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Saga 'In the Moonlight' (poem) Nominated for best poem

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Katana_Geldar, May 11, 2008.

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  1. Katana_Geldar

    Katana_Geldar Jedi Grand Master star 8

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    Mar 3, 2003
    Title: In the Moonlight
    Author: Katana_Geldar
    Genre: Poem, AU

    In the Moonlight

    The twins in bed,
    she sits by the window,
    resplendent in white
    and waits for his step
    on the garden path.

    The door opens,
    his long stride towards her,
    her cheek kissed
    and he continues without pause.
    She follows him, hopeful.

    How was your day? she asks
    He doesn?t hear her,
    the only sound is his shattered dreams.
    Let me help you, she says
    He sits down,
    staring at the hand that isn?t his.

    Isolated from the hearts that need him,
    silencing his memories,
    trying to forget himself.
    Yet she can do nothing
    as she was there.
    His choice was for her and for them.

    She goes to bed and he follows,
    yet there is a message for him,
    An old friend from another life.
    He ponders, considers it?
    Then deletes it without hearing.
     
  2. Katana_Geldar

    Katana_Geldar Jedi Grand Master star 8

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    Mar 3, 2003
    Upping this for the awards
     
  3. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Feb 5, 2004
    Beautiful. =D=
     
  4. Gina

    Gina Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Jun 3, 2003
    Just lovely! =D=

     
  5. Idrelle_Miocovani

    Idrelle_Miocovani Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Feb 5, 2005
  6. Alley_Skywalker

    Alley_Skywalker Jedi Master star 4

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    Sep 27, 2005
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