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Saga I'll Be Home (A/P, Holiday Themed) Thank You! Farewell, AH!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by AnakinsFavorite, Dec 12, 2006.

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  1. AnakinsFavorite

    AnakinsFavorite Jedi Knight star 5

    Apr 10, 2006
    Title: I'll Be Home
    Authors: AnakinsFavorite and Anakin_Heartbreaker
    Characters: Anakin Skywalker, Padmé, Luke, Leia, See Threepio
    Era: Post ROTS?
    Summary: This is our joint attempt at a winter themed fic! Anakin returns home to find that the twins are sick. We?d say more, but that would just ruin the fun of it all!
    Disclaimer: SW belongs to George Lucas- we?re just two authors having some fun.

    I'll Be Home

    The splendiferous magnanimous rays of the burgeoning Naboo sun boisterously illuminated his indestructible cerulean orbs whilst he beguilingly watched its majestic virtuousness ubiquitously bathe the heavens with its golden ambience. Anakin?s statuesque frame unswervingly stood upon the edge of a snowy mountainous terrain, and gratifyingly absorbed the therapeutic tranquility of the peaceful planet, as his roguish mane, obstinately undulated over his handsome face. The Force surged through his sculpted body, whilst he meticulously excavated the beautiful lake below? his heart assiduously pounded within his pectorals.

    He was home.

    An infectious smile masked Anakin?s lean features- after triumphing over the numerous trials and tribulations for eight arduous years, the war was finally over. The perpetually nurturing love of his family, eradicated the tumultuously parasitic tendrils of the dark side, which had loomed over him. Skywalker tensed the sinewy tendons in his muscular torso; an intoxicating feeling avalanched down his vertebrae, The Chosen One had fulfilled his destiny?


    Anakin gasped, as he felt both his arms synchronously gravitate to the rocky ground. His passionate blue eyes were ignited with eternal love- Luke and Leia adorably clung to his muscular arms and innocently stared at their father, begging him to satisfy their insatiable thirst for his love.

    ?Luke? Leia...? Anakin reciprocated with an irresistible smile. ?What are you two doing up here?? he questioned inquisitively. ?How did you-? The image of the twins disappeared.

    ?-Know that you where here?? Padme?s harmonic voice instantaneously bludgeoned Anakin?s loving heart; he could feel his pulse accelerate at an extortionate rate. Her adhering, benevolent orbs captivated his every essence, as her smile articulately brought him into acquiescence.

    ?Padmé?? Anakin just could not take his eyes off her incomparable beauty, the golden haze of the majestic sun, vibrantly bounced of her superlative chocolate curls, whilst she steadily approached.

    ?The war is over Anakin, and the Jedi have been declared the saviors of the Republic,? Padmé stated. ?I knew that my handsome Knight would be returning to my arms.?

    ?But how did you know that I was here?? Anakin asked bewildered.

    ?Anakin? you?ve been standing here for several hours now,? Padmé argued. ?Don?t you think that the twins would have sensed you by now? They?ve being trying to reach you through the Force, and it seems they?ve been successful. I?m very annoyed with you.? Padmé folded her lean arms around her delicate waist.

    ?Why?? Anakin asked innocently.

    ?Luke and Leia have been sick and should be quietly resting in bed, but when their father is standing like a statue on the edge of this high altitude and not coming straight home like he should? it is a little difficult to keep them restrained.? Padmé flared her nostrils.

    ?I was just watching the sun? that?s all. It?s really beautiful.? Anakin replied.

    ?You?re not making me jealous aren?t you?? Padmé asked whilst she mischievously bit her crimson lip. ?I can get very possessive, you know.? The adorable senator teasingly moved her mouth closer towards her husband.

    Anakin?s heart teetered upon seizure- he was aching to savor the taste of her delectable pouting lips.

    ?The twins are waiting?? Padmé purred with an impish look that sent him pouting.


    After returning home from a long tour in the Outer Rim territories, Anakin Skywalker could honestly say that he was glad to be home. The little
  2. VA_Parky

    VA_Parky Jedi Padawan star 4

    Aug 10, 2005
    Hey! :confused: Where did the mushy fic go? *peeks under desk, peers around corner*

    Wow! You two certainly pulled the rug out from under me! It never occurred to me that Vader could have been dreaming... *sniffle* How bittersweet!

    Loved it! Happy Holidays, you two! [:D]
  3. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Feb 5, 2004
    Excellent! Just my kind of story! [face_devil] =D=
  4. CrazyAni

    CrazyAni Jedi Master star 4

    Feb 23, 2006
    :eek: :eek: :eek: was so mushy, and good, and funny, and adorable! *pouts*

    You two are evil, evil geniouses!! To shake the earth under my feet just like that?!

