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In the Arms of the Angel. (JA)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Jedi_KnightMariah, Nov 25, 2000.

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  1. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    It's only one post long but it takes place on the trip to the Temple between book #6 and #7.

    In the arms of the angel
    Fly away from here
    From the star-cold hotel room
    And the endlessness that you feel
    You are torn from the reckegde
    From your silent revory
    You're in the arms of the angel
    May you find some comfort here

    Qui-Gon Jinn heard a odd noise coming from the back of the ship. He looked back to see a small form of a body hunched over by a window. It was Obi-Wan Kenobi.
    The boy had been quiet the whole trip and now Qui-Gon could hear a sniffling noise.
    I should do something, Qui-Gon thought.

    No. Let the boy fend for himself. He left you, remember?

    But he doesn't deserve to fell so alone.

    Yes, he does! He betreyed you! Or are you trying to ignore that?

    Qui-Gon clenched his teeth together.

    Of course I'm not trying to ignore that fact! But he's back there alone feeling, who knows what!

    You're right. Go on.

    Qui-Gon got up from the cockpit and went back to where Obi-Wan was sitting.
    "Are you alright?" Qui-Gon asked quietly.

    "No," Obi-Wan answered flatly.

    "You miss her." It was a statment.

    "Yes," Obi-Wan replied, trying not to cry.

    Qui-Gon awkwardly put a arm around Obi-Wan's shoulders. "Ceseri is at peace now. She no longer has to worry of war."

    "I killed her!" Obi-Wan blurted suddenly. "Oh, Force, it was me!"

    Qui-Gon was taken aback by Obi-Wan's suddenly emotion.

    Of course, Jinn. He doesn't dare say a word to make you angry at him now.

    "There, there," Qui-Gon soothed the sobbing boy. "It wasn't your fault."

    "She wouldn't have come if it wasn't for me!" Obi-Wan cried. "Why did she come?"

    Qui-Gon though upon the answer. "Because she knew what would happen if some one didn't stop the fighting. She died a worriors' death."

    "I know," Obi-Wan said tentivly. "I still miss her though."

    "And you always will. It's the way of life," Qui-Gon explained. "Death makes it's mark on everyone. I don't believe there is one person who has never lost someone."

    Obi-Wan nodded.

    "Obi-Wan.....I forgive you for what happened. You let your heart decide what you wanted to do. It is very much like what happened to Xanatos and I," Qui-Gon said sadly. "I didn't listen to what the others said and I did the wring thing. I should have listened to those who were looking out for my best."

    "Are you saying I should have listened to you?" Coldly.

    Qui-Gon realized what Obi-Wan was saying. "Maybe you should have, or maybe it was the will of the Force that you stayed. Who are we to know?"

    "No one," Obi-Wan sniffled.

    "We aren't no one," Qui-Gon said with a small smile. "We just aren't the ones to know."

    Obi-Wan looked down. Qui-Gon could tell he was thinking that he said something wrong again.

    "So you forgive me?" Obi-Wan asked sheepishly.

    "Of course," Qui-Gon repsonded.

    "Do you....think Ceseri will forgive me for what I've done?"

    "She has no reason to be mad, in the first place, Obi-Wan," Qui-Gon reminded him. "Let it lie."

    Escaped tears slid down the boys' cheeks. "Yes, Master Jinn."

    Qui-Gon swallowed the lump in his throat. "I need to get back in the cockpit. We're almost to Corusant."

    Obi-Wan bowed his head.

    THE END.


    Sorry for the type-o's. Comments?
     
  2. Darth McClain

    Darth McClain Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    This is good!
     
  3. KADI-WAN_KENOBI

    KADI-WAN_KENOBI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Cool. I really liked it. :)
     
  4. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thanks, guys!
     
  5. jodiwent

    jodiwent Jedi Master star 4

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    Nice.

    Only one complaint, too short. :)
     
  6. Anika Skywalker

    Anika Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Good job, Mariah!
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    ~Ånika §kywalker
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  7. Rosemary

    Rosemary Jedi Youngling star 2

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    I agree ^_^
     
  8. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thanks again, guys!
     
  9. Julie

    Julie Moderator Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    That was very fulfilling! Please write more "should have been included in the books" scenes! :D
     
  10. Obi the Kid

    Obi the Kid Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Very very good!! I wish that could be in the JA books!!!
     
  11. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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  14. Tenel'Ka

    Tenel'Ka Jedi Youngling star 3

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    That was sooo good!!! I agree, it should have been in the JA books!
     
  15. JEDIMASTERYU

    JEDIMASTERYU Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Wonderful!! :)
     
  16. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thank you all for reading!
     
  17. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnd UP!
     
  18. jedi_master_gimpy

    jedi_master_gimpy Jedi Master star 4

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    Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnndd VERY NICE!!!! :D
     
  19. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnd thank you for commenting!
     
  20. jedi_master_gimpy

    jedi_master_gimpy Jedi Master star 4

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  21. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Read your PM's, gimpy. You'll find this story there. ;P
     
  22. imzadi

    imzadi Jedi Master star 4

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    I only found this now? Shocking! That was great! I really liked the interaction between them and also the way Qui-Gon was trying to convince himself. Thanks for sharing it with us!
     
  23. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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  25. snowbee-wan kenobi

    snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Very Good writing......please write more
     
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