Jedi Virtues: Part 1: Harmony: (J/J, Post-NJO fic).MJ's back and ready to conquer the boards!READ!

<delurks> Great posts, MJ!

 

here's the last post for tonight. teh person that was killed i just did at a moment's notice. the next few posts should be interesting.
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Jacen heard the intakes of breath all around him when he mentioned the Queen Mother was
being held near Corusant. He had never seen so many people angry over the fact his so called girlfriend had been captured by the Peace Brigade.

Wedge Antilles, one of his family?s closest friends was the first to speak. ?Are you sure, Jacen? Positively sure?? he asked, holding his wife in his arms. At the first mention of Coruscant, many people almost broke out crying at the mention of their reshaped home planet. The Bothans in the crowd cried out for their lost leader Borsk Fey?lya, who had sacrificed himself in an explosion. Coruscant too, brought back many unhappy and terrible memories for Jacen too, for he had seen what the Yuuzhan Vong did to the city-wide planet.

Jacen shook the memories out of his head and nodded to the crowd. ?I?m sure. I felt her presence along with the presences on Coruscant as well.? He looked at his sister beside him, her thoughts elsewhere.
?What do you mean by other presences?? Iella, Wedge?s wife asked. He felt the crowd?s curiosity and knew he had to tell the truth.

Jacen took a deep breath. ?When I was still in captivity with the Vong, I trained myself, with the help of my fallen comrade Vergere, to sense and distinguish the Yuuzhan Vong and where they were located throughout the ship. When you sent the rescue team, and we had escaped I could still
sense, lightyears away where the Vong were precisely located. That was why I chose to be on the strike team that was to kill Warmaster Lah.?

?What are you saying Jacen?? his mother asked, tenderly.

He sighed. ?What I am saying is that there are Yuuzhan Vong near Tenel Ka and we need to get to her fast.? The crowd now was shouting things he couldn?t distinguish. He used the Force to make his voice louder than the crowd. ?However, the Yuuzhan Vong there are not a big threat to us. With the Supreme Overlord dead, along with Tsavong Lah, they are trying to reorganize and now is the time to take over the capital of our Republic.?

With that, the crowd quieted down. He continued. ?The Peace Brigade is trying to help the remnants unite and by doing that they capture one of the famous Jeedai, knowing that we will come to them. But that?s the thing, they don?t expect us to come so soon. They want to get a holo out to the New Republic.? Suddenly understanding flowed from the crowd.

?Yes that?s right, so let?s get a move and go take what belongs to us back!? Wedge said, causing the crowd to roar. ?I want those who have already agreed to go along to stay back for little bit so we can plan on who?s going where. Admiral Drayson, General Bel Iblis, send word out to the
rest of the fleet. We are going to need everything we got to take Coruscant. Karrde, you in?? as the crowd dispersed, going to where they were to report too in an emergency.

?Of course, I am. Why wouldn?t I be?? Karrde asked, looking at the Jedi and military crew he has worked with over the years. ? I would be more than willing to help take over the planet that has kept in business so many years.?

Wedge smiled. ?Luke, Han, Leia, Mara, which ones are going which ones are staying?? The four looked at each other and shrugged.

?How about all four of us?? Jacen?s father said. Leia shook her head.

?Well at least one of us has to stay and watch Harmony and Ben. We can?t all go.? Leia said, looking at Luke and Mara. She realized who had to go. ?Han and I will stay, you go. Just stay out of trouble.?

?Who, us get into trouble? Never.? Mara said, hugging her sister-in-law. Leia took Harmony from her arms and cradled her gently. ?You take care of her and Ben, you hear? I don?t want to come back and hear they?ve been kidnapped.?

?Never fear, Mara, dear. They?ll be safe with us.? Han said, taking little Ben away from Mirax, who had been standing there quietly for some time. H

 

Great post, MJ!

 

WOW, [face_shocked] that were some really really good posts!

 

"Well, if this many people are going we might as well try to retake Coruscant . . . but then it depends on where the Peace Brigade is. Han thought to himself. Wait a minute . . .
?Luke, Leia, anyone,can you tell where Tenel Ka is being held captive?? Han asked, realizing what he just thought.
"Yes, Dad. I know where she is.? Jacen replied. Han had forgotten how close his son was to the Queen Mother. He turned to Jacen.
?Where?? he asked, as the rest of the crew turned to him.
?Coruscant.?"

A bit late posting, but I've been traveling. The lack of Jag in the scenes is kinda nice as I still have a hard time accepting the way he is written, but that quote is really great.

 

thankies everyone for the feedback. Hey CaptZ wanna do something soon? get my mind of my migraine? Shadow and Jade: THANKS! more hopefully tonight . . .

 

here's a shortie. wont be back tomorrow though. going out with one of my reviewers . . . see ya tomorrow Capt.