    It had never occured to me that Vader could have been dreaming, especially about the twins he didn't know about.

    A murderous plot twist, awesome descriptions and vocabulary that not even my dictionary doesn't know. :D

    =D= =D= =D=

  5. EquestrianJedi07

    EquestrianJedi07 Jedi Padawan star 4

    Mar 19, 2006
    You two... gosh, you're sneaky [face_mischief]

    Great job! =D=
  6. Gizzi1213

    Gizzi1213 Jedi Youngling star 1

    Jan 7, 2006
    That was certainly an unexpected surprise there at the end. I fell for it completely. Great job!!

    PS: Who swallowed the dictionary??
  7. Jade_Max

    Jade_Max Jedi Master star 5

    Jun 28, 2002

    *laughs* That'd be Heartbreaker *grin* He said so in an interview on the A/P thread recently. Adds a nice touch, yes?

    This was very well done guys... the lavish use of the obsure and diverse vocbulary was excellent... And I never had to reach for my dictionary once!

    Your plot was evil, just diabolical - and perfectly executed. A marvelous story.
  8. HandmaidenVeme

    HandmaidenVeme Jedi Padawan star 4

    Jun 28, 2004
    Surprise post!!!

    You two took me on a mush filled rollercoaster ride and then slammed me into a brick wall!

    It was great!!!!!!
  9. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Jul 26, 2005
    That was a cruel, cruel twist!

    [face_shame_on_you] [face_shame_on_you] [face_shame_on_you] [face_shame_on_you]

    Loved the dream, though. Very sweet.

    Great job on this

    =D= =D= =D= =D= =D=
  10. Star_Angel

    Star_Angel Jedi Padawan star 4

    Jan 18, 2006
    From the first words, I started to move closer and closer to the screen and I didn?t even realise it until I finished reading. This was amazing, although, I don?t know why I?m so surprised. I loved this, amazing job as always guys.

    =D= =D= =D=
  11. Amidala66

    Amidala66 Jedi Padawan star 4

    Jul 14, 2005
    Just hit me with a 2 by 4 at the end.... I certainly didn't see that ending coming. That's one of the things that made this so great.

    Plus two of my faves collaborating on the same story.:)

    I enjoyed this immensely.:*
  12. Anakin_Heartbreaker

    Anakin_Heartbreaker Jedi Master star 4

    Sep 24, 2004
    Hi everyone - We basically did not know what genre to write, so...we decided to do ALL of them in one! LOL!!!
  13. michaellover

    michaellover Jedi Youngling star 3

    May 30, 2005
    Hey! where did the mush went to??:_| I liked it!
  14. queenberuthiel

    queenberuthiel Jedi Youngling star 1

    Oct 30, 2005
    [face_laugh] I love this paragraph. Anakin thinks very highly of himself.

    Loved it.
  15. AnakinsFavorite

    AnakinsFavorite Jedi Knight star 5

    Apr 10, 2006
    Author Replies:

    *looks around confused too and scratches head* I think AH ate it? Hee.. did you expect anything less evil from us???

    VaderLVR64: Actually, I had you in mind when typing this up? call it sweet revenge!

    CrazyAni: Hee! Between us two, AH and I enjoyed reading everyone?s reactions to this! Thank AH for the vocab- you can tell which of us wrote what parts!

    EquestrianJedi07: And we know you like it! Thanx for reading!

    Gizzi1213: I wasn?t sure if it was going to work? but it did. Oh, and it was AH who swallowed the dictionary? I have the vocabulary of a delinquent eighth-grader.

    Jade_Max: His unique writing style is certainly? well, it adds a lot of flavor to any fic! I like using big words, but I personally hate dictionaries, so I keep it to a minimum (hee? I couldn?t spell the last word there!) Thank you for reading and your support!

    HandmaidenVeme: Somehow, I think I got slammed into a brick wall myself! Reading it through, I know that I would have totally been fooled myself!

    KELIA: Hey, don?t you be shaking your fingers at us, young lady! You know you secretly liked it!

    Star_Angel: I know? sometimes I feel as if I?m absorbed into the computer. Thank you for reading!

    Amidala66: *picks up a 6 by 8* Thank you for the sweet words, my dear! It was a pleasure to? um? fool you all!

    michaellover: All good things pass in time, my friend!

    queenberuthiel: I have no comment to make on that, my dear! Glad you found it amusing!

    Once more, thank you for reading this little vig... we shall always miss AH!

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