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  1. siul-fer-nando Jedi Knight

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    A new treat is forming on the other rim, a jediknight comes to the capital and center of the new republic to ensure that the jedi counsil and the new republic goverment and the army of the republic get action in hands about this conflict that is emerging in the natulius. but the jedimaster is been enjured in the way... his name was Siul fer Nando a jedi healer and a sentinel of the jediorder, he`s mission was to watch the naborian sector, and the other new civilatations in the new rims that the republic discobered by the wars of the yuuzhan vong treat 5 years ago.........................
  2. esoj-zetineb Jedi Knight

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    While his master is recuperating in the medical chambers of the ship headed to the Jedi Temple Jedi Kight Esoj Zetineb Is in his Chambers meditating. All of a sudden he senses a distubance in the force. Then their ship is shaken by a laser blast. With a quick reaction he heads to the cockpit of the ship. They have reached the Capitol only to find it is under atack. "Sheilds up, Monitor all chanels and let me know what is happening" Says Esoj. Without hesitation he goes to the hanger bay to his modified X-Wing Jedi Starfoghter thinking he has to protect his master Siul Fernando but he is stoped before he reaches the hanger bay.................
  3. kyle_katarn_pr Jedi Knight

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    Jedi Knigth Kyle_Katarn_PR laughed at the adventure!
  4. siul-fer-nando Jedi Knight

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    in the way some republic troopers are under attack by natulius troopers,Esoj Zetineb draw hes lightsaber to confront the attackers,then Siul fer Nando wounded take hes lightsaber and reach Esoj and confront the attackers by surprise one of the attackers confront Siul in the hallway hes skin was dark and dread looking, this fellow draw a lightsaber by surprise and battle Siul with a very skillful. but Siul take control to he`s oponet and with a ishurami attack dispach the attacker. when everything was under control Siul fer Nando fainted because he` was wounded..........in the cookpit a massage from the jeditample gets under the comlimk to Esoj Zetineb......
  5. esoj-zetineb Jedi Knight

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    As he Heard the message on his comlink that the threat was over, for now he thought, he led his master to the medical bay. He still was worry of this new threat so he told the pilot to take them to the Jedi Temple. Esoj informed the concil that master Fernando was verry ill. As they landed at the temple they already had the medical healers ready for Siul Fernando. Also Master Skywalker was there with Anakin Solo. Esoj had a hunch of what the master wanted to talk to him about. " Esoj Report to the Jedi Council as soon as your master is stable. There is somthing important we must talk to you about. Anakin will acompany you to the healing chambers and back." Luke said. " What is this all about master?" "We rather discus it in the meating. Right now Attend to Siul" Luke replied. "Yes master". Esoj affirmed.
  6. siul-fer-nando Jedi Knight

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    anakin ask to esoj " master siul is going to make it he is to strong in the force, but a disturbance a get when master siul arrive to the temple. a saw a image a scence of master and another masters. and siul was in the middle but a shadow surrond master siul. an unholy past a dark moments on master siul retrive when bouth of you get to this assigment did you know something about the past of youre old master siul. then in that moment a singular figure it was a jediknight named ishi hiro a nomad jedi some said that ishi hiro was a hero of the jediorder. "well is that true master siul fer nando ill it can be right but ahhh a sence in the force that master siul is awaken but the darkside and a dark war comes to him".


    in a few hours all the jedi counsil and siul fer nando and esoj was discusing the thret that they fought and discuber. master skywalker this is a moment that natilus and the naborian sector needs our help a will need some of the jediknights to this mission because the sith are back but this arent seems those sith that we fought in the old days this new sith evolutionate this thret is mandatory, because a found a holocrom that tells everithing" in that time siul demostrat the holocrom and then the artefact come to live and talk about a new generation a new birht of the shadows and talk about a sith lord come to live that is already dead because the force permit this holocust and insurrection of the jedi and the galaxy will be at mercy of the new evolution that the holocrome tells to all and in the final of this message a name is been told "tulak hord" then luke skywalker close he` eyes and then said the republic needs to learn what we learn today. master ishi hiro tells princes lia that we need to assamble the republic army to go to nitulus.

    master siul we need to get the bottom of this matter so 5 jediknights will be dispatch in youre order and you will select this candidates from the jediorder........siul look at esoj and then said to him is youre pick a will wait for you in the hangar a will prepared everything for this conflict a will respect your pick go...
  7. coqui171 Jedi Padawan