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Danni stood there patiently, waiting for the people who stayed behind to arrive in the hangar bay. When she had felt the call for help, she immediately slipped out of the crowd and got her belongings ready, including her scientific instruments used for Yuuzhan Vong technology. Sensing them near the call for help, which she guessed was Coruscant, she went straight to the hangar bay, in hope to catch Kyp and the others in time.

She smiled as she thought of how Kyp had been embarrassed figuring out he loved her. For a few years now, she had feelings of attraction toward the young Jedi Master but knew she had no place in his heart and she certainly couldn?t compete with the famous Jaina Solo. But as she trained
with Jaina, she got to know her better and knew that she loved Kyp as a brother, nothing more. It left a small window of opportunity for her to come into Kyp Durron?s life. It didn?t happen right away.
He was always on call with the Twin Suns Squadron, and hearing Jacen through the Force, Danni knew she would never get to see her love alone.

She saw Jaina and Kyp walking together, far apart but together, coming toward her and the shuttle she was in front of. Speak of the devil. She thought as she saw Kyp?s face light up when he
saw Danni and saw Jaina scowl.

Gee, what?s wrong with her? Danni thought as Kyp stepped in front of her and enveloped her in a hug. Jaina?s jealousy was evident through the Force and she saw over Kyp?s shoulder, Jaina turn away and talk to Jacen.

?Nothing?s wrong with Jaina, we need to talk that?s all. I don?t think she?s used to me loving someone else right now, even if she has Jag.? Kyp said, his green eyes devouring hers. She could feel Jacen?s concern and the other?s surprise as Kyp kissed her passionately. Jaina?s jealousy flared in the Force and Danni pulled back. She had never see her friend like this.

?Me neither. Great, I get to have a nice long talk with the Goddess.? Kyp sighed and wrapped his arms around Danni?s thin waist. The looks on everyone?s faces was priceless.

?What?? her boyfriend asked innocently. ?I didn?t do anything!?

?You most certainly did, Kyp. You kissed Danni in front of everyone!? Jaina said, rather sourly. Kyp looked at his best friend, astonished and Danni felt his hurt, making her insides ache too.

?Ok, guys, shut up and listen. WE need Danni on this mission and we need her to go with the fleet.?General Antilles said, moving forward. ?I?m sorry guys but she is needed to take over Coruscant.? Danni saw Kyp?s face as the general announced she wasn?t going with the strike team.

?Uh, General, I, uh, am going to disobey those orders. I think that I should go with you and the rest of the strike team. I can prove to be rather useful around the Peace Brigade.? Danni said, causing shock to go through the group.

?But I?m sure you are going to distract Kyp. He?s useful when it comes to fighting and if he?s distracted . . .? Jaina said, making Danni fume.

?And Jag going on the mission isn?t going to distract you? I can do more on a Peace Brigade ship than I can with the fleet. I know how to fight Jaina, I did it before remember?? Danni, replied sharply. Her friend was acting on her jealousy and didn?t want her along. ?What happened to our
friendship, Jaina? Is it because of Kyp??

Jaina glared and turned away. ?It looks like Miss Quee is ready. Let?s get to it and save Tenel Ka.? she said, walking up the shuttle?s ramp. Kyp looked at Danni and ran after his best friend and partner of three years.

Wedge walked up to her and patted her on the shoulder. ?Jaina?s just jealous. Kyp hasn?t loved anyone but her for years. She has to get used to it that?s all.? She noticed Jag running after his fiancee too. Wedge looked over his shoulder and smiled. ?He never leaves her alone, especially when she?s hurting.?

He turned and walked up

 

Great post, MJ

 

guess no ones around . . . anyways, i thinka post is in order but it might not get up tonight probably because I have to Up my own thread . . . hey anyone wanna be my beta?

 

*out of breath*

Woowee! I just did a power-read! Great post, MJ! You have a certain flare for dialogue! Loved it!

 

coming from you Mira I really take that as a compliment. the other one that makes me feel good at writing is CaptZ and he's uh well a good friend of mine . . . anyways, opinion how do you like Kyp and Danni together? anyone?

 

I just found this and I realy like it.

 

Kyp and Danni together is an interesting twist. Sounds kinda like Han and Bria (if anyone remembers that relationship) or Wedge and Qui Xux (or however her name is spelled).

After Jag was left out, I've taken a liking to this, but the title is "Harmony." If this is because of Luke and Mara's child then I don't think we've seen enough of the child or enough foreshadowing. If its got a more symbolic meaning than just the child, the way the Jedi seem to be working in harmony and especially how everybody seems to be working in harmony is pretty good. Just wondering if you meant it only one of those two or both ways. Or maybe I'm reading too much into it in order to get that symbolism. What do you expect when you do AP English Language?

 

Wouzers, that was really good. Jaina jealous? hehehehe

More?

 

awesome story, MJ!!! can we have more soon?

