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Beyond - Legends I'll Come With You

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by ThreadSketch, Aug 9, 2014.

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  1. ginchy

    ginchy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Poor Luke. I am reminded of scripture, actually. The saying that the Lord tests those that he loves the most (which I think comes from Hebrews 12:6: For whom the Lord loveth He chasteneth, and scourgeth every son whom He receiveth". I had to cheat and look that up. LOL) I'm just saying, the Force must really, really, REALLY love Luke.

    I just want to give him a hug! The poor guy. Poor Mara. They both need.... well, something. I can't wait to see where you go from here!
     
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  2. ThreadSketch

    ThreadSketch Jedi Master star 4

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    Well, the Force is just an impersonal energy field, so it just doesn't care. :p

    He's gonna get a swift Solo kick in the hiney first, LOL. Hugs later. ;)

    Even though it's a lot of mental work, I'm really enjoying working on the next portion, which is much longer than this little tidbit.
     
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  3. ThreadSketch

    ThreadSketch Jedi Master star 4

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    [Story removed.]
     
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  4. Jedi_Lover

    Jedi_Lover Chosen One star 5

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    Very nice! Luke needs to woo Mara Jade. He has an advantage...he doesn't have amnesia. So he knows everything about the woman. He knows every like and dislike. I wonder how long he can get away with being the perfect suitor before Mara gets suspicious? Lol!
     
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  5. ThreadSketch

    ThreadSketch Jedi Master star 4

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    There's someone else who knows everything that happened here too - though he's really good at keeping mum:

    [​IMG]

    [face_mischief]:p
     
  6. taramidala

    taramidala Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Awww, Scumbag Artoo! [face_laugh]

    This was lovely and perfect. Han was great. We need more Han/Luke bromance fic.
     
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    ThreadSketch Jedi Master star 4

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    This fic is also turning out to be sort of a little love letter to the Legends EU; I'm trying to sprinkle references all over it like Hansel and Gretel's pebble trail. Even though a lot of it was nuts, I'm just pretending it really all happened and the characters themselves take it in a tongue-in-cheek, slightly meta way. There was stuff here from The Han Solo Trilogy, Scoundrels, Luke Skywalker and the Shadows of Mindor, The Courtship of Princess Leia, Dark Empire, the Black Fleet Crisis, The New Rebellion, and the Corellian Trilogy.

    E-brownie points to anybody who can name the title of the song Luke dredged up here. :p
     
  8. Gemma

    Gemma Jedi Master star 4

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    I really enjoyed the conversation going back and forth -- Luke getting upset with ire and then Han talking him back down and then the up with the pep talk. Look forward to his next conversation with Mara.
     
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  9. Chyntuck

    Chyntuck Force Ghost star 5

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    Well, given your talent at writing Han's POV, I think you should write a fic titled "The Kid and the Redhead" after this - the whole L/M thing from Han's perspective ;)

    Seriously now, your characterization of Han rocks. Kudos!
     
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  10. Demendora

    Demendora Jedi Knight star 2

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    hell, yeah! That's Han Solo for you, Lukie! Only he can bring you back on earth of mortals like this. Maybe, that's why the Force dicided to show it's grandson the way of winning something without it's help. Like a lesson of life.
     
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  11. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    LOL loving the reviews so far and this update -- superb "voice" for Han you have here. =D= =D= Not just in the dialogue, ThreadSketch :cool: but in the inner musings and reactions. Bravo! [:D] [:D]

    P.S. The song came from CoPl -- and I think Threepio was the one who "invented" it. [face_rofl] :rolleyes:
     
  12. JadeLotus

    JadeLotus Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Fantastic chapter, and the relationship between Luke and Han is perfect. And of course, it's always nice to see "The Virtues of King Han Solo" trotted out for maximum comedy effect!

