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Saga Just a Senator

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Cil, May 26, 2005.

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  1. Cil

    Cil Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Apr 5, 2005
    Title: Just a Senator
    Time Frame: End of RotS
    Summary: Obi-Wan Thoughts on Padmes Death.

    Just a Senator

    You was just a Senator
    To many people
    And to admit I thought the same.

    I thought you were like all the others
    Lying
    Cheating
    Betraying
    And not to be trusted

    I don?t know what Anakin saw in you
    I couldn?t understand really.
    Nor could the Jedi Order
    Even though I had a crush on Siri
    And yes I did love her
    But I still don?t understand

    You two really loved each other didn?t you?
    Because the proof of that is in my arms
    Your baby son Luke,
    One of the only reminders that you and Anakin
    Really cared for each other

    As I pass your baby son to his Aunt and Uncle
    I realize something?

    You were more than just a Senator
    You were a friend
    A friend whose parting gift was?

    HOPE.



    As you may know I have written a whole series of these sort of Vig?s, here are the links to them:
    Anakin, Where are you? - http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=20117193&replies=4
    I Killed her - http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=19852292&replies=5
    My Baby Sister - http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=19562076&start=20023342

     
  2. VadersMistress

    VadersMistress Jedi Knight star 6

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    Apr 7, 2004
    Wow. Amazing... You did such a great job with this. =D=
     
  3. Gina

    Gina Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Jun 3, 2003
    *sniff* That was so sad, the way Obi-Wan realizes too late that Padme was a friend, but I love how it ended on a note of hope. Nicely done! :)



     
  4. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Feb 5, 2004
    Lovely! =D=
     
  5. Cil

    Cil Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Apr 5, 2005
    Thanks for the Reveiws.

    I saw RotS Last night... It blew me away
     
  6. MasterSareBabe

    MasterSareBabe Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Dec 11, 2004
    Awwwwww.... :_|
     
  7. nobodys_angel

    nobodys_angel Jedi Youngling star 1

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    May 28, 2005
    So sad but definately moving. Great job. The only thing I'd like to point out is in the first line, it should be "You WERE just a Senator", not WAS. Other than that, I loved it!
     
  8. argentlife

    argentlife Jedi Youngling star 1

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    May 14, 2005
    I loved it, the last line had me hooked. Not to mention the reflections on the whole A/A relationship.

    Look forward to read more from you in the future.

     
  9. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    Mar 26, 2001
    I love how his perception changed.
     
  10. Salmeera

    Salmeera Jedi Youngling star 1

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    May 29, 2005
    Wow, I loved it. Interesting perspectives. Keep me posted on your next story.
     
  11. PadmeSolo

    PadmeSolo Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jul 3, 2002
    Oh, that was good. Very nice capture of what seems to have been a likely progression of Obi-Wan's perspective from ATOC to ROTS. :)

    _PSK_
     
  12. Cil

    Cil Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Apr 5, 2005
    Thank you again for the reviews [:D]
     
  13. Palpy560

    Palpy560 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Feb 11, 2005
    You were more than just a Senator
    You were a friend
    A friend whose parting gift was?

    HOPE.

    :_|
    Oh my.........:_|
    Your quite good at this you know! =D=
     
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