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Saga Into the shadows Ani/Obi/Qui-what if Qui hadn't made up with Obi and Obi Was killed

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Hananiah, Mar 19, 2003.

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  1. Hananiah

    Hananiah Jedi Master star 4

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    Jan 15, 2003
    Title: Into the shadows
    Summery: What if Qui Gon hadn't made up with Obi Wan and Maul had killed him
    Spoliers: Episode 1 and 2
    Disclaimer: I own nothing
    "Ben look out!" Anakin Skywalker yelled as he tried to block Count Dooku's blade, the Duke was strong and Anakin quickly lost sight of his friend. He blocked another set of blows, one grazing his arm as he tried to find Obi Wan Kenobi who was locked in battle with the tattoed sith Lord. Obi Wan didn't need any help, even though Obi Wan was twenty five years old, he was an expert with a saber, Anakin watched admirably as his friend kept the Sith at bay, watched as the tattoed face was no longer as cocky as before as he had to work to keep the Jedi at bay.

    Anakin pressed his saber against Dooku's fighting a battle of wills, he would suceed, he would make Master Qui Gon proud of him and he would make Dooku pay for all the Jedi he hd ruthlessly murdered, his family. The only family he had.
    He felt anger move through him and tamped down on it, he didn't want to be angry and have hatred run through him, he was a Jedi.
    Feeling strength return to him he renewed his fight, he fought with ferocity.

    That's when he heard it.
    Anakin turned watching Obi Wan falling to his knees, shock written on his face, Anakin couldn't see the end of the red lightsaber because it was embedded in the Jedi. Obi Wan's eyes were glazing over, the crystaline blue eyes slowly fading away. Anakin didn't know how his friend did it but Obi Wan found some reserve of power, the Jedi slammed his legs into the Sith Lord, toppling him and then breaking his neck. A disturbance in the force alerted Anakin to a new combatant.

    Yoda. The Jedi master stood bathed in light, a green lightsaber in his hands, Anakin backed of from Dooku, without breaking eye contact, but this was Yoda's fight not his.
    Anakin rushed to his friends side, he could feel Obi Wan's life force slipping he couldn't believe it, he couldn't let it happen, desperatly he reached into the force and tried to find something to stop Obi Wan dying. There was noth"Ben hold on please you have to hold on" Anakin commanded, trying to lift Obi Wan into his lap. The older Jedi shook his head "It's....It's......late......me......sorry...." Anakin couldnt bare to have Obi Wan talk that way, "Ben it's okay, we just need to get you some where warm"

    Obi Wan smiled at his friend, he looked past Anakin at something he couldn't see "Tell Qui Gon....I'm.....sorry"

    The force that had been so powerful here was suddenly and irrevocably smothered and died.

    TBC






     
  2. Arwen-Jade_Kenobi

    Arwen-Jade_Kenobi Jedi Knight star 5

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    Feb 9, 2002
    HE's DEAD???!!! [face_shocked]

    :_|

    Poor Ani!! And what about Qui when he hears this??

    More more more more more more!!
     
  3. Nic-Kan2344

    Nic-Kan2344 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Jan 12, 2003
    WHY DID HE HAVE TO DIE! WWWAAAAAAA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    PEACE OUT!
     
  4. diamond_pony2002

    diamond_pony2002 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Nov 6, 2002
    NOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OBI-WAN!!!!!!! YOU KILLED HIM!!!!!!!!!!! POOR ANAKIN!!!!!!
     
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