Keeping Faith (a Jag/Jaina fic) Ch. 31 UP!!!!! 2/14!!!

Hey everyone. I decided to write my own Jag and Jaina fic. Hopefully, it's not too bad. This story is going to take place after Traitor, though as far as I know right now, there won't be a lot of Jacen in this fic, unless people who read this want me to put him in. I am in the process of typing up the first chapter and it will be up within a few hours. I just wanted to get the thread started. I hope you will enjoy my fic!
--jagfellover

I'll be back soon with my post!

 

Interesting.

 

I am awed by the writing! It's amazing! I think you should be at least nominated for a Newberry, or something! Tell me, O Great One, where do you get your brilliant ideas and inspirations, so that I may learn from you?

...

Dana

 

VERY funny Dantana. My computer had another one of it's moments.
--jagfellover

 

waiting for the post...

 

I can't wait . . . Dana youre weird. actually everyone's weird here.

 

new post up for Complications, jagfellover

 

when I posted my response there was no message. when I came back there was. it must be the Force.

 

Sorry, felt like being sarcastic. Haven't you guys figured out by now that I'm weird? Hope you have better luck with your computer.

Dana

 

All right, I have a few people in here! MY life is complete! And the post should be up fairely soon. I working on it right now.
--Jagfellover

 

You read my story, I'll read your. I told you guys that a long time ago.

 

yeah well why do you think im here? weirdos everywhere! waiting for post . . .

 

Sounds very cool, Jagfellover! I can't wait to see your first post, I'm always in search of J/J fics.

*StarDust*

 

Jag and Jaina is indeed good ground to write on, Jagfellover, but shouldn't you have had your first post ready before posting your thread. [scratches head in confusion] Oh well to each his own, The anticipation is killing me though.

 

I have a favor to ask you all. Does anyone know of a good planet I can use for my story? It's kind of an important factor to my story, but I can't think of a planet that the Vong would want but don't already have. If you have any suggestons, please let me know.
--jagfellover
P.S. the sooner I have a planet the sooner the post is up!

 

Alright folks here it is....

Chapter One:

Lieutenant Jaina Solo, Trickster Goddess, and Twins Suns Lead grinned as she flew in the sim with the rest of her squadron. Twin Suns was crushing the opposing squadron, the Rogues, quite easily. Seven members of the Rogues had already been killed and another was receiving a bashing from Twin Suns Five, Voort saBinring, Twins Suns own Gamorrean, nicknamed Piggy.

?Lead! Hard to Port!? yelled Twin Suns Three, Colonel Jag Fel, Jaina?s secret boyfriend. Trusting him, she jinked immediately to her left, and avoided the torpedo that Rogue Four had launched at her. Four shot past her before managing to turn around and attempt again to kill her.

?Thanks, Three. Alright Suns, we?ve only got three Rogues left. Let?s finish them off.? Jaina said after she had followed Rogue Four and blasted him away with the help of Jag and Twin Suns Two, Jedi Master Kyp Durron Within two minutes, the rest of the Rogues had been killed off and the sim ended. Twin Suns had only lost one of its member during the fight, Twin Suns Eight, piloted by Merth Tresson, a Coruscant born human. He had said prior to the sim that he was feeling slightly ill, but he had wanted the opportunity to wipe a few Rogues off the boards, so Jaina had let him fly. He had been killed about five minutes into the half an hour sim and Jaina wondered if she should have just sent him to the med station to begin with.

Jaina had noticed the tension lately between her own pilots and those of the other squadrons. Because she was playing the part of a Goddess, she got the best of everything, as did her pilots. This caused a lot of jealousy between her squadron and the Rogues, who had, for a long time, been the pet squadron of the military. So she had told Colonel Darklighter that there would be a sim between the Rogues and Twin Suns, and the Rogues would see who was best. And now they most certainly had.

Jaina popped the top of her sim and climbed out. She saw Merth sitting on a bench, and he was smiling, though he looked quite sick. Grinning she walked over to him. Though she still had to act like a goddess, it was her responsibility as squadron leader to look after her pilots.

?Hey you okay kid?? she asked the eighteen year-old. His pale blonde hair looked matted and his normally rosy face looked pale and pasty. She wondered if he had food poisoning from the horrible food that was produced, en masse, in the caf.

?Not really Great One. I--with permission--may I go to the med ward?? Merth said. Jaina nodded. ?Thanks Goddess.? He got up and took two shaky steps before he collapsed. Stunned, it took Jaina a few seconds to respond before she dropped to her knees to check his pulse.

?Medic! Kyp! Call the medic immediately!? Kyp rushed off to get the medic while the rest of her squadron, and the Rogues, crowded around her and the fallen Merth.

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Hey guys that was the first post of my first ever story. I love constructive criticism, though if it?s really bad, I apologize in advance. I know no Jaina and Jag mush yet. Though there will be some up in the next post, I promise. I also still need a planet for this to be located on. It?s a major factor for the next post so please tell me if you have a suggestion. Thanks, and enjoy!
--jagfellover

 

awesome beginning! and i don't know about a planet. what does it have to have? are there any specifics?

 

Cool beginning, Jagfellover. Keep it up.

 

Basically, I need a planet which the Vong would like to have but don't have yet. It also needs to have enough room for a military base. The planet, obviously, can't be Borleias, Courscant, Mon Cal, o Tattoine. I considered Wayland but I know the Vong have already captured it. I'm not sure if I should just do AU and have the NR have control of Wayland, or maybe have them win it in a battle, like they did with Borleias. Any feedback is fantastic!
--jagfellover

 

Give them Fondor. I don't think they have Fondor yet.

 

here's a list of planet's i know they don't have (as of Rebel Stand):

Fonder
Bespin
Hoth
Dagobah
Sullust
Naboo
Ossus
Bothawui
Commenor
Kuat
Gamorr
Endor
Bakura
Niruaun
Adumar


you could always do Niruaun, because aren't the Vong very interested in the Chiss?

 

Lt_Jaina_Solo-- Thanks for being the first to review my story!

JediWarriorYoda-- Thanks a lot!

I'd also like to say I think it's cool that two people whose stories I've read (and liked!) are reviewing my fic Thanks!

Oh and to The-Bad-Feeling , I didn't actually mean to start the thread yet. I had meant to start writing my fisrt post inside the "Body" box on the message page, but my computer had other ideas.

Thanks everyone!
--jagfellover

EDITh, thanks for the lists of Planets guys! I'll look through them and find which one is best!

 

hey I like it, you just have to keep posting in order for me to get it. I vote for Endor or something, maybe even Naboo . . . or wait Hoth . . .

 

This looks good! (grumbles something about cutting down on the number of threads I can respond to) Oh well, I'll stick around to see what is going on here. After all, it's always nice to see the Rogues being shown a thing or two.

 

Master_Jaina1011--Actually Hoth would be an ideal planet for my story, but I still can't think of why the Vong Would want it. Wait. Didn't the Vong take over Hoth already? I thought that was where Miko died and Jacen rescued Danni Quee. Now I need to go look that up.

Goddess_Jaya--I know what you mean. I have so many J/J stories that I read, I actually made a list with the Title, Author, and the last page that I looked at, on it. It helps keep me organized. I think I have about 25 stories on it. The Rogues will only be making a few appearances in my story which is why I figured they should make it in the 1st post.

Thanks for your reviews guys!
--jagfellover