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    Jedi Knight Jacen Halcyon volunteers for this mission!
  8. siul-fer-nando Jedi Knight

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    very well Jacen Halcyon report to my old padawan esoj zetineb and thanks for youre help, doing a reverece to a felow jedi siul return to his duties ad the preparing for depart.







    but in the other rim a masaage from the the new sith lord. " hello my firend, you know what to do, the jedi consil and the new republic army are forming again the time for the new warfare and the new begining is in hand, the enradication of the jedi order and the new republic will desintagrade from the galaxy.our victory is in youre hand my aprendice, tell all the sith sentinels that the war is begon and activate the new homsiens army to began moving to he naborian sector.

    in that moment whn the comunication was over the sith fallower take from hes belt a comunication divice and said, we got work to do tell to homussan to dispatch the dogs of war to naborian sector now.....and spred the word to all"... "yes master" and in the distance the homsiens infantery was forming and moving up with vehicules space figthers.
  9. coqui171 Jedi Padawan

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    Jacen Halcyon rushes to find esoj zetineb, anticipating the future mission.
  10. esoj-zetineb Jedi Knight

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    Meanwhile, in another part of the temple Jedi knight Esoj Zetineb is in deep thought. He thought that his master trusted him enough for him to choose the Jedi knights for this mission. He knew his master was allready proud of him and he would not let him down. Although thinking of all the Jedi names made his head spin so he decided to relax the best way he knew, Practicing!!

    As he reached the jedi training room he saw that he wasn't the only one there. He recognized this Jedi as a great swordswoman and as a great friend while training in the past in the temple, Alisa Monroe. " Hey Esoj Long time no see." She said, " What have you been up to?" " I thought you knew everything that goes around here Alisa," Esoj Replied " your allways good at finding things out." " Your right," she adds " but it is allways nice to hear it from a friends lips." Esoj ashamed sais "Your right and im sorry, its just im a little preocupied with this new mission from master Fernando." "Oh Yeah How's he doing?" She asked. "He's fully recovered and making preparations. Anyway since your here, how about a duel for old times sake?" "Why not!" She replies, and with that they take out their lightsabers, set them to training mode and activate them. They have been duel partners for years, winners on both sides, never holding any grudges and always complementing and congratulating eachother on eachothers victory. As the duel begins everything slows in their minds and they both read eachother perfectly not wanting to hurt each other but going all out. Each move scyncronized and perfect. This goes on for ten minutes then someone enters the training room... It was Jacen Halcyon. Jacen told Esoj about how he voluntered for this mission. Esoj Said he would be honored If to have him. He also asked Alisa If she would join. "Certanly I'd be Honored" Alisa responded. They rejoiced untill suddenly Master Siul Arived.....
  11. siul-fer-nando Jedi Knight

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    then in that moment when esejo, alisa and the young jancen siul fer nando interrupt veryy worried about nautillus and the naborian sector. siul replid with a little anger their no time for this yougling the wars just begon and the first battalion of the republic are scrumbling from battle.

    Siul gets 3 fragts ships and 3 star destroyes named: maximus, galaxux and conquest. more thna 30,000 new republic army troopers and 1000 starships fighters

    then in the a new stardestroyer ship that years ago was from the old empire siul was in hes chambers maditating. then a holographic massage from humo trki a jedimaster from usus tells to him, my number of troops are scrumbling and chatter a can hold to much and theres another matter in this comflict this sith only scavage the riuns of the old temples and their had fully new kind of wepons that a can deflect to much with my saber, a donth undertand. then siul told him humo donth let the sith get this amulets or ornaments because their constructing a ritual to revive the old sith am on my way. just hold on master hold what you can. ok master siul i will. then the capitan of the troopers came to siuls chambers to tell we are in natulus master siul. then siul calls to theirs fellows jedi to tells the plan at hand......
  12. esoj-zetineb Jedi Knight

