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Saga Knight Fall -- [Order 66 Vignette]

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Sekotian_Jedi, Dec 4, 2005.

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  1. Sekotian_Jedi

    Sekotian_Jedi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Feb 12, 2005
    Title: Knight Fall

    Story Type: Vignette
    Time Period: RotS

    NOTES: This was a small fic inspired by some RotS music and the name of one of BattleFront 2's levels.

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    ?For over a hundred generations the Jedi Knights were the guardians of peace and justice in the Old Republic, until the dark times, until the Empire?? -- Obi-Wan Kenobi
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    As the rows of white armor marched to the pace of the single dark-robed figure that climbed the steps of the Jedi Temple, only the most wise and powerful Jedi could feel the darkness that slowly washed over the galaxy.

    Inside the citadel that for so long had protected and provided for the Jedi there could only to be found death. The Jedi had been betrayed, betrayed by the one that they had hoped would bring balance to the Force. They had put up a valiant fight, but they were powerless against the unlimited servants of the Empire. Outnumbered, outgunned and caught off guard, they fell easily to those that had once served them.

    There was no hope, for the entire Republic had turned against them, believing them to be traitors and rebels. What they had once known, once defended with all their breath, was remodeled and eroded in less than a night?s duration.

    Across the galaxy they where killed cruelly and put down without mercy. Not even the youngest survived, for when they turned to who they thought was one of them, he only looked at them with hate and anger as he revealed his lightsaber and struck them down. A new order was at foot, one that could not have such kind of children still alive. The parents? sacrifices, to an order caught up in the winds of change that were propelled by one man?s hunt for power and another?s obsession of love, had been invain.

    As the sun rose over the smoldering remains of what was left of an old way, only two Jedi fought on as they attempted one last time to salvage what they could, but it was a desperate attempt that would fail under the roof of the senate and be foiled by one?s pity on Mustafar?
     
  2. Tyranus230

    Tyranus230 Jedi Master star 7

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    Feb 16, 2005
    Good story, SJ =D=
     
  3. AgentViper007

    AgentViper007 Force Ghost star 7

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    Mar 9, 2005
    Another brilliant masterpiece!.=D=
     
  4. Obese_1_Ka-Blooey

    Obese_1_Ka-Blooey Jedi Master star 4

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    Jan 7, 2006
    very impressive. good job. how long did it take you?
     
  5. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Beautiful! =D=
     
  6. JadeSolo

    JadeSolo Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    The parents? sacrifices, to an order caught up in the winds of change that were propelled by one man?s hunt for power and another?s obsession of love, had been invain

    and be foiled by one?s pity on Mustafar?

    :_| Loved those two lines! Wonderful vig!
     
  7. jabbathenutt

    jabbathenutt Jedi Padawan star 4

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    May 28, 2005
    my first time in here and this is the first story i have read!
    it is very good!!!!!! well done.=D= =D=
    i will be putting one in here myself, i hope its good enough to compete with this one.
     
  8. BeyondtheBail

    BeyondtheBail Jedi Youngling

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    Sekotian_Jedi, this synopsis of the fall of the Jedi is well written. Your lyrical style belies the inspitration of the soundtrack. These images stood out:

    As the sun rose over the smoldering remains of what was left of an old way...

    Across the galaxy they where killed cruelly and put down without mercy.
     
  9. Apailana

    Apailana Jedi Knight star 5

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    Jun 19, 2005
    Short and sweet, master! Nice work =D=
     
  10. Healer_Leona

    Healer_Leona Squirrel Wrangler of Fun & Games star 9 Staff Member Manager

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    Wow, for a viggie so short, it really packs punch. :( :(
     
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