Beyond Jacen, Jaina, and Anakin, a true sibling rivalry

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  1. Arina_Jaylin Jedi Knight

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    So what would happen if Jacen, Jaina, and Anakin got into each others heads, I decided this would be funny (Oh and yes, inspiration came from the Vader monolouges).

    Jacen: Oooh my head.

    Jaina: Jacen, did you say something?

    Jacen: No, but did you?

    Jaina: No, I'm just thinking it. Oh no AHHHH!!!! I can hear what your thinking.

    Jacen: Who the heck is Kalan Gharis, Jaina?

    Jaina: Uh, no one, not important.

    Jacen: Your dating a bounty hunter?!!! What are you thinking?!!!

    Jaina: I told you, you didn't need to know, get out of my head. And anyway, WHAT!!!! You like who?!!!!

    Jacen: Ahhh!!! get out of that section of my head.

    Anakin(normal speech): Hey Jacen, hey Jaina.

    Jacen: Are you thinking what I'm thinking?

    Jaina: Yeah lets do it.

    Anakin (thought speech): Think what?

    Jaina: Oh nothing, you'll figure it out someday.

    Anakin: You did what????!!!

    Jacen: Yeah I know, a bounty hunter my twin sister.

    Anakin: No the other thought, I'm doing what, with you?!!!

    Jaina: I told you this was good Jacen.

    Jacen: Were twins why wouldn't I agree.

    Anakin: I'm telling dad.

    Jacen: You tell dad, and I'll break your X-wing.

    Anakin: point taken, so anyone up for a game of Cards??

    (-: Arina_Jaylin, coauthored by Agent_Jaid.
  2. Arina_Jaylin Jedi Knight

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    Anakin: So I'm inside your heads???

    Jacen: Yup, but I don't know how we did it.

    Anakin: Can we play twenty questions??

    Jaina and Jacen: No!!!

    Anakin: How about ISpy??

    J and J: No!!!

    Anakin: Why not???

    Jaina: Read my mind.

    Anakin: Is that before or after we play???

    J and J: Neither!

    Anakin: Ooooh!!! Jacen likes...

    Jacen: Shut Up!!!

    Jaina: Hahahaha, you like Mara, you like Mara!!! Uncle Luke is going to cut you with a lightsaber

    Anakin: Yeah, I wanna tell him.

    Jacen: You do you die.

    Anakin: Oh why not, it'll be a new topic for Public speaking class

    Jaina: Ooooh, I'll get out the popcorn and the crowd, this could be a full house.

    Jaina and Anakin duck as Jacen throws an imaginary lightsaber at them.
  3. Arina_Jaylin Jedi Knight

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    Oh yeah, comments appreciated. Please
  4. JediMasterKobe Jedi Master

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  5. JediMasterKobe Jedi Master

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  6. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    This is great Arina!!!!


    I think I might be grounded though so I might not be able to write anything for a while though....


    Anyway, looks like your on a roll here!


    Keep up the really FUNNY good work! ;)
  7. jedishellyskywalker Force Ghost

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    Bwahahaha! Hi-lar-i-ous!!!! Keep it up!

    Shelly
    :D
  8. Arina_Jaylin Jedi Knight

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    (from the NJO edge of victory bk 1)

    Anakin(thoughts): Blast, my lightsaber is broken.

    Jaina: Uh oh, looks like our little brother is in trouble, eh Jacen?

    Jacen: Yup

    Anakin: Ahhhhh!!!! I can still hear you?!!

    Jaina: Dad said to put into the perspective that we can guide you in times of trouble.

    Anakin: You told dad?!!!

    Jacen: heh heh, yup

    Anakin: And he said put in perspective, what is he Dr. Philkin the Bothan, what were doing can't be put in perspective, that's ludacrious!!

    Jacen: Chill out Ani, it's not like I told him what you did at the New Republic celebration banquet last Summer.

    Jaina: No you told mom.

    Anakin: You told mom!!!! Why me Why me Why me!! Especially Now!!!!

    Jacen: Ok so maybe I shouldn't tell Jaina everything.

    Anakin: Look, right now I'm trying to save Tahari from the Vong and you are worried about what I did last summer!!! Sheesh you two are pathetic.

    Jacen: Thanks I try.

    Jaina: Wow what a nice gesture of brotherly love.

    Anakin: And I thought the girls at the Academy were weird.


    written by Arina Jaylin Coauthored by Agent Jaid,

    Thanks for the comments Ya'll this is going to be fun. :)
  9. Arissa Force Ghost

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    [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    Great work Arina!!!

    Keep it up, it´s damn fun :D

    ~Arissa
  10. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    *doubles over laughing*

    So........ good........... need............ more.......... [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]
  11. me_luky Force Ghost

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    lol
    my favorit lines:
    Anakin: Ooooh!!! Jacen likes...

