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Story [Jurassic Park IV/Jurassic World] DEVOUR –A Prehistoric Cocktail… ENTER THE INDOMINUS REX!

Discussion in 'Non Star Wars Fan Fiction' started by The Sith Camp, Jun 20, 2015.

  1. The Sith Camp

    The Sith Camp Jedi Knight star 4

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    After viewing and reading feats of the Indominus Rex - I ended up having to 'create' and 'engineer' a poem about her >:D

    Though this is one of the shorter poems I've written (well only 2500 words) this poem really is a 'prototype' - I will work on a BIGGER POEM - perhaps rivaling SINCE THE MESOZOIC ERA II Godzilla >:D

    But ENJOY! And ENJOY JURASSIC WORLD! I'd recommend viewing the film first AND THEN READING my composition ;)

    In the confines of the Laboratory,
    A Unknown Discovery,
    In the form of an Egg,
    Soon to Hatch,
    Yet this was nor ordinary Batch,
    Where then within the Cracks,
    The excitement and anticipation that Stacked,
    There came the Claws, Teeth, Flesh and Bone,
    I craved for Blood … lest the more I killed … my skills be Honed,
    The very pinnacle of Grand Evolution,
    I was more … than Nature’s mere Creation,
    I be born in the Laboratory… yet worst than a Mutation,
    For I am a Prehistoric Cocktail,
    Yet when your heard my very Wail,
    2015 … my name … sent the World … a Chilling Sensation …

    Fresh Flesh … waiting to be Devoured,
    Fresh Blood … waiting to Stain,
    Innocent Lives…waiting to Die,
    Mortal Souls … waiting to be Slain…
    Could you call me a Monster?
    Then One should ask my Creator…
    Yet Raised without a Mentor,
    Then when you saw me … you could only imagine … in the Jungle of Nightmares … I be your very Tormentor…
    For I am also the Supreme Predator!
    Could I be a Tyrannosaur?
    You bet I be more than any Dinosaur,
    Towering by the Feet,
    Fresh Human Flesh … and Blood… shall all be but my VERY TREAT!
    Oh I desire to rend and Tear,
    Should any … Dare to enter my Lair…
    For to survive an encounter … with me was but a Feat so Fare …
    Why not test your wit and skill … Try and Kill Me … Try and Outwit Me … If You Dare…
    Yet should you have Sensed Me … when you See Me …
    The First Thing you’d note … was but the Aroma of Flesh Blood … Alas … It Stains the Very Air…

    For since Man has had a desire … to beat Evolution,
    Then they sought to make their own Creations,
    In 1993 Science Took a Gamble
    You thought back in ’93,
    With the Ressurection of Dinosaurs … you had all of Nature to See,
    Yet then 22 later … Dr. Wu created Me,
    For then it resulted … in a Prehistoric Ramble!
    Defying the Laws of Genetics … I was but more than a Primordial Scramble!
    None could tame me … let alone handle me,
    For the moment I was Free,
    I was but on a Killing Spree,
    Fuelled by Pure Sadism and Glee!
    Alas To Kill was but so Free!

    For you wanted Bigger?
    For you wanted Badder?
    For you wanted Better?
    For you wanted Death?
    Then you had better take … your last Breath …

    Then came 2015 … you thought the Rexy was the Alpha Predator,
    Yet soon you realized she be only but … the Beta-Predator,
    Alas, I be the Dinosaur Terminator,
    For now you knew … that in 2015 … I was but the New Predator Alpha,
    My Very Name … shall easily spread across the Worlds and the Lands Terra,
    Endowed with Prehistoric Power from my Forebearers that I would Gain …
    Yet I be stained … with Fresh Blood … from all unfortunate victims and foes I’d Slain…

    The Air was no longer Clear and Fresh,
    But rather … the stench …of an Ugly Mess,
    The Atmosphere … will soon … be saturated … with Utter Pure Despair,
    For I do not give Mercy … nor do I play Fair…
    I am no mere Horror Movie Star,
    Yet imagine … should I escape … around the worlds and yet to other lands yet so far,
    Where in the laboratory … where they thought they discovered the Genetic Mother Lode!
    Yet ever the delusional and the arrogant… little did they know… that I was no Childhood Fantasy Foretold,
    Alas where I would be Death’s blow,
    I would never truly slow,
    Yet the menacing aura that flows,
    The Psychotic Inner Rage that festered and grows,
    The World shall know,
    Alas, an Hybrid of Evolution,
    Genetic Revolution!
    The Defiance of Natural Evolutionary Power … the potency and the consequences … of discovery … were but UNLEASHED…

