Saga I'd Rather be Dead ~Updated 6/20/11

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That was perfect! I loved how you had them change back and forth.

However I think it a little cruel to end on a cliff hanger. *Pouts* Lol.

Oh and if anyone wants to read my companion story to these starting with Mal finding Kemi here is the link it's called Half Duplicity

 

HELINITH: Oh, relax, Ellen. I can't kill them off yet.

RAPHIRE: Yeah, I can't do that in Ardy's Log because she hasn't figured it out yet. But I always liked the thought of them arguing.

 

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oh good grief no... Not EARTH!!

 

*Snorts* Earth! Lol. This is going to be goooooood.

 

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Awwwww.

 

Wow. That was very different. Not what I was expecting at all. Very touching though. I wouldn't mind seeing more like this. Lol

 

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Very good! Someone should dig up her father and desacrate his body though.

I loved the Master apprentice conversation at the end though!

Bravo and keep up the posting spree!

 

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uh oh...

 

This story just keeps getting better! Loved the love triangle bit.

Can't wait for the next post. Bravo!

 

I read your Dear Diary Challenge story Ardy's Log a few days ago, so it was a real treat to read this story and compare it with Ardy's Log in terms of the relationships between characters and the events that occur to them. In particular, I started to get an idea of why Ardy considers Shyk Kenobi to be her Worst Enemy Ever?.

Hm, the gang's definitely having difficulties on planet earth. I wonder how they're going to earn money since their credits aren't recognised - any chance they'd put on a few street performances, or would that be too showy?

Would you please put me on your PM list? Thanks!

 

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$5000 for a song?! Ardy could become richer than even Jusik this way! Just kidding, I'm sure such a life is too...mundane for a Sith apprentice. I wonder if Antaris, Jusik and Guga'an will decide it's better to keep their mouths shut than let Mal know about their failure in following Ardy.

 

Lol. It's official. Jusik is a creeper.

Also I liked the Kemi/Xana. I would have enjoyed her kicking some of the guys asses but I'll survive.

And Ardy dancing provacatively. I think I could have seen that coming. Can't wait to see Mal's face when he finds out though.

Bravo!

 

She is in sooooooooooooo much trouble...

 

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Awwwwwwww.

 

Awww, I love the part where Ardy declared that Jusik's robes were perfect even though they were far too large for her. Glad everything's working out well for our gang right now. I wonder what problems they're going to encounter when they try to go home?

 

Ok. He's less of a creeper now.

Mmmmmmh. I could go for some of those waffles right now as well.

I think I will have to just pop some popcorn and watch supernatural instead tho.

Great post and Bravo!

 

Nice PaF reference. I have that song on my iPod too
And a party with movies and popcorn. Nice