 

UP!!!!!!!!!

hey everyoen im back for the time being. for the most part ill be gone again tomorrow. its called company and a sale at JCPenney which means SHOPPING!!!!!!!!!!!!! YES!!!!!! anyways, thanks everyone for the feedback. i'm working on the next post.

collywolly : glad you like. keep reading. its going to get interesting.

CaptZ unfortunately for you, Jag is the next post and i am i said its the Soontir and Jag interaction. soem laughs and some very serious stuff just what you like. remember to call me! and yes you did read into it right. her name has to do with evreyone working in harmony. im surprised, wait no im not. you knwo me too well. never mind

Shadow took you long enough. welcome back to my thread. keep reading.

LtS hey, i remember you! welcome to Harmony as i said before, more hopefuly up today!

thats all for now, so im upping it!

~MasterJ

 

can't wait for more!

 

more soon, inlcuidng flashbakcs from Dark Tide II Ruin and Dark Journey. this should be interesting. evne i cant wait to post it!

 

coolsies

 

great story hope that you pst more soon. I hate cliff hangers! I wanna know who it is!

 

hehe, i think you will be surprised at who the person is . . .but it isnt an enemy . . let me tell you that much.

 

Sorry, I haven't been on latley, but I love it! Keep posting!

 

here yah go, a nice long postie. i am working on the next one too. soory CaptZ if this doesnt fit your description of Jag but it the way I write him. remember, it is many years after Jag and Jaina have met and gotten together. on we go!!!!!!!
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Jag sat in the copilot?s chair, next to his uncle, on the unidentified shuttle they were using to rescue Tenel Ka. He punched in the hyperspace coordinates into the navicompter and sat back.

?Coordinates ready sir.? Jag said, as the others in the cockpit turned and left. Jaina remained for a few more moments, waiting for the shuttle to enter hyperspace. He noticed her yawning and trying to keep her eyes open. ?Jaina, why don?t you go get some rest. General Antilles and I can handle this. He is my uncle after all. I?m pretty sure the greatest fighter pilot of all times and his nephew can handle going into hyperspace.?

Jaina smiled tiredly and leaned down to give Jag a kiss. ?Alright, I?m going to go get some sleep.? she said, leaving the uncle and nephew alone. Jag turned to his uncle and saw his uncle yawn too.

Wedge leaned forward and pulled the hyperspace lever on the cockpit lever. The stars faded into lines and the strike team was finally on their way. Wedge smiled at his nephew. ?We are officially in hyperspace. Do you mind watching the cockpit while I go sleep? I can usually go days without sleep but I?m a old man now. I need sleep.? he said, standing up. He put a hand on Jag shoulder and squeezed it gently. ?I trust you completely to let me know when we?re almost to Coruscant. Right??

Jag nodded. ?Of course, sir. Go get some sleep. A tired general won?t be a very good asset to this team.? he said, as Wedge left the cockpit leaving Jag to his own thoughts. He watched as supposed-to-be retired general left, and turned back toward the viewport in front of him. He remembered meeting his uncle for the first time on the floating city, Tafanda Bay,the destroyed planet of Ithor. Throughout his childhood, all the stories he heard were about Wedge and his fight against the Empire and he wondered what it would be like to meet the greatest fighter pilot of all times. And he still called his uncle sir or General, never Uncle Wedge, or even Wedge for that matter. It was at the same time he had met Jaina too, his thoughts returning to the past.

Jag fought his heart out at the Chiss academy but this enemy was something he hadn?t faced before. His father had ordered him and his squadron to go help the New Republic in their fight with the mysterious enemy his father had known years before they invaded.

The X-Wings roled and twisted to get out of the way of the plasma fired at them by the living ships. He turned his frequency to the New Republic?s. ?Get clear, Rogue?s. They are ours now. Spike Lead out.? Jag said, as he entered into the deadly fight. He and his pilots moved in unison, causing the pilots of Rogue Squadron to exclaim in shock. Around him, cockpits became volcanoes
as he shot them precisely with is laser cannons. The dovin basals as they were called, boiled and exploded, turning the coralskippers to dust around him.

The Yuuzhan Vong were retreating and it was because of his squadron and the Empire they were. He saw two X-Wings below him and he settled his clawcraft beside theirs. ?Don?t worry, Rogues, we have you now. We?ll get you home safely.? Jag said, to pilots he was escorting to the Ralroost.

A female yet angry voice answered him. ?Who are you?? she asked.

He smiled and looked at the pilot next to him. He saw her fly and knew she was very good. ?We are simply the best combat pilots in the galaxy.? he replied, as static burst through the frequency. ?We are a Chiss House phalanx, on loan to the New Republic by my father Baron Soontir Fel.?

He heard the shocked replies come from the Rogue pilots but one he heard over the racket. ?Baron Soontir Fel? As in the one who defected to the Empire?? the female voice he heard earlier asked.

?Yes . . .? he replied, as the X-wings landed

 

Gee I wonder what the Baron will say to Jag. Good writing keep it up.

 

99 . . . oh my im almost to a hundred . . . i cannot wait . . .