    Then your heard the very roar that scored!
    The Frightening Shrieks beyond the Nature of the Bizarre and the Freaks!
    The Stench of Decay and Death and Blood in my breath that Reeked!
    Yet then on Isla Nublar…upon my break-out … summoning the inhabitants of the Avian Cage…

    I was free to dish out Rage!
    For where I proceeded to Unleash … a Party of Violent Death upon the Streets…

    Then on the News Broadcast you’d hear,
    It Reported my creator’s and investor’s biggest Fear,
    The Realization and Revelation of Prehistoric Doom leers so Near,
    Hence I send a Message but so Clear
    I will Hunt, Kill and Destroy all that you held so Dear,
    But first … where my bellow that easily Ruptured and Deafened your ear …
    Alas! Could you hear? The Very Sounds of the Melodious Killing! Sheer Pure Delights of Devastation! Miles of Destruction!

    Where in the Park my Bloody and Violent Incursion,
    A Stampede of Prehistoric and Modern Revelation!
    I was always but the Mindless Sensation,
    Alas! My Roar Plays a Tune … It was simply the Melodies of Destruction …

    In the very Streets of Jurassic World, as I hurl obstacles but so easily aside,

    For the Park … and perhaps Tomorrow Cities I too … like Godzilla can easily wreck astride,
    I care not what I flipped aside … be it cars, innocent beings, Dinosaurs, creatures or buildings,
    For this was my very opportunity of Destruction … of Mankind’s Findings…
    For my Fun and Games shall but radiate Utter Despair in the crowd
    For soon your Park shall develop …

    In a stack of rubble of Death and Misery and Pity...
    Yet you try to Kill Me,

    You send your ASU Teams,
    You send your Park Security Teams,
    You even summon Private Mercenaries,
    But in the end … when you tried to hunt and Kill Me,
    In the Park’s Forests, I simply Hid,
    My Homicidal Tendencies be but hard to Rid,
    For then you stood…fuelled by Adrenaline,
    Where the Park’s Forests…there was but an Echo of Emptiness and Silent Eerie,
    You thought then now you knew about what be a Horror Movie,
    Yet then you be childish to deem this experience but ‘Scary’,
    Then the moment you saw the drops of Fresh Blood … you knew this was but a True Horror Story,
    And the Atmosphere … was but simply waiting to be Gory…
    .
    I Live for the Utter Agony and the Pains!.
    For Soon …none of the Park Alive shall remain,

    I leave only bloody lifeless remains,
    Yet all your losses shall only be my Gory Gains,
    Only endless Blood in the Rain…

    A Life never bred nor meant for the Prehistoric Era,
    From Palaeozoic to Mesozoic,
    Yet I be the Murderer in the Cenozoic!
    Relishing only Anger, Hate and Murderous Destruction … yet but so Chaotic!
    I cared not for whom be my victims … none too Specific!
    For it was the terror of my victims … Alas! The Adrenaline was yet but so Terrific!
    Yet my very image and appearance … would be yet but always … a Living Nightmare so Horrific!

    Built with Speed,
    Faster than one’s Eye could Read,
    My very Roar,
    Beyond what even a 747 could Score!
    For them Humans … even plotted … my use in War!
    I was … but a Weapon … a Living Weapon … built and lived like none ever Before!

    The Soul of the Tyrannosaur,
    Horns and the Armored Hide of the Abeilesaurus,
    Jaws of the Carnosaurs,
    The Mind of the Raptor,
    The Blending of the Cuttlefish,
    And the Mercurial Nature of the Tree-Frog,
    Gargantuan Claws … to scale 40 Foot Walls,
    I easily defied … Scientific Law,
    All these … formed my very Presence,
    Yet one could ponder … what else did they use … in my Genetic Essence?
    The Hunter … The Killer … The Supreme Alpha Predator,
    Yet to many … in the end … I was no Dinosaur … I was a MONSTER …
    For the Genetic Soup … was but full of Instability,
    It would infect me Mentally … bordering on the lines of PURE INSANITY!

