~It's fate~ AU (Ani+Ami/Obi) Oh my lord!!!! There's a post!!!!!! 9-14!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Heather_Skywalker, Jul 14, 2002.

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  1. anidanami124 Force Ghost

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  2. Anakins_Goddess_01 Jedi Master

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    UP!!!!!!!!!


    You can tell I am feeling better... I am getting back into the sociable circle!!!


    ~*Taryn*~
  3. Heather_Skywalker Jedi Knight

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    I'm glad your feeling better.
    I should be able to come home and post up and new piece of the story today! I've written most of the post, but it's still not done. It will be up soon! ;)

    *Heather
  4. anidanami124 Force Ghost

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  5. Monica_Skywalker Jedi Master

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  6. anidanami124 Force Ghost

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    Can't wait for more. So up with this. Also to very one out there please check out my Story Family of the Empire. It's Vader(A.K.A Anakin) Padme fanfic. They have three children. you can get to it by go to the link you see. Please read and review i would like to know from as many people if it's a good story or not. Oh but keep uping this on tell Heather gets teh next post up

    Danny
  7. Heather_Skywalker Jedi Knight

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    I'm so sorry everyone! But my computer has well, my family says school is right now more important, so I have been banned on it till everything cools off. This means not too many posts for about two weeks.
    Forgive me forgive me. If I get anytime over at school I will try my hardest to post.

    Smiles! :D
    *Heather
  8. Arwyn_Whitesun Jedi Master

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    Don't worry about it, Heather! Post when you can. :)
  9. Jazz_Skywalker Jedi Master

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  10. PhoenixMage Jedi Knight

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    I agree with Jazz and Arwyn-- post when you can, and don't worry!
  11. Anakins_Goddess_01 Jedi Master

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    I HATE SCHOOL! THE SAME STUFF HAPPENED TO ME TOO!!!!! GRRR! Take ur time! We all Kno I do ! Hehehehehe
  12. Monica_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    I agree with everyone else. Take your time with the post! We'll all still be here! :D
    ~*Monica*~
  13. Heather_Skywalker Jedi Knight

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    A tricky up! :)
    Miss you guys! :_|
  14. bjork_109 Jedi Knight

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    Blargh. The evil school. Don't worry about it though Heather; concentrate on all your work etc. etc. for the time being. I know how hard it is just applying myself to school period, much less trying to write a story at the same time. :) But I will enjoy when you can come back and grace us with your words!! :)

    -Bjork
  15. Anakins_Goddess_01 Jedi Master

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  16. Heather_Skywalker Jedi Knight

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    Hay guys! I'll be back this weekend with a post!!! It might not be the big one people think, but it will be a post.

    *Does little funny dance.*

    *Heather
  17. Monica_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Yea! :D Can't wait! :D
    ~*Monica*~
  18. Jedi-Roxy Jedi Master

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  19. Heather_Skywalker Jedi Knight

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    My post should be up later tonight. Believe it or not I haven't got Ani and Tamrien's callenges decided yet. I might need some help!!! Don't be scared to tell me what you think!

    SOON I PROMISE!
  20. Jazz_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    cruel torture!!!!! Seriously, what kind of people would we be if we left these characters with happy lives?
  21. Monica_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Maybe you could have them do endurance tests..you know, see who can last the longest at stuff.
    I'm sure you'll come up with something great! :D Can't wait to see what's next! :)
    ~*Monica*~
  22. bjork_109 Jedi Knight

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  23. Heather_Skywalker Jedi Knight

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    You're right Jazz! [face_devil] And thanks for the wonderful ideas anidanami and Monica! :D Bjork, you are far too kind to me [face_blush] .I have figured out what I'm going to write.

    I come back to the boards with a new endless forest to venture through and write. My english teacher has inpired me to take leeps and venture into my unknown thoughts. Mind you, this now could get a little bit riskay. I will not up the rating however, but I must warn everyone- I don't need people thinking that I'm way too mature for my age ;) Oh and because there hasn't been a post in a while :p I will put a little bit of the last post at the beging...

    :D Oh boy!!! Here it is!
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    ...?What do I have to do.? Anakin questioned.

    ?Beat him in tests of courage, strength, agility, and,? She looked over at Padme.

    ?My love for my Angel.? She nodded.

    ?If you both pass all three, it?s a fight to death.?

    ?If I win, you will marry us.?

    ?With my whole heart.?

    ?I?m in.?
    *****

    It was clam on the balcony over looking the Waterfall of Theed?s Palace. It would have been perfect if Anakin wasn?t off getting ready for his death sentence. Padme softly whispered to herself, ?I?m home and I?m still losing the people I love.?

    ?You haven?t lost me my Angel and you won?t ever.? Anakin came up behind her.

    ?You don?t know Tamrien.?

    ?Should I be worried?? He slowly moved Padme hand to his side to rest on the weapon Master Yoda had given him.

    Where did you get a lightsaber Ani?

    I?ll do anything Padme, to keep you mine.
    A twinge of fear hit Padme...

    *****

    Stars sparkled for Padme's first night back on Naboo, just as it always had. Padme felt no annamosity towards her old friend. They had run against each other for the queenship, and in Padme mind, had lost to the better person. She was more mad at Anakin. How can he do this!? Why would he want to kill himself? Padme knew Anakin would do anything for her, but this, this seemed more about proving something to himself that she already knew.

    Anakin was walking blindly into something. Tamrien was an amazing fighter and as Padme found out from Sabe, madly in love with her. Tamrien must have been twice as big, if not more than Anakin, but their demeanor was the same. Padme knew that the only way Anakin would win was by out-smarting the man, and even that would chose to be very difficult.

    Tonight was the feast. Everthing would be said tonight that needed to be said, the callenges, what had happened to Padme, what she was planning to tell Anakin. Padme lightly shook her head as she looked down on the quiet balcony. For a handmaiden to the queen there was much commotion about this, but after all, betrothal tests always have much commotion about them.

    For the first time in almost a year, Padme began to dress in an eligantly embrodered dress; Midnight blue with shimmering golden starts. Padme would have liked to have a dresser help her, but it was out of the question for the things she was preparing for, not just the dinner. On her huge feather bed she placed a soft white dress, sheer, that she would wear to bed after. With what Padme had planed for tonight, she wouldn't need it. She was passionately in love with Anakin, and would not for another second think to consumate ideas of death with his name.
    *****

    Anakin began to tug on the collar of the shirt he was wearing. For Naboo's nobility, it was't the most comfortable. He would have much rather been in his loose fitting Tatooine robes.

    He was escorted in and seated twenty minutes before Padme and Queen Sabe were to walk in. The table sat many, but across form him he saw Padme's father with a grin of sick happiness on his face. Next to him Ani predicited was the man he was to fight and the rest of Queen Sabe's family.

    Sabe was announced to come in just in time. Anakin was growning quiet sick of hearing about this man who wanted to take his angel. He had remained silent and stalkingly cold.
    When he met Tamrien's eyes he saw fear in them- un
  24. Monica_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Great post! :D It was worth waiting for! :D
    Oooohhh...the first challenge sounds interesting.... :) I can't wait to see what happens!
    ~*Monica*~
  25. bjork_109 Jedi Knight

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    Aye, I am definantly looking forward to this Maze and most of all; the dinner! I don't know about you Heather...but I love tortucuring my own characters in fan fictions...so that dinner could provide major awkwardness...*Evil laugh* *Cough* No...must resist the Dark Side.

    Anywho, yay. Your back...:) Keep up the good work Heather and hopefully you'll be able to post more; and soon.

    -Bjork.
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