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Jedi do not cry. (my short JA)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Jedi_KnightMariah, Sep 23, 2000.

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  1. MaraJadee

    MaraJadee Jedi Youngling star 3

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    awwwwww, thank you Mariah! ~:)
     
  2. padawan3

    padawan3 Jedi Master star 4

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    I hate it that Qui-gon is eating him self up like this. It's so heart breaking. I love this story.
     
  3. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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  4. MaraJadee

    MaraJadee Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Uppers!
     
  5. MaraJadee

    MaraJadee Jedi Youngling star 3

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  6. MaraJadee

    MaraJadee Jedi Youngling star 3

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  7. JEDIMASTERYU

    JEDIMASTERYU Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Great writing Jedi KnightMariah, I would love to see some more! The last one really put definition into the character of Qui-Gon

    Post!
     
  8. MaraJadee

    MaraJadee Jedi Youngling star 3

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  9. MaraJadee

    MaraJadee Jedi Youngling star 3

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  10. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thanks! As many of you know ('cause I keep telling you) I have little writing time. But I have an idea for the next post and you'll be surpriesd who it's about.
     
  11. MaraJadee

    MaraJadee Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Cool! Post when you can please! :)
     
  12. MaraJadee

    MaraJadee Jedi Youngling star 3

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  13. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Here's that post!

    I can?t believe this is happening! I, prince Beju, am stuck in a cargo hold! When I get my
    hands on whoever did this, they will pay dearly for it! I had been resting in my travel room
    in my transport when this happened! That nerf-hearder came and stuck my in the cargo
    hold like I was a peasant! I walk back and forth trying to figure out a way to escape from
    this mess. No doubt he?s pretending to be me! Oh, he?ll pay for this! I smack my hand on a
    steel wall making a tiny dent.
    ?Think, Beju! Think!? I urge myself. I don?t want to get killed by that prince wanna be!
    And where are those bafoon gaurds?! I hope that stupid Baftu sees behind the mask of my
    capture or all will be lost!
    Why did I get mixed up in this in the first place?! Why, why, why?!
    I hit the wall again, making a bigger dent.
    Suddenly something pops into my mind. The emergency hatch! Why didn?t I think of that
    before?! I run over to the secret panel and flip some switches until I hear a beep. I run
    down the main hall and start the ship.
    A fight is going on outside the ship but I ignore it. I sigh in relief as the ship takes of,
    taking me to safety. I think it?s all over. Boy am I wrong....
     
  14. MaraJadee

    MaraJadee Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Yeahhhhhhhhhh! Great posty!
     
  15. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    The next post will probably be the last.
     
  16. Kaylla Norn

    Kaylla Norn Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Nooooooooooooo.... it can't be your last post! It can't it cant it can't. I like your little snibits too much... please post again and don't make it the last!!!!!
     
  17. padawan3

    padawan3 Jedi Master star 4

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    You can't be serious? This story is so good. What you say is impossible to accept. Are you septible to bribes.
     
  18. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    *looking around* .....Maybe.....Hehehe! It's just that there's not much more to the book and the next post will probably be the missing ending plus havig another fic that doesn't seem to have an ending.....
     
  19. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    WAIT! You do want me to post on my other story, right?! I have more readers there too!
     
  20. jedi_master_gimpy

    jedi_master_gimpy Jedi Master star 4

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    I'm really enjoying these small posts, Mariah, they're very revealing and touching. Pleeeeeaaaaase continue them!! (don't make me get out Logan and Toad, woman!!) ;)
     
  21. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oooooooh! Did you say.....Toad? Well, I might.... ;)
     
  22. MaraJadee

    MaraJadee Jedi Youngling star 3

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    OoO Logan and Toad! hehe, Mariah they are kinda hard to refuse! :)
     
  23. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    It?s good to be back with Qui-Gon again. I almost thought I would never see him again,
    before. I?m glad I was wrong.
    I listen as Qui-Gon explains things to me. It seems that alot has happened while I was
    ?missing.? What I really want to know is how much he missed me. He doesn?t say
    anything about it.
    ?....Gurra was truly sorry for losing you,? Qui-Gon explains.
    I feel like shouting, ?And you?? But I won?t.
    As if reading my mind, Qui-Gon puts a hand on my shoulder. ?And I was truly saddened,
    as well.?
    I blush slightly. ?Thank you, Master.?
    ?For what?? he asks.
    ?For missing me,? I say sheepishly.
    Qui-Gon smiles warmly and squeezes my shoulder. ?Of course I would miss you. You
    saved my life more than once, you know.?
    My smile fades. That wasn?t exactly what I wanted to hear.
    Qui-Gon notices and squeezes my shoulder again. ?And of course I missed you because
    you mean so much to me.?
    I smile up at him.
    Now his smile falls away. ?Obi-Wan, I was almost scared at first when I realized how
    much I missed you. I was still afraid of caring too much, that if I might lose you....? his
    voice trailed off. ?Let?s just say I don?t feel the same now. I?m not going to be afraid of
    caring for others, all because of you.?
    I wonder if that?s good or bad.
    ?It?s good, Padawan. Very good,? he tells me. ?Now we?re almost there. Be ready.?
    I bow. ?Thank you again, Master.?
    ?Of course, my Padawan,? he replies.

    THE END.......



    .....OR IS IT?........





    .......IT PROBABLY IS.......






    BUT STAY TUNED ANYWAY.......
     
  24. Kaylla Norn

    Kaylla Norn Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Okay, staying tuned... wish it was same time same station but... I guess I'll just have to make due....

    Now where are these other stories you refur too... I think I must be missing them...
     
  25. Kelly Kenobi

    Kelly Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I hope it's not the end, I would really miss these. You say more about the emotions of the characters in these little posts than Jude Watson does in the entire book!
     
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