Beyond It's nice to see you. J/J one post.

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  1. lordmaul13 Jedi Master

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    Hello Jaina. It?s nice to see you.

    By lordmaul13

    It's the flanneled one's sandbox. I'm just playing in it. Enjoy.



    How could you Jag? Jaina thought accusingly.

    ?Goddess you?ve picked up a tail. Break left,? Kyp said. And get your head in the here and now and out of a week ago or you?re going to get killed. Kyp sent through their bond.

    ?Breaking left,? Jaina said, ignoring the rest of what Kyp had sent. Jaina?s sharp left turn sent her in the direction of a Yuuzhan Vong capital ship. A cruiser. In her mind?s eye she saw another Vong ship. One from a week ago?

    She followed Jag in on an attack run against the Vong frigate. Stutter laser fire lashed out from her X-wing and Jag?s clawcraft. The splinter shots started to penetrate the frigate?s defenses and Jag let loose with a torpedo. The torpedo exploded in a brilliant white ball of flame and it was quickly time to pull out or follow the torpedo in. As they pulled away a flight of coralskippers appeared out of nowhere from the other side of the frigate and opened fire.

    Jaina and Jag rolled in opposite directions, trying to avoid the incoming plasma. The skips went after Jag. His clawcraft broke up in the enemy firestorm and he was gone?


    How could you do it Jag? Jaina thought as she fired a torpedo at the Vong cruiser. How could you die when I love you so much?

    ?Goddess, you?re getting awfully close-? Kyp began.

    Hello Jaina. a disembodied voice said.

    ?Who is that?? Jaina asked.

    It?s Jag.

    ?Jag! Are you-? Jaina was cut off.

    No time. Do you remember what happened to me last week?

    ?Of course. But-? Jaina was cut off again.

    Well it?s about to happen to you.

    ?-to that cruiser!? Kyp finished.

    Still firing on the cruiser Jaina looked around in confusion. Her conversation with Jag had taken up no time. Jaina began to pull away from the cruiser. Strangely she could hear the sound of a breeze rustling through a grassy field. What is going on?

    A trio of coralskippers shot around the enemy cruiser. Golden balls of plasma expanded in the X-wings forward viewport. Jaina jerked hard on the stick, trying to avoid the incoming fire, but to no avail.

    The X-wing spun out of control. The Vong cruiser got bigger and bigger in front of her. Jaina pulled the ejection handle and? nothing happened. Say bye to mom and dad for me Kyp, she thought.

    ?Jaina!? Kyp said, his voice cracking as her X-wing slammed into the Vong cruiser. I will Jaina. I will.

    Jaina sat up in a grassy field. A nice breeze rustled the waist high stalks around her.

    ?Hello Jaina,? Jag said with a smile.

    She sprang to her feet and spun around. ?Jag!? she said and threw herself into his waiting arms.

    ?It?s nice to see you,? Jag said. ?It?s been a long week.?
  2. ElijahFan9 Jedi Knight

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    Mar 22, 2003
    Great post!!! *wipes a tear from her eye*
  3. InyriForge Force Ghost

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    "It's been a long week."

    Awwwww.

    Not aww because they're dead, but awww because it was a sweet line.

    I saw this and was like, whoa, he's actually going to write something without evil? What was I thinking? I got to the third or forth line and learned that Jag was dead and was like, "Nooooooo." But you made up for it. It's a great viggie!

    ~Inyri
  4. lordmaul13 Jedi Master

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    ElijahFan9

    Thank you! Here. *hands over kleenex*

    InyriForge

    Thanks.

    I saw this and was like, whoa, he's actually going to write something without evil?

    You should know me better by now. ;)

    lordmaul13
  5. InyriForge Force Ghost

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    Yeah, that would be like asking me to write something serious. :p

    ~Inyri
  6. AERYN_SUN Jedi Grand Master

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    I saw this on board this morning but I had to go to math class. Now, the reaction.

    Jag & Jaina are both dead :( But the good part, they're together again and will be forever :D

    ~aeryn
  7. Sara_Kenobi Force Ghost

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    A very bitter sweet one post, lordmaul13! :D
  8. rogue11lovesjag Jedi Master

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    Awww! That's sad, but it's sweet too!

