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" It's been a while" : a Ami/Ani Romance.10 years since TPM

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Jedi_Camy, Sep 4, 2002.

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  1. Monica_Skywalker

    Monica_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Awesome post! That girl better cool it of I'll come after her.

    *Ignites a blue lightsaber and begins to practice*

    I can't wait to see what comes next! :)
    ~*Monica*~
     
  2. Jazz_Skywalker

    Jazz_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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  3. Anakins_Baby_Girl

    Anakins_Baby_Girl Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Woah i can't believe how much i missed. Im so sorry! I haven't been online lately to tell the truth! Woah back up Sky who do you think you are messing with my man like that. Please stay away. No one can do that to my boy. Please believe it! If she does that again....... man i'll go crazy! Please post more soon I can not wait for some more!
     
  4. JediCami

    JediCami Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Thanx guys. You're awsome.

    UP!!
     
  5. DarthBreezy

    DarthBreezy Chosen One star 6

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    Taking time to peek in with a "great job!" :)
     
  6. JediCami

    JediCami Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Thanx DarthBreezy!!


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    ?So what was it that you wanted to tell me ?alone?? Or was it some thing you wanted to do?? Sabe was holding on to Obi-Wan?s hands smiling teasingly. He sighed and brushed his hand on her cheek, as if savoring her soft skin. He looked over her every single feature, as if afraid of forgetting it. She looked at him wondering. ?Obi, what is it??

    ?They?re sending me on a mission, to Tatooine.? She clasped his hand on her cheek, bringing it down. ?So, what do you mean, like now??

    ?Yes, I?m not going with you to Naboo, and I won?t be here when you come back.? He spoke the words softly, slowly afraid of hurting her.
    She frowned, backing away from him slowly. ?For how long??

    He stepped closer to her, trapping her between him and the wall. ?The least, a couple of months.?
    She looked down at her feet, not wanting him to see her tears. ?It won?t be long, I promise. When I come back, it will all be the same.? He placed his finger in her chin bringing her face closer to his. ?Please wait for me. Please.?
    She frowned. ?Of course I?ll wait for you Obi-wan, how can you even doubt it. I love you. I?ll wait forever if I have to, even if it breaks my heart.?
    He smiled and closed the space between their mouths, wrestling her tongue with his. He pulled away and reached into his pocket for a small black shiny box. He brought it up to her and click it open revealing a silver band with a beautiful sparkling heart shaped diamond.

    Sabe?s eyes swelled up with tears.
    ?Will you marry me?? His face was close to hers to feel her breath on him.
    ?Yes? She whimpered. He took the ring out of the box and slid it on her thin finger; it fit her and looked wonderful on her. She smiled and he lightly kissed her ever so softly, making it all more magical. He backed way and brought her in for a hug. ?Would it be okay if I escorted my ?fiancé? down to the ship??

    She offered her arm ?Of course.? flashing him a sad, yet happy smile. He locked his arm with hers and they both made their way to the main hanger.


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    I know its short, but its sweet.

    FEEDBACK!!!!
     
  7. Monica_Skywalker

    Monica_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Awwww, how sweet! [face_love]

    Superb post JediCami! :) I can't wait to see what happens! :)
     
  8. JediCami

    JediCami Jedi Youngling star 3

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  9. Queen_Sara

    Queen_Sara Jedi Master star 4

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    OMG Cami I'm so sorry it took me so long to get here! You should have told me you were writing this! It's awesome! I must be out of it if it took me this long to find an A/A lol.

    Great work, keep it UP!


    :) ~*^SARA^*~ :)
     
  10. JediCami

    JediCami Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Thanx EVERYONE

    i'll post after school tomorrow. I cnat tonight cuz i just finfished a huge project in 15 minutes and im kind of stressed. ;)

    ill post tomorrow promise!
     
  11. Monica_Skywalker

    Monica_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Yay, I can't wait! :)
    ~*Monica*~
     
  12. JediCami

    JediCami Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Todays my friends b-day. i dont know how i had time to post.

    Oh, i know.

    Because i never let my readers down!!!!!