    Excellent =D=
     
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  13. ThreadSketch

    ThreadSketch Jedi Master star 4

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    Yeah, another upcoming instance of pain that'll work out for the better. ;)


    DON'T FEED THE BUNNIES, LOLZ. [face_laugh]

    He and Mara have a lot in common - namely, the ability to smack-talk sense into Luke. :p I'm glad Han sounded "right" here, both in his speech and thoughts. He's one of my thornier characters to write.

    I do prefer to write in dialect - I feel weird writing out complete, grammatically correct words or sentences for someone who has a very casual or accented way of speaking, even though most profic authors do that and it's usually fine.

    Bingo! :D Because of course, in my silliest level of head!canon - since Mark Hamill was the "host" body of Luke Skywalker, as he puts it - Luke knows he's capable of doing all sorts of wacky impersonations, but he doesn't do it often. :p Leia still doesn't believe that Yoda sounds the way he does when Luke imitates him, LOL.

    I can refer you to THIS. [face_rofl]

    He just wants to be wuuuuuuuuuuuuved. [face_worried]:_|:p
     
  14. JediMara77

    JediMara77 Force Ghost star 4

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    I'm a naughty lurker, but I'm really enjoying this fic. I remember another similar one to this on FFN that I loved, in which Luke loses his memory. I don't know what it is about the idea of one of them getting amnesia after Nirauan, but it always drags me in hook, line, and sinker. I loved all the little bits from Legends, and the Virtues of King Han Solo is always good for a laugh.
     
  15. ThreadSketch

    ThreadSketch Jedi Master star 4

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    I'm a fellow naughty lurker, so you're in good company. [face_blush];)

    I think I have a vague idea about that other fic you're talking about, and I may have read it; the premise sounds familiar. I didn't know this particular plot bunny was an L/M magnet - good thing it hit me, I guess! :p (I'm sorry again, Jedi_Lover, LOL.)

    I'll just come right out and say it - Mara's not going to get her memory back. It'll still be okay.

    I'd like to think The Virtues of King Han Solo went viral on the HoloNet and became the GFFA's version of TROLOLOLOLO. [face_laugh]
     
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  16. JediMara77

    JediMara77 Force Ghost star 4

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    Headcanon accepted!!!
     
  17. taramidala

    taramidala Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    You come back here and fix this, young lady. You come back here right now. :p

    I can't wait!! :D
     
  18. ThreadSketch

    ThreadSketch Jedi Master star 4

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    [face_dancing][face_mischief][face_dancing]


    Hey, like Han said, there's more than one way to forge a relationship. ;)

    And oh my pancakes, the beginning of Chapter 4 is just vomiting out of me, lol - I may update much sooner than I thought. Not that anyone's going to mind, I think...
     
  19. EGKenobi

    EGKenobi Jedi Master star 3

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    this is great! :)

    Please let me know when it's updated :)

    Thanks
     
  20. ginchy

    ginchy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    I like Han talking some sense into Luke. He's right. If Mara said yes to the proposal, then those feelings are somewhere under that very, very tough exterior. ...yeah, good luck, Luke. [face_rofl]
     
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  21. ThreadSketch

    ThreadSketch Jedi Master star 4

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    Thank you! I may use tags next time, since I can see who's regularly on board now.

    Better luck herding rancors. :p
     
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  22. EmeraldJediFire

    EmeraldJediFire Jedi Master star 4

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    Sorry that I haven't commented yet. I've been a bit of a lurker, but I wanted you to know i am following this one with great anticipation. Luke really sod need some sense talked into him. Depressed Luke is always hard to read in any circumstance.
     
  23. ThreadSketch

    ThreadSketch Jedi Master star 4

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    [Story removed.]
     
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  24. EmeraldJediFire

    EmeraldJediFire Jedi Master star 4

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    This is only the beginning for her and him...he'll wait though.
     
  25. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Terrific and emotionally intense =D= Mara's reactions were just what you would expect [face_thinking] @};-
     
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