    ~Rogue
  9. Spike2002 Former FF-UK RSA and Arena Manager

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    This was inspired by getting bitten by a bunny?

    Ah we talking plot bunny or an actual bunny rabbit?
  10. lordmaul13 Jedi Master

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    InyriForge

    What do you mean? :p

    AERYN_SUN

    Oh come on! What's more important? Math class or Star Wars? :p

    Sara_Kenobi

    Glad you liked.

    rogue11lovesjag

    Yes. I can't seem to write anything without killing someone. But there was good.

    Spike2002

    A plot bunny spike. :)

    lordmaul13
  11. Spike2002 Former FF-UK RSA and Arena Manager

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    *looks embarassed*

    I knew that...*back and forth eyes*
  12. SithTahiri Jedi Knight

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  13. JainaJag00 Jedi Master

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    nice viggie lordmaul13! i really enjoyed it. and i think its kinda cute that jaina and jag were reunited after they die. :)
  14. Jaina_Fel_06 Force Ghost

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    Haha, my reaction was the same as Inyri's. I couldn't believe you were writing a non-eeeeeeeeeeevil fic, not to mention a J/J one. Then, I read the first line, and I laughed. Not because it was funny, mind you, but because it was an evil first line... :p

    Great job, though. It's been a long week. Awwwwwww... [face_love] [face_love]
  15. Lt_Jaina_Solo Jedi Grand Master

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    ?It?s nice to see you... It?s been a long week.?


    awww! anyways, awesome job! it was beautiful! anyone have a tissue i can borrow? :_|
  16. lordmaul13 Jedi Master

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    Spike2002

    I know you did spike. ;)

    SithTahiri

    Sad yes. I thought I'd see if I could give all the J/Jers a heart attack. :p

    JainaJag00

    I am pleased you enjoyed it.

    Hmmm. Cute. Kind of like me. :D *preens in front of mirror*

    Jaina_Fel_06

    I couldn't believe you were writing a non-eeeeeeeeeeevil fic, not to mention a J/J one.

    You were right not to believe. :p

    Then, I read the first line, and I laughed. Not because it was funny, mind you, but because it was an evil first line...

    Yes. It was evil just like me. A cute evil nice guy. :p

    . It's been a long week. Awwwwwww...

    Awwwww....

    Lt_Jaina_Solo

    You can't borrow it but you can have it. :p *hands over tissue*

    lordmaul13
  17. Lt_Jaina_Solo Jedi Grand Master

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    thank you

    *blows nose*


    thanks!
  18. lordmaul13 Jedi Master

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  19. Sith_Priestess Jedi Master

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    That was so great! It was sweet and cute and just adorable! I'm sad they're dead but really happy they are together...awesome ending.

    *sniff* I love it..

    ~Priestess
  20. Jaina_Fel_06 Force Ghost

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    lordmaul... *shakes head* You know what you remind me of? This is something I wrote originally for Kyp in STMS, but I think it can be applied here as well... :p

    Unable to resist, [lordmaul] flexed his arm and admired its reflection. Oh, yeah? I?m so buff? Lookin? good, he thought as he paraded in front of the mirror, humming a jazzy tune.

    ;) :p :D
  21. lordmaul13 Jedi Master

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    Sith_Priestess

    Thank you very much.

    Jaina_Fel_06

    You're not suggesting I'm conceited are you!? :eek:

    I?m so buff?

    I wouldn't say that. I'm tall and skinny (thanks to a good metabolism) but never get any exercise so I wouldn't say 'buff'.

    Lookin? good

    Now that part I agree with. ;) :p :D :eek:

    lordmaul13
  22. InyriForge Force Ghost

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    LOL. lordmaul, you'll always be buff to us.

    ~Inyri
  23. lordmaul13 Jedi Master

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    Me and my six inch biceps thank you. :p

    lordmaul13
  24. Jaina_Fel_06 Force Ghost

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    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]...

    lordmaul...

    *shakes head*

    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]
  25. scuiggefest Jedi Master

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    LORD MAUL-- I wanted to read your story since you read mine but I'm afraid I have no idea what it's about! I'll check your others out still though
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