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    Anakin ran as fast as the force allowed him to catch up with Padme. Once he reached the main hangar he found her standing alone waiting for him. He walked to her stepping in front of her. ?Sorry Milady.? He said gasping for breath.

    ?It?s ok.? She replied turning away form him.

    He looked at her in amazement. He walked around in front of her again. ?Are you mad??

    She looked at him eyes wide in shock. ?Nah, what would possibly make you think I am mad. Just because some beautiful girl comes flirting to my boyfriend and takes him away form me to talk ?privately? I should be mad?? she said sarcastically turning away from him again.

    He laughed at her jealousy. She turned her face to look at him hard. ?I don?t think it?s funny!? Anakin couldn?t stop laughing, as much as he tried he couldn?t. ?Anakin Skywalker, stop laughing this instant.? She ordered stomping her foot with an irritated tone.

    She got madder and redder every time he kept laughing. She was furious by now. ?Anakin, Force I hate you!? she yelled and ran up the ramp into the ship leaving Anakin by himself.

    He couldn?t believe Padme was jealous, she dint seem the type. And with SKY! He laughed in the back of his mind. Sky would be the last person he would ever set eyes on, actually, not even if she was the last person in the whole universe. He turned around to find his master walking towards him hand in hand with Sabe.

    ?Well, well, well, looks like your plan went as planned.? Ani said smiling to Obi-Wan winking at him.

    ?That?s right; you are looking at my fiancé, future Mrs. Kenobi.? He said full of pride which made Sabe blush.

    ?Congratulations.? He said hugging Sabe and his Master.

    Obi-wan cleared his throat. ?Ani do you mind, I want to say good by to Sabe.?
    Anakin smiled. ?Sure master, I?ll miss you too.? He said sarcastically which caused them all to laugh. ?I?ve got some things to settle with the senator so I?ll wait inside.? He started walking towards the ship.
    ?That?s right SPACEwalker leave us alone!? Yelled Sabe laughing.
    Anakin turned and pointed his finger at her. ?Its SKYwalker, remember the name, don?t forget it.? He said menacingly. Sabe laughed at turned back to obi-wan.

    ?When will be the day you two get along?? Obi-Wan said smiling.
    She smiled at hugged him resting her head on his chest. Obi-Wan smiled, Oh how her body fit perfectly under his. They were made for each other. The universe intended it that way. She smiled against his chest not wanting to pull apart, fearing the next couple of months without him. Reluctantly she pulled away and gazed into his eyes. ?You better come back this time Jedi; there won?t be a third chance.? She said seriously.
    He stroked her cheek, ?Nothing can keep me away form you that long now.? Kissing her forehead he mumbled ?I love you Sabe.? She smiled wide and put her hands around his neck and brought him down for a long passionate kiss, savoring his love, scent, taste, his everything. It would be the last time she got to kiss those soft lips for a long time. ?Now remember, you?re my fiancée, so whenever you see another man, remember I love you and I?m coming back to you soon.? He whispered.

    ?I could never forget something that important.? She kissed him one last time and hugged him tightly. He pulled away noticing a small tear on her cheek, and kissed it away. She kissed him on the cheek and walked from him towards the ramp. Reaching the door, she turned one last time to wave him good-bye, and finally entering the ship.





    The trip to Naboo would take 24 hours exactly, which meant they would reach Theed at 1800 hours. Anakin was in charge of piloting the ship. Padme was locked in her room and so was Sabe. Once already in Hyperspace, Anakin left the cockpit and went to knock in Padme?s door. ?Honey, can I come in?? He yelled to her.

    The door opened and he walked in to Padme who was lying on the
     
  13. JediCami

    JediCami Jedi Youngling star 3

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    wow its really crowded in here...not!
    UP!!!!!
     
  14. Queen_Sara

    Queen_Sara Jedi Master star 4

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    That was freat Cami! I'm still here! Awww Ani can just fix any problem with flattery and a kiss. And watch out for Padmé! She does bite! Lol

    Great work keep it UP!