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    Siul gave Esoj his own Stardestroyer to command. So wile Siul recieved the message Esoj was meditatind along with Alisa. Then a Republic commander appeared asking for their pardon and to tell them that Master Fer Nando is contacting them and that we have arived on Natulus. "Thank you Commander. Your dismissed." said Esoj, and with a few strokes of the panel two holographic figures appeared, Master Siul Fer Nando and Jacen. "We have arrived at Natulus but we have a problem, Master Humo Trki Is being overwhelmed By the Sith." "Is he Ok? Esoj Inquired. "For now yes but we mus help him. The Sith have weapons that are almost as strong as lightsabers, he is having trouble deflecting their rays." "By the force, How can this be?" Asked Alisa. "They must have been working on this for years and in secret." Master Siul replied, "We must help Master Humo at once" "I agree master. What do you want us to do?"......
  13. siul-fer-nando Jedi Knight

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    in that moment a explotion on the front line of the crafts ocurr, "this is master siul fer nando a get the full command respond to attack, master esoj and alisa confront this battle on space and a will land my troops to natilus to help humos with jancen, jancen get the air support to fishish this conflict and overwelm the sith by air.

    the war finaly star sith crafts are rare and fully armed the starships were like the x wings on the old days but more advance. esoj and alisa get to their fighters and get 200 republic fighters with them,
    then siul and jancen star landed to the planet natilus with thousands of troops and land tanks and some of the air suport fighters and bombers, and a realy surprised for the sith.

    then landed siul said lets help the jedi their jedi dying in this planet lets help humos at once then with a eye signal send jancen to the air support. siul get to the republic command center, status comander one of the commander said to master siul. all troops are landed and the tanks are in line of fire then siul said fire at once let this sith know that their reign is for nothing for.. yes sir..

    then siul said to the commander a will help master humos so a will get to the at ats advance that we get on jabin thank you to han for this . siul walking to command the 3 at ats advance walkers named advaisors to get master humos support and rescued.then in that moment a massage from master homus in line master siul a know that youre in natilus and a get the support but a sence the darkside in this site get here at once this presence is to great. then master humos get under fight with the elite sith soldiers but in the distance a darkfigure darks robes and legs in metalic then some of the republic soldiers try to fire this one and the with a single movement of the force dismised tha soldiers like flies. a sith knight get to the way of master humos and star to fight with the lightsabers then a jediknight named grece anam start fighting with this enigmatic figure, master homus worried finish with hes oponet and then run to grace that this figure dismised with. this figure saw master homus and then replid' this time a will get revange, a was slain by a master of the named vader wiht a sinic seen jump to master humos and the confrontation get started.

    a sence ...... is that possible it can be.... it was slain by master .... in naboo long time a go how is this possible.......commander get fastert to this becon signal master humos is in danger a very thret for hes live then siul get back to the at ats cargo to try to get master humos help...........




    and then from space a scuadron of sith fighters are flying near by the republic naval spaceships, and master esoj and alisa sence a disturbence in the force. one of the fighters was diferent from the others space fighters. this one get the atention to the jediknights that for that moment were the commanders of the republic space scuadron. this fellow had the darkside so intense that siul fer nando felted and replid to esoj this is siul "esoj a sence a disturbance in the force be carefull with this one the darkside is to great on this conflict we must be patient when we attack do you copy".......but in the force a roar was heard on the heds of the jedi and then siul said this words "EXAR KUN"..... then replyd to esoj be carefull to this one young one is a dangerous oponent , donth try nothing reckles......
  14. esoj-zetineb Jedi Knight

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    As Esoj heard his master Say the name Exar Kun he remembered reading about this Jedi. How evil he became and powerfull. He gave a glance to Alisa and she also knew. At that moment Esoj's ship was shaken badly. "Hull breach in the hangar bay" The PA system blared, "hull breach in the hangar bay." Esoj and Alisa knew He was here, Exar Kun. " Comander, keep this ship in orbit. And send 4 squadrons to atack the enemy" said Esoj. " Yes sir." Said the comander. Esoj gave Alisa the signal to follow hom to the hangar. On the way to the hangar, natuilus troopers were in the corridor so both jedi took their lightsabers out and started opening a path to the hangar, "Dont bother with all of them we must get to the hangar" Esoj instructed, "Allright" Said Alisa. Clearing a path proved to be somewat dificult as the nautilus wariors had the new blasters that were as powerfull as their lightsabers. Also Republic troopers were droping like flies. After a while they get through and reach the hangar bay where Exar Kun was waiting with his red lightsaber already activated. "Well I was right There are Jedi here" Exar said, "The sith will never return Exar, we will stop you" Esoj replied. " You know nothing boy, You and your lovely companion shal die here at my hand and he will be pleased" Exar added. " Who are you...." But befor Esoj could finish his sentence Exar started his atack. Esoj Blocked it easy and the battle began. Alisa aided Esoj but Exar was verry fast blocking every atack that came to his way. Esoj and Alisa were Amazed at Exar Kun's skill and how he was able to see every atack before it came. Esoj started to go on the offensive faster but made a mistake and was Force pushed by Exar to the wall leaving Alisa alone. Esoj was a little dizzy but got up quikly to aid her. the battle was ferce and intense It went on for over 20 minutes and then............
  15. siul-fer-nando Jedi Knight

