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Icy Frostings of the Birthday Cake (AU Obi Vignette)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Aunecah_Skywalker, Feb 22, 2003.

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  1. Aunecah_Skywalker

    Aunecah_Skywalker Jedi Knight star 5

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    *Hands Nyght a kerchief* :)

    Aunecah
     
  2. Lady_Kandriya

    Lady_Kandriya Jedi Youngling star 1

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  3. Aunecah_Skywalker

    Aunecah_Skywalker Jedi Knight star 5

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  4. obi_ew

    obi_ew Jedi Master star 5

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    :( * wanders into the Ewan Shrine .Shuts the door softly.Muffled sobs can be heard *
     
  5. Lady_Kandriya

    Lady_Kandriya Jedi Youngling star 1

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  6. Shaindl

    Shaindl Jedi Master star 4

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    That's just so...so...so...sad.

    Beautiful work, Aunecah. Wonderful emotions.

    And thank you for making me ruin my keyboard with the tears... :D

    Shaindl
     
  7. Aunecah_Skywalker

    Aunecah_Skywalker Jedi Knight star 5

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    Thanks guys and girls. :)

    And Shaindl - You're quit welcome. :D

    Aunecah
     
  8. Hail_Jaina

    Hail_Jaina Jedi Youngling star 2

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    I usually don't read obiwan stories....but this was so sad and good. The angst was very well written. I might have to read your other obi fics :)
     
  9. Lurkalidth

    Lurkalidth Jedi Youngling star 2

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    What a poignant piece! There are a lot of excellent series here (y'all've turned me into a fanfic junkie), but I really like the shorter pieces, like this one: literary decisions (word choices, internal architecture, etc.) play a much more pivotal role.

    You do an excellent job at creating a sense of mood (here *and* in Time and Again -- that series makes me cry for poor Obi; Angst really hurts) and painting the characters.

    Very nicely done! I look forward to more of these vignettes in future. :)
     
  10. Aunecah_Skywalker

    Aunecah_Skywalker Jedi Knight star 5

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    Thanks guys! [face_blush]

    Aunecah
     
  11. Aunecah_Skywalker

    Aunecah_Skywalker Jedi Knight star 5

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  12. Lady_Kandriya

    Lady_Kandriya Jedi Youngling star 1

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  13. Lady_Kandriya

    Lady_Kandriya Jedi Youngling star 1

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    UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP
     
  14. Lady_Kandriya

    Lady_Kandriya Jedi Youngling star 1

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    random up!
     
  15. Aunecah_Skywalker

    Aunecah_Skywalker Jedi Knight star 5

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    Thanks for the numerous ups, Kandriya. :D Well, this probably is the last time I'll ever visit this thread. So, just saying thanks!

    Aunecah
     
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