    :) ~*^SARA^*~ :)
     
  15. JediCami

    JediCami Jedi Youngling star 3

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    thanx Queen_Sara

    UP!!!!
     
  16. JediCami

    JediCami Jedi Youngling star 3

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    uping my own story....come on you guys read!!!!!!
     
  17. JediCami

    JediCami Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Is anyone out there?
     
  18. DarthBreezy

    DarthBreezy Chosen One star 6

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    I'm out here Camy!!!!
    Sorry I haven't checked in!!!

    [face_love] [face_love]
     
  19. PadmeJainasolo

    PadmeJainasolo Jedi Master star 2

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    uppers!

    more soon?
     
  20. anakin-player

    anakin-player Jedi Youngling star 3

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    JediCami

    Sorry for not responding sooner but that lost post was excellent.
     
  21. JediCami

    JediCami Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Today i wnet to blockbuster and bought the dvd for life as a house! ;) so ill post tomorrow.
     
  22. JediCami

    JediCami Jedi Youngling star 3

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    OK having MAJOR family conflicts right now, so ill post maybe thursday or friday, i dunn. :(
     
  23. Monica_Skywalker

    Monica_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Take your time! :)
    ~*Monica*~
     
  24. JediCami

    JediCami Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Ill have a post for you late tonight ;)
     
  25. JediCami

    JediCami Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I know its short but i have more coming on the way. I'm also very sad because today Richard Harris died. (for those who dont know he plays proffesor dumbledore in harry potter) Iam so sad. I wonder whos going to play him form now on. :(




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    <<<< He walked down the sandy desserts of Tatooine, his homeland, where he had left his mom. With the heat of the twin suns beating against his bare back he struggled to say awake, the heavy sweat dripping from his body causing him to take in shorts breaths.

    He was in the verge of collapsing when a dark shadow took over the clear sky causing him to tremble from head to toe, no longer hot, but now freezing in fear.

    A dark man dressed in a hooded cloak walked behind him, Anakin unaware of his presence turned around to find him laughing evilly?

    ?Who are you?? He asked.

    ?I am your future young Skywalker.? laughed the evil creature, or person, or whatever it was, which Anakin couldn?t see from the hood over his face. ?You have nothing else to live for,? he continued ?Your wife and her children left you and your mother is dead.?

    Mother dead,? Padme leaving him? A family? He fell on his knees, exhausted shocked, beat, sad, and destroyed. He wasn?t normal anymore; he looked worn out, like he hadn?t been in civilization for months.

    ?That?s not true!? He yelled back to the mysterious haunter. ?My mothers not dead! And Padme loves me!?

    The figure approached him placing a hand on his shoulder. ?Your mother was killed by your Jedi, and your wife left you because you changed. It?s your entire fault Anakin; you fell into the wrong crowd. Everything your life has turned out to be was because the Jedi and their restrictions on you.? He sighed ?They never learned to appreciate you.?

    He dropped himself on the floor covering his face with his hands, letting the tears fall freely. <What have I done, Padme dear, mother?>

    ?It was the damn Jedi!? The man stated fiercely.

    Anakin looked up into the shadows finally opening his eyes towards the dark frontier. ?THE DAMN JEDI!? he screamed to the top of his lungs crying.>>>>

    ?MOM!! PADME!!?

    Anakin woke up sweating, short of breath.

    ?Ani, it was just a nightmare honey? Padme said embracing him. Anakin didn?t say a word just fell silent under her embrace shaking and sweating horribly.

    Padme began rocking him. ?Its ok Ani, it was just a dream, a bad nightmare, I?m right here. Shhhhh? She stroked his back and cheek trying to calm him down. After he finally stopped shaking she pulled back and cupped his face. ?Do you want to tell me about it?? She whispered softly. He shook his head still sweating and Padme embraced him again, knowing that tomorrow sooner or later he would tell her. She kissed the top of his head, and wrapped her arms around him holding on tight, falling right asleep with him.

    Tomorrow would be a better day to discuss it. Right now he needed to rest, and that?s just what he did.


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    hope you guys like, more coming up.
     
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