    Jacen: Shut Up!!!
    LMAO
  12. jedishellyskywalker Force Ghost

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  13. Arina_Jaylin Jedi Knight

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    Ok more is here

    Jacen is in the shower singing Stardestroyer boi,

    Jaina:(thoughts) Where the heck did you learn that song.

    Jacen: AHHH!!! You just had to do that while I was in the shower?!

    Jaina: Well it is fun to mess with your mind

    Anakin: Yeah I love these family chats, don't you?

    Jacen: Well not when I'm in the pickin shower!!!

    Jaina: Oh but it's so much more fun when you are.

    Anakin: Especially when we want to use psychological torture to virtually annoy you.

    Jacen: Can you actually see me?

    Anakin: Uhhhh, Jaina help me please.

    Jaina: No not really.

    Jacen: What!!!
    You can No not really see me!!

    Jacen grabs a towel that has the a star destroyer on it.

    Anakin: Still why do like Stardestroyer boi?

    Jacen: Uhhhh do you really need to know?

    Anakin: Oooooooh, you like it because you think she's hot, hahahaha.

    Jaina: Ouch Jace, Avid Lange, why?!

    Anakin: And he thinks her bum is...

    By now Jacen has found the two sitting in the living room

    Anakin: Uh Jaina I think we better go, he has the lightsaber first talk later look.

    Jaina: Agreed.


    Arina_Jaylin And Agent_Jaid thank the readers.
    Hey all thanks for the comments, more to come although Agent_Jaid hasn't written...Yet

  14. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    More? :D

    I liked the 3rd one the best........

  15. Arina_Jaylin Jedi Knight

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    another, more Ideas are popping into my head


    Jaina: What's 7x70???? Blast it I hate math.

    Anakin: 490

    Jaina: Yay help from the genius

    Jacen: Jaina! I'm ashamed at you, using Anakin for a cheat book.

    Anakin: Well I helped you last week during your history test

    Jacen: Shush, no one is supposed to know about that.

    Jaina: You did what!!!! I didn't even ask for his help, and you asked him. Jacen!!!

    Jacen: Zip it or loose it Anakin.

    Anakin: Ok ok, sheesh you two.

    Back in Jaina's class the teacher is grabbing the tests.

    Jaina: Drat you two made me forget the test, now I'm going to get detention.

    Jacen: You and me both sister.

    Jaina: What, how'd you get it?

    Anakin: Remember the incident with the frosted worm.

    Jaina: Uhuh

    Anakin: That's why. You two are bad influences on me, you know that don't you, making me do bad things.

    Jacen: Us, you were the one who would only do it for front row tickets to the death Jawas.

    Jaina: Yeah, and my Rescued CD.

    Jacen: You thinking what I'm thinking?

    Jaina: Definatly.

    Anakin: No!!!!! Not that!!! No!!!

    Ten weeks later:

    Anakin: Sithspawn, they knew it didn't they.

    Anakin is being moved back and forth over a Mosh pit at a Backstreet Bothan concert.

    Anakin: Horrible music, lalalala I can't hear you.

    Jacen to Jaina: Now didn't I tell you this would be good.
    Jaina: Hahaha, this is priceless, but you do have to admit this is a nice place isn't it?
    Jacen: Yes but I think I need to push my earplugs in farther I can actually hear that terrible noise. :)

    Alrighty, hope you liked it, Written by Arina_Jaylin Supposed to be coauthored my Agent_Jaid, but she hasn't posted....Yet
    Comments are always loved. Thanks :)
  16. Arina_Jaylin Jedi Knight

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    Oh next time, were bringing in a guest star, guess who.
  17. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    *jumps up and down waving hand*

    TAHIRI!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    :eek: :eek: :p :D ;) :eek:
  18. Arina_Jaylin Jedi Knight

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    New twist here yah go

    Anakin: This my siblings is getting boring.
    *sighs

    Jacen: Yeah I know what you mean just the three of us.

    Jaina: We need someone or something new to play with.

    Jacen: Any ideas? Anyone, yes Anakin.

    Anakin: I thought of someone but you have to stay here.

    Jacen: Us, you must be joking.

    Anakin: Yeah yeah cry me a river.

    Jaina: I can follow you without moving and you know it.

    Anakin: Oh yeah, forgot that.

    Jacen: We'll be with you every step of the way

    Anakin: Oh great just what I need, a fan club.

    Anakin walks out a mischievieous grin on his lips.

    Jacen: I wonder who he's going to drag into our web of misfits.

    Jaina: Hey who you calling misfits?

    Jacen: Uh never mind. By the way why do you like a bounty hunter?

    Jaina: And why do you like Mara, and Avid?

    Jacen Uh point taken.

    Door swings open, Anakin enters with (yes Jaid you read my mind) Tahari.

    Tahari: (Aloud) Hey, how are you guys?

    Jacen: Ani, you sure you wanna do this??

    Anakin: Yeah why not?

    Jacen: Well ok.