    Yet I was not mere New Dinosaur,
    Gone were any of my ancestor Carnivores,
    For I be raised be raised in a Laboratory … yet they increased my Aggression Score,
    To be the Supreme Carnivore,
    For Twisted and Mutated had I now but became,
    My rampage be unstoppable… fixated,
    My hunger to hunt and kill was but insatiable,
    Yet now … I was anything but a Reptile … let alone a Lizard,
    And yet you could say I be a Raptor… yet I be far bigger than them no single-minded Killer,
    My ability to blend and mask my presence already makes one shiver,
    Yet my breath on your neck … all the hairs and senses on your back but quivered,
    For the corpses strewn about Jurassic World … the Rubble and Destruction … was all but a taste of my Terror,
    Makes but only too trivial your worst of all sinners…

    Raised in Loneliness and Isolation,
    Yet even with a Sibling … whom I killed … I rendered no Effective Friendship nor Association,
    Yet too with the Killer Raptors … a Brief Rapport … I established some Communication…
    But in the end … it be my Innate Rage and Hate of Man,
    Yet I Ensnare my Fuel of Hatred of All!
    For whilst I stand Tall,
    Even the Biggest and the Strongest of my Foes and Victims will All But so Easily Fall,
    For my Appearance was but such an Awe!
    Yet my Undeveloped Powers were but still Raw!
    You could only pray to Stall…

    Yet it be the confines of the Science of the Modern Era … in the cruel cold world of Hammond’s Creation Lab … I was simply mixed, twisted and mutated,
    Yet it shall be the Ambition and Dreams of Mankind I shall have haunted,
    Many victims I would have hunted,
    Unfortunately … for you … I was no mere Ghost,
    Nor the most Docile Dinosaur Host,
    But it is the arrogance of Science!
    In Nature’s Defiance!
    Hence forth … I was not even the work of a Wizard,
    For now and then I realized yet that Jurassic World has grown bigger,
    Whilst from the Egg … I had started small,
    But I now stand tall,
    Your Ideal Order and Worlds shall but Easily Flounder and Fall,
    But I care not for any of Scientific Nature or Law,
    Mercy nor my victims Fates …I will not forestall,
    Soon all Humans shall crawl,
    Humbled before their arrogance in Defying yet Twisting… Nature’s very Law …

    Over the Days to Weeks to Years,
    In the confines of my own Paddock,
    I have grown Swifter,
    Yet I too be Smarter than a Raptor,
    I have become Meaner than a mere Tyrannosaur,
    Yet I would never quiver,
    I am the Ignorance…of Mankind’s Arrogance …
    For in my Presence,
    I unleash the Horrors of Combining Prehistoric Essence,
    I deliver you’re a Gift that is Far From Pleasant,
    Soon Mankind … shall be but peasants,
    Let this be a Lesson,
    For soon the Hyrbid’s Very Might,
    Be but a Frightening Sight!

    Yet since Infancy … I was but already … a child … of an Abomination,
    Yet only I could wield … Total Domination,
    I yearn for Blood … yet I Hunger for DESTRUCTION!

    To my mind … Hunting is no Art,
    I only Kill for Sport,
    It was but exhilarating on my Part,
    Yet swift and sharp as the Dart,
    I shall Rend and Tear You … Bit by Bit … Apart …

    The Greed of a Human,
    They could Scheme but never truly Plan,
    For they thought I be their Asset but so Grand,
    Yet then the moment I awoke … and I walked on Land,
    Them Humans realized … I left no line nor mark in the Sands…
    For they be at the mercy … to simply die … in my blood-stained Hands…

    Now I am but Free to unleash my Rage,
    Civilization I DEVOUR AND RAZE,
    FRESH FLESH AND BLOOD I GRAZE,,
    My very Size, Sight and Might shall Faze,
    Leave you Stupefied in a Horrified Daze…

    My hide be rough yet always rugged,
    I may be wounded but regular weapons I shrugged,
    But never grounded,
    For Innate Flames of Hatred I harbor,
    Destruction Encased in my Armour,
    Despair’s Messenger,
    A Modern Avatar of Terror,
    I spare no Quarter…
    But yet I desired to Feed and DEVOUR…

    I obey none but Nature’s Law,
    My Anger was Now beyond Raw,
    Your Fearful Bones I Seek to Gnaw,
    Blood and Flesh of Victims I Shall Maul,
    The Titanic Strength I Haul,
    No Force… for not even a Tyrannosaur could Stall,
    I fight foes beyond a Draw,
    Yet in the end…over the Soulless Corpses… only I stand Tall…

    I Raid…Paddock by Paddock…Street by Street … I wreck and I loom about,
    I will never truly fall,
    For you may all cry and shout,
    But you knew your had no chance to bale out,
    For when I ROARED!
    This means but only WAR…