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    playing the exar kun part

    ... ahhh theres pity you and youre companion will die in my hand then. the fighting was very intense and fierce. but exar kun uses the force to push back esoj and alisa then kun atract another lightsaber and conected toguether to maked a doblebladed lighsaber then bouth jedi star fighting wiht kun but kun attacks were very dedly than ever ad more faster..





    in nautilus soil.

    siul fernando get a motorspeeder to get and help master homus. in that moment humos and the sith lord were fighting but the sith slash him in the back and the fight was over. then siul arrived and jump at the sith to the back and used a force push to the concreat. siul grap master humos said to him "there secrets of the sith beyound our understanding if the darkside is to great the force we call for it to remain..." then with those words master humos die . siul fer nando look at the opoent and then this one said to him "at last a real challenge, and at last the sith we rised from the dark to rule the galaxy", siul fer nando get his lightsaber and get at front of this character. that hes face never been seean then bouth of them take of theirs ropes and ignited the lightsabers at the same time, siul said "MAUL impossible". it was the zabrack dark lord of the sith in the times of obi wan and qui gon jin "DARTH MAUL". then siul said "who send you to this war, and how did you live, if you was slain by obi wan in nabboo and in tatoine when my master was only a child". then with anger maul jump to siul and the fierce attacks started. siul try to evade hes attacks and get the oportunity to slained this sith for good but maul was to skillfull. maul hit siul with the lightsaber in the face and try to stab siul but siul block the move ,then siul uses the force to push back maul but the sith interact tru the force to blocked. maul ignited hes second lightsaber and conected to be the only weapon that he knows better. with skills siul blocked all hes attacks and then with a luck, siul used the force to do a force crush to maul and then push back. then siul get another lightsaber and conected together to make a doblebladed lightsaber like maul. then maul impres said to him "you walks sometimes in the darkside a know better" then bouth get under fight and siul slash the middle maul lightsaber to disable, siul kick and grap siul left hand and throw maul and get hes lightsaber in the hand but maul was to strong in the force and used teh force to grap back his weapon , but maul perceive that siul was strong in the force to, than maul ttack siul then siul attack maul in a diferent way then maul look at siul and with anger attack again then maul look at him and used the force to drain part of siul body energy. then siul dizzy block the attack of maul and then siul with a unlateral attack dispatch maul to the darkside of the force. siul dizzy look in the jedibealt to get the comlink and said "commander this is sssssiiul".... "help" "ffffaalllow the beecon signnal". then siul fall... and then in the distance siul can hear the republic troopers coming to aid him......
  16. esoj-zetineb Jedi Knight

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    Meanwhile in the star destroyer the battle between Exar Kun and Esoj and Alisa is getting fierce. Esoj and Alisa have fought against Double lightsaber weilders before but it was always with fellow students. This time an enemy so powerfull would test their skills. Every atack was blocked and paried. After long minutes of battle Esoj and Alisa manage to unarm their attacker, but Exar Kun uses his force lightning to attack. Esoj and Alisa get caught on the attack and scream in agony. They are both weakened by this and it gives Exar Kun enough time to recover his weapon. At the same time, although weak, Esoj was able to recover quikly and just in time to save Alisa from a deadly attack. Exar Kun and Esoj go all out giving enough time for Alisa to join again in the battle. They are all exausted but dont show it. "Prepare to die at my hands you fools" Exar sais. Then at that instance Exar stabs Alisa on her sholder and then Esoj as well. Exar Kun laughs at his impending Victory " Dont worry Your master will join you soon" As they both hear that they spring into action disarm Exar and slice him as a cross. " Iiiiimposssssibleeee. Aaaaaaaaaaaaah" Exar falls in four peaces. Once it is over Alisa falls and faints. Esoj