    Tahari: What, I didn't catch that.

    Anakin: That's ok you didn't have to.

    Tahari: Why not?

    Jaina: Trust him you don't want or need to know.

    Jacen: She's right after all.

    Tahari: What, and why are you talking with out moving your lips?

    Anakin: Your doing it too.

    Tahari: I am, AHHHH!!! I am, is this telepathic, Cool!!

    Jacen: That's what she thinks.

    Jaina: Hehehe, just wait till bedtime she might not apreciate this quite so much.

    Jacen: Oh yeah, that was a bad idea.

    Anakin: No it was good, accept you decided to do it to me.

    Tahari: What was it... Ahhhhhh!!! That was terrible.

    Anakin: I know their terrible siblings.

    Tahari: So were you, especially after that incident at Mos Espa where you and that Chomper dude got into a kicking...

    Anakin: Uh Tahari that's enough

    Tahari: But it was funny.

    Jacen: Ooooooooh I want to hear.

    Anakin: Can we get her out, please.

    Jaina: No, she has too many dark secrets to tell.

    Tahari: *Cackles, yes I do

    Anakin: heh heh, no you don't.

    Anakin works hard to block Tahari but can't

    Tahari: And then there was the time we went to Naboo and you drank the dirty water and......

    Anakin: Oh boy do I really want to remember that memory, you ask me and I hear you not.

    :) We'll continue on how Tahari gets out and why, something about no privacy whatever that is. Written by Arina_Jaylin coauthored by Agent_Jaid who hasn't written.....yet.
    Comments loved thanks for supporting.


  19. jedishellyskywalker Force Ghost

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    U love comments? Well, U got one!!!
    Well done!!!! I'm loving this!!!


    Shelly
  20. jedishellyskywalker Force Ghost

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    ME AGAIN!!! :D

    Why don't u guys come and read my fanfic! I'd love to see u there...


    Voices
    Shelly
  21. me_luky Force Ghost

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    good job i like it... alot! :)
  22. Arina_Jaylin Jedi Knight

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    Now I kinda feel bad for Anakin, it's kinda like one of those, wanna get away commercials

    Anakin: I can't hear you I can't hear you.

    Tahari: Yes you can you silly boy

    Anakin: Ahhh!!! I hear sad people!

    Jacen: Just face it you have to hear us

    Anakin: Ahhhh!!! No I don't No I don't!

    Anakin continues to mumble that while plugging his ears.

    Jaina: Uh guys I think maybe we took it a little too far.

    Jacen: How so???

    Jaina: I think three's a company and four's maybe too much of that.

    Jacen: Oh but he's so much fun to torment.

    Anakin: Am Not!!!!

    Tahari: Oooooh you spoke to us hahaha

    Anakin: This is not happening this is not happening!!!

    Jaina: And also I think making him think that a thermal detonator was a piece of fruit was pushing it.

    Jaina glares at Tahari and Jacen.

    Jacen: Oh come on, it was harmless prank, you used to do it to me.

    Jaina: I was bored and I didn't make it seem that real.

    Jacen: That's what you think.

    Tahari: Actually Jacen I think she's right, I think we've made Anakin go overboard.

    Jacen: What is this, no no no, your not leaving me, I need another person who's insane like me.

    Tahari: I'm sorry Jace but I want the mentally sound Anakin back

    Anakin: Yay, she's leaving!

    Jacen: No!!! You can't leave me with the two most uninsane people in the galaxy!!!

    Tahari: I can, I will, and I am, bubye Jacen have fun.

    Tahari breaks the link and leaves.

    Jacen: Nooooooooooooooo!!!!!

    Jacen starts to break down and cry.

    Anakin: What's wrong with him???

    Jaina: I dunno, you must remember that he's always been on the wrong end of the line.

    Anakin: Yeah that's what mom always said.

    Jacen: She can't have left me with two rational people, ahhhhhh!!!!

    Anakin: There there, poor little Jacen, awhhhh, does little Jacen want a cookie.

    Anakin whips out a thermal detonator.
    Jacen starts to beg like a dog.

    Anakin: Yes he does yes he does.

    Jaina: Are you sure you actually want this kind of revenge???

    Anakin: Yeah, it's kinda sweet, like this cookie bwahahaha.

    Oh boy poor Jace oh well. Next time dating with your siblings 101.

    Written by Arina_Jaylin and coAuthored by Agent_Jaid although she hasn't written anything..... Yet :)
    Comments are loved, thanks you all who read my attempts at writing.
  23. DropkickJake Jedi Knight

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  24. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    You're mean!!!!!!!1

    GO ANAKIN!!!!!!!!!

    WOOOOOOOH!!!!!!

    :p

    *feels sorry for Jacen*

  25. jedishellyskywalker Force Ghost

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    Poor Jasa (but laughing at his misery is sooooooo funny!) HA HA HA!!!

    Shelly
    :D
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