    With the Rage that rang Crimson in my Eyes,
    You thought you had stared at your very Demise,
    Who could ever dare to defy?
    Those who did, would only soon only Die,
    In their Blood and Wounds they wail agonized cries,
    Of missiles, rockets, guns, bombs and even planes,
    All your sacrifices are but in vain,
    For your weapons,
    Brought me only tickles as much as to a giggle … yet very little pain,
    Yet your destruction,
    I shall easily be your Teacher for that Lesson …

    An Untameable Lizard King,
    Whilst Godzilla was the King of the Monsters,
    Yet Perhaps … was I the TRUE QUEEN OF THE DINOSAURS?!
    A NEW Harbinger of Destruction,
    The Escape of a Host of Prehistoric Terror,
    Is the price of your Error,
    For this was but my Reign of Terror,
    It had never been sparer,
    Since the Prehistoric and Modern Age …

    Remember Fools … In the time of years,
    I am now the World’s Biggest Nightmare,
    I am the Host of a New Fear,
    Mercy Pleas will but fell but Deaf on my Ears,
    I will find and DEVOUR … all that you had endeared…

    So go ahead! Why don’t you call me the Killer-saurus,
    Why don’t you call me the Psycho-saurus?
    Why don’t you call me the Sicko-saurus?
    Or even be I a Godzilla-saurus?
    But do not be mistaken … to refer to me … as a mere …Tyrannosaur,
    For I was certainly no ‘Ancient Dinosaur’,
    Derived from both Ancients and the Modern,
    Towering over the Victim,

    They never knew their Demise was but so Instant … yet so Sudden!
    I be Scarred with Vicious Bloody Wars,
    The more I lived to Score,
    Long in the years,

    I was your worst fears,
    Yet when the roar you hear
    The Slow Rumble,

    This was no Tyrannosaur Stumble,
    Yet you heard the Rumble … you felt as if you were Trampled…
    Yet it was Inevitable …
    Slowly …I be rumbling Closer,
    You Knew … I, the Indominus Rex…
    A Prehistoric Hex!
    For I rule Isla Nublar,
    This was the TRUE Monster Island,
    I WAS THE TRUE Queen of the Monsters,
    Harbinger of Destruction,
    My Rampaging Terror,
    This was the price of your Scientific Error,
    For my Reign of Terror,
    Now you shall suffer,
    For I the Indominus Rex,
    The Spawn of the Prehistoric and Modern Scientific Age …
    I be … An Ancient Concoction.. of Prehistoric Doom,
    This Walking Avatar of Doom … it was Ambling … seeking to DEVOUR… all that was Far and Near …


     
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  2. Mira_Jade

    Mira_Jade The (FavoriteTM) Fanfic Mod With the Cape star 5 Staff Member Manager

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    Once again, you have a great gift for creating flowing poems with a whole lot of power. But this, in particular:

    Your Ideal Order and Worlds shall but Easily Flounder and Fall,
    But I care not for any of Scientific Nature or Law,
    Mercy nor my victims Fates …I will not forestall,
    Soon all Humans shall crawl,
    Humbled before their arrogance in Defying yet Twisting… Nature’s very Law …

    - was my favourite part. And, really, this is the underlying theme/message of the entire franchise, so well done capturing that. =D=
     
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  3. The Sith Camp

    The Sith Camp Jedi Knight star 4

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    Master Mira! >:D

    Actually - I can tell you this - this 2500 word poem? This is actually but a draft - I will expand this poem into SOMETHING EVEN BIGGER >:D
     
  4. The Sith Camp

    The Sith Camp Jedi Knight star 4

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    Hello again Master Mira!

    How are you? Look um this isn't really related BUT I just uploaded this -> - yup its my beloved Indominus Rex whom I nicknamed affectionately Susan - I made these Toy Memes on a camp a few weeks earlier ;) >:D Enjoy! If you wish!
     
  5. The Sith Camp

    The Sith Camp Jedi Knight star 4

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    PCCViking - I see that someone likes my poems and the comments associated with it - well - if you hadn't noticed - there's that link - yup that's my Toy Indominus Rex - I affectionately nicknamed her Susan - and I took Susan with me to a camp a few weeks earlier and made these Memes - ENJOY! >:D
     
  6. NYCitygurl

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    Could you call me a Monster?
    Then One should ask my Creator…


    This is very true! I also like the lines about how they wanted bigger and better, and they would pay with their lives.
     
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  7. The Sith Camp

    The Sith Camp Jedi Knight star 4

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    Hello again! I will tell you this - this poem really was just a draft - its rather small really - only 2500 words more or less ... I'm planning on expanding this one ;)