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Jedi Handmaiden Pre TPM, TPM

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by faubert, Jun 4, 2000.

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  1. faubert

    faubert Jedi Youngling star 1

    Apr 5, 2000
    This is an idea fir a story that I have. Please let em know what you think.

    Jedi Temple

    The Padwan knelt before the Jedi council waiting to find out how she did.
    She had just taken the trails to become a full Jedi Knight.

    The council members looked at each other in silence. The Padwan knew rhat
    they were using the force to comminucate with each other. Finally Mac Windu
    nodded at Yoda.

    "Confer on you the ramk of Jedi Knight we do." Yoda said.

    "Congratulations Rabé." Mace added.

    Rabé smiled at each of the members of the council.

    "THank you master's." She said.

    Mace Windu handed Rabé back her lightsaber. He then became very serious.

    "Your path will be an unusal one young Jedi." MAce said. "Follow me" Mace

    Rabé nodded and followed Mace out of the council chamber. They walked to
    this little cafe. Another black male joined them. He was dressed in the
    uniform of a member of Naboo's seciruty force. Rabé nodded at him

    "Major Panaka." Rabé said in greeting. Panaka smiled.

    "Its Captain now. I am the new head of security." Panaka said proudly.

    "Congradulations Captain." Rabé said looking at mace Windu and Panaka.
    "WHats going on?" She asked.

    Panaka looked at Mace.

    "Panaka has requested your services and the council has agreed." Your path
    takes you back to your home world young Jedi." I wil let the captian
    explain." Mace Windu said getting up. He then left Rabé and Panaka.

    "Congratulations on becoming a jedi." Panaka said.

    "THanak you. So what do you want with me?" Rabé asked.

    "You know that Naboo has just elected a new Queen. And that she has 5
    handmaiden's. I want you to be one of Queen Amidala's handmaiden's Rabé."
    Panaka said.

    Rabé looked at Panaka in shock.

    "You want me to be a handmaiden? I am a Jedi Knight." Rabé said susprised.

    Panaka noticed that she didn't say no.

    "You know more then anyone what a handmaiden is." Panaka said. "Queen
    Amidala is a very special person. And there are forces in the galaxy that
    will not like Naboo having a strong ruler." Panaka said. "I want 5 special
    women to serve as her handmaidens. I have already found the decoy so you
    will not have to do that role. But I need someone with the skills of a Jedi
    around her Highness. And you are from Naboo and have passed the royal
    exams." Panaka added.

    Rabé thought about it. Rabe reached into the force. She nodded her head.

    "All right I will do it." Rabé said.

  2. faubert

    faubert Jedi Youngling star 1

    Apr 5, 2000
    moving to top
  3. SithAbigail

    SithAbigail Jedi Youngling star 2

    Apr 6, 2000
    I like it... But Amidala's handmaidens are around her age and young Jedi Knight's are about 24-ish. ::shrugs:: Oh well, let's move on to my favorite handmiden, Eirtaé
  4. jeditictac

    jeditictac Jedi Youngling star 3

    Oct 14, 1999
    so far it's good. i like that you have rabé as the jedi. :)
    more please? :)
  5. faubert

    faubert Jedi Youngling star 1

    Apr 5, 2000
    The reason why Rabe was made aJedi knight so early will be explained as we go on with the story. Thanks for the replies and i will get anotehr chapter off tommorow
  6. Amidolee

    Amidolee Jedi Master star 5

    Jan 8, 2000
    Interesting . . .

    Has anyone found the exact age of the handmaidens? Most of the actresses that played handmaiden were in their early twenties, except for Keira (Sabe) who was only 14 at the time.

    So, you could actually say Rabe was the right age for Knighthood and able to be a handmaiden. I think the actress was twenty-three during the movie.
  7. faubert

    faubert Jedi Youngling star 1

    Apr 5, 2000
    here is the next chapter
    After agreeing to become one of the Handmaidens Rabé returned to the jedi
    Temple to say goodbye. The Padwans gave her a traditional celebration on
    her becoming a Jedi Knight. She then got her stuff and headed toward the
    royal Starship. She whistled as she came aboard.

    "this ship just for little me?" Rabé said with a smile on her face.

    "The Queens handmaidens do travel in style." Panaka said as the ship took
    off and left for Naboo. As they left Panaka handed Rabé a group of files.

    "Those are the files on your fellow Handmaidens. You will find a familiar
    face among them." Panaka said as Rabé read the names.

    "Quite a few of them are familiar. Eirtaé and Sabé are very good friends."
    Rabe said as she remembered her two old friends. "I am surprised that
    Eirtaé was picked.

    "Because she is a blonde?" Panaka said.

    "Exactly. As I remember it all of the handmaidens are supposed to look like
    her Highness." Rabé said

    "You and Eirtaé are the daughter's of former handmaidens." Panaka said. He
    went quiet as he remembered the fate of Rabé's mother.

    "Its all right. You can talk about her." Rabé said.

    Rabé and Eirtaé's mother were royal handmaidens to Queen Veldia. 9 years
    ago the Queen and the handmaidens were on a trip to Coursant when a member
    of one of a unknown terrorist group tried to kill the Queen. Rabé's mother
    stepped in front of the Queen and took the blast killing her. She was later
    burred as a hero On Naboo.

    "Thinking about her?" Panaka asked.

    "Yes." Rabé said.

    "That's why I asked the Jedi Council for you. I believe that Queen Amidala
    will be in as much danger as Queen Veldia was. Queen Veldia never recovered
    from that attack and stepped down and her replacement was a diaster."
    Panaka told Rabé

    Rabé opend the files and read the files about Yané and Saché. Rabé was
    impress with them.

    "Sabé's going to be the decoy?" Rabé asked.

    "Yes. To the public she will be known as Padmé which will also be the name
    Her highness will use when she becoms a handmaiden. One of the things I
    want from you is to become close friends with Padmé. I want the publice to
    see that you are both close." Panaka said

    "You want me to stay close to Padmé and protect her when the decoy plan is
    put in effect?" Rabé figured.

    "Very good." Panaka said proudly.

    The ship approacehed Naboo.

  8. Jean

    Jean Jedi Youngling star 1

    Oct 7, 2003
    Upping for the move
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