Icy Frostings of the Birthday Cake (AU Obi Vignette)

*Hands Nyght a kerchief*

Aunecah

 

UP!

 

A little up.

 

* wanders into the Ewan Shrine .Shuts the door softly.Muffled sobs can be heard *

 

UP!

 

That's just so...so...so...sad.

Beautiful work, Aunecah. Wonderful emotions.

And thank you for making me ruin my keyboard with the tears...

Shaindl

 

Thanks guys and girls.

And Shaindl - You're quit welcome.

Aunecah

 

I usually don't read obiwan stories....but this was so sad and good. The angst was very well written. I might have to read your other obi fics

 

What a poignant piece! There are a lot of excellent series here (y'all've turned me into a fanfic junkie), but I really like the shorter pieces, like this one: literary decisions (word choices, internal architecture, etc.) play a much more pivotal role.

You do an excellent job at creating a sense of mood (here *and* in Time and Again -- that series makes me cry for poor Obi; Angst really hurts) and painting the characters.

Very nicely done! I look forward to more of these vignettes in future.

 

Thanks guys!

Aunecah

 

Up.

 

Up

 

UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP

 

random up!

 

Thanks for the numerous ups, Kandriya. Well, this probably is the last time I'll ever visit this thread. So, just saying thanks!

Aunecah