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"If Fear Controlled Your Destiny" Luke gave in to hate, that led to the Dark Side! Dark Luke OT AU

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Obi-Zahn Kenobi, Apr 29, 2001.

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  1. jade_angel

    jade_angel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I find it hard to believe that a little runt and a half trained girl would be able to beat THREE darksiders.

    Sorry, just being sour after seeing Vader's ass kicked. It WAS a good post. Hope to see more. :D
     
  2. Obi-Zahn Kenobi

    Obi-Zahn Kenobi Force Ghost star 7

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    My original plan was for his *EDITED FOR PROFANITY* to get kicked. jade_angel, please don't use prfanity in my thread.
     
  3. MariahJade2

    MariahJade2 Former Fan Fiction Archive Editor star 5 VIP

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    Did Leia kill Mara, or did Luke charge her before she could do it?
     
  4. Obi-Zahn Kenobi

    Obi-Zahn Kenobi Force Ghost star 7

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    Oh, sorry, Luke charged before Leia could kill her. And Leia did a no-no.
     
  5. jade_angel

    jade_angel Jedi Padawan star 4

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  6. Spirit_of_Mine

    Spirit_of_Mine Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Troll speak is such a simple dialect, beautiful in its elegance.
    *beams*
    Or so Yoda will try to tell you...
    He makes you vulnerable to suggestion by forcing you to eat his disturbing gruel, then tries to get you to agree with his crazy notions.
    Trust me, I know.
    *shudders in memory*

    Vader should've won. :( Enjoyable all the same, though.
     
  7. jade_angel

    jade_angel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Spirit, you and I seem to have a habit of staying up too late. :D
     
  8. jade_angel

    jade_angel Jedi Padawan star 4

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  9. jedi_master_yoda7

    jedi_master_yoda7 Jedi Youngling star 2

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  10. Obi-Zahn Kenobi

    Obi-Zahn Kenobi Force Ghost star 7

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    Sorry about the wait, here it is!


    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Luke was low in the swamp. Using the Force to keep
    himself alive without oxygen he had survived. His
    father was floating to the top, he had easily stayed
    under for so long because of his internal life support
    system. He jumped through the water quickly rising
    to the surface. He ran to Mara hoping she was still
    alive.

    "Mara?" She looked up at him groggily, then her head
    fell back down.

    "We have to get you to sickbay, but for now you?ll be fine."

    She had no doubt that Skywalker had saved her life.
    She was extremely grateful. She fell unconscious,
    again.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    The shuttle that Yoda and Leia had ?borrowed?, had
    left Dagobah minutes ago. They were now approaching
    the Executor. She was still feeling guilty about what
    she had almost done to the woman. Her master would
    scold her later. Then the ship hailed them.

    "Lord Vader," The green suited man began. "What!
    Who are you. Why have you stolen-!" Yoda cut him
    off saying. "Lord Vader I am, for Coruscant were are
    going. See the Emperor we must." Admiral Piett said,

    "Yes M?Lord." Turning to face an officer he said,
    "Cancel the order, Lord Vader and company will
    leave for Coruscant at once."

    Leia breathed a sigh of relief ?At least that?s over.?
    Her master turned to face her,

    "Into your hate you gave, to the Dark Side it leads.
    And to the Dark Side if you go, Dominate your
    destiny it will, forever."

    "Yes master Yoda." She said, wearily.

    "Serious it is, your father and brother it has taken.
    Take you it can. The cave, remember your vision
    in the cave."

    "Yes master." She punched in coordinates for
    hyperspace. The starlines lengthened and
    disappeared into the blue tunnel of
    hyperspace.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Feedback?
     
  11. jade_angel

    jade_angel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Yoda impersonating Vader???!!! NO! Yoda can't be Vader, that little green midget, I'd like to kick his little bugger >edited profanity< all the way to Mardi Gras. And he's going to be in charge of the Executor? The glory of the Empire??? NOOOOO!!!

    Good postings. :D
     
  12. jedi_master_yoda7

    jedi_master_yoda7 Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Good post! Yoda impersonating Vader?!
     
  13. Obi-Zahn Kenobi

    Obi-Zahn Kenobi Force Ghost star 7

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    Admiral Piett is not weak-mided, it's just that Yoda's is so much better at mind tricks than anyone else.
     
  14. MariahJade2

    MariahJade2 Former Fan Fiction Archive Editor star 5 VIP

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    Yoda and Vader, twins seperated at birth.
    He may be a Jedi Master but I still can't believe he pulled that off. :)
     
  15. jade_angel

    jade_angel Jedi Padawan star 4

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  16. psychoengine

    psychoengine Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Hey, Obi-Zahn...

    I like yer story so far, sho nuff.

    But here's a really minor thing... I can't imagine Beru pitying Luke. At least not as far as my take on the character goes. But I like the looks at the past!!

    Doug
     
  17. Obi-Zahn Kenobi

    Obi-Zahn Kenobi Force Ghost star 7

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    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Meanwhile, on Dagobah, Luke and Vader were anxiously
    awaiting the rescue flight. Luke angrily said,

    "When will they be here!"

    "Soon enough, I suspect Yoda has performed foul-play.
    I shall bring a shuttle down, and a medical team."

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    In the Executor?s sickbay, a medical team assembled
    for an unknown reason then walked to the shuttlebay.
    On the way a pilot joined them and they stole a shuttle,
    and headed for the planet. On the comm system the
    Admiral Piett threatened them.

    "Shuttle Tydirium, turn around immediately. Or we
    will be forced to open fire."

    There was only, silence on the other end as the ship
    shot into the planet at high velocity.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    The shuttle landed a few minutes later where Luke and
    Vader awaited them, the team walked out puzzled by the
    surroundings.

    "See to her wounds and load her on the ship." Vader
    ordered angrily.

    "Yes Lord Vader." The aide hurried over to Mara and
    placed a syntheflesh patch on her stomach. She groaned
    as they rushed her into the shuttle. Luke and Vader
    followed.

    "Took them long enough." Luke stated angrily.

    "Your.. not the one with the lightsaber? wound though."
    Mara pointed out, drawing on all her strength to force
    (No pun intended.) it out.

    Luke was silent for the flight.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Vader was stalking the bridge when Admiral Piett
    hurried up to him and said,

    "The Emperor commands that you make contact
    with him immediately."

    "Transfer it to my personal chambers."

    "Yes M?Lord"

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Read it.
     
  18. Luke'sryb

    Luke'sryb Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Sheesh!!

    Its about time you got Luke, Mara and Daddy Vader off Dagobah...now what's next. I hope Luke, Daddy Vader, Mara and Leia and Yoda aren't on the same ship. MORE PLEASE! Just don't leave us hanging for so long over a muddy planet! [face_mischief]
     
  19. jade_angel

    jade_angel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Finally you post! Come on my dark little Lukie, kill that green bugger of a Yoda. :D And turn your sister to the darkside. Heheheh

    Sorry, too much darkside in a can.
     
  20. MariahJade2

    MariahJade2 Former Fan Fiction Archive Editor star 5 VIP

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    Dagobah makes me sticky, glad they got
    out of there. More.
     
  21. Luke'sryb

    Luke'sryb Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Hey is Yoda out of his mind? He can't respond to the Emperor! Ol Palpy will spot him right off. Besides Vader has a password whenever he addresses the Emperor and Old Greenie doesn't know it. Also he and Leia best make tracks out of there, cause Vader and Lukie and Mara are on their way back to the ship. Talk about being caught between a rock and a hard place. Sheesh.....I LOVE IT!

    MORE PLEASE!! :p
     
  22. jade_angel

    jade_angel Jedi Padawan star 4

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  23. Obi-Zahn Kenobi

    Obi-Zahn Kenobi Force Ghost star 7

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    I think I'm gonna lock this and do a repost with revisions, sorry. No more for a few days and this thread will be kaputed by me.
     
  24. Obi-Zahn Kenobi

    Obi-Zahn Kenobi Force Ghost star 7

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    This has been moved to here. So this thread will be kept open for readers to find the other one.
     
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