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Story Is it him or I(Poem)

Discussion in 'Non Star Wars Fan Fiction' started by MasterDillon, Mar 20, 2012.

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  1. MasterDillon

    MasterDillon Jedi Knight star 2

    Dec 28, 2010
    She always walks across the hall from me.

    I find my heart pounding in confusion.

    He pursuits her with a fiery tenacity.

    She flicks her hair beatifully when he enters the room.

    I am confused as to what is happening.

    Is she falling for him or me?

    She brushes past me slightly.

    I feel a tingling sensation.

    He walks with her in the hall holding her hand.

    I watch in utter astonishment and feel sorrow, and pain.

    Now I know the answer to my question,

    It is not her who has fallen for us,

    But it is I who has fallen for her.

    This is lovely, but we don't allow original fiction.
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