It became so intense that she cried out.

    It's too cliché
    I won't say I'm in love
    I thought my heart had learned its lesson
    It feels so good when you start out
    My head is screaming get a grip, girl
    Unless you're dying to cry your heart out
    Oh


    ?Somebody help me!? she thought and collapsed on the floor.

    You keep on denying
    Who you are and how you're feeling
    Baby, we're not buying
    Hon, we saw ya hit the ceiling
    Face it like a grown-up
    When ya gonna own up
    That ya got, got, got it bad


    Through all this pain and misery, Padmé managed a smile at the thought of Anakin, but quickly squashed down the feelings.

    No chance, no way
    I won't say it, no, no


    But no matter how hard she tried, it came back a little.

    Give up, give in
    Check the grin you're in love


    Not happening! Not happening! It can?t be!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    This scene won't play,
    I won't say I'm in love


    Her heart wouldn?t give up, though.

    You're doin flips read our lips
    You're in love


    ?No! I can?t be in love! I just can?t!? Padmé cried in her mind and tears ran down her face.

    You're way off base
    I won't say it
    Get off my case
    I won't say it


    Her mind was denying it, but not her heart, and it was starting to sound convincing.

    Girl, don't be proud
    It's O.K. you're in love


    Just then, Anakin came dashing through the door after hearing her cries and knelt beside her on the floor. He cradled her in his arms while Obi-Wan stood behind them, monitoring them.

    ?Are you all right, Padmé?? Anakin asked with worry in his voice, but Padmé could see the relief and love in his eyes. She smiled.

    ?I?m fine. Just?a cramp,? she lied.

    Oh
    At least out loud,
    I won't say I'm in love

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    THE END
     
  2. CrystalKenobi

    CrystalKenobi Jedi Master star 4

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    Jul 31, 2003
    Another excellent story.
     
  3. anakin_girl

    anakin_girl Jedi Knight star 6

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    Oct 8, 2000
  4. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Nov 6, 2002
  5. Boom7o7

    Boom7o7 Jedi Youngling

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    Dec 9, 2003
    Very cool, I liked the story ;)

    P.S. I'll see you tommorow
     
  6. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Nov 6, 2002
    Thanx Hunter! Glad ya liked it!
     
  7. Fate

    Fate Jedi Master star 3

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    Apr 22, 2003
    Oh, how adorable! [face_love] (I love Hercules, and Megara is one of my favorite heroines of all time. :)) My favorite line in the song is "My head is screaming, 'Get a grip, girl - unless you're dying to cry your heart out.'" I saw the whole scene in my mind, and I loved it. ;)

    Great job, d_p. :)
     
  8. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Nov 6, 2002
    Really?! That's my favorite part too! OH YOUR COOL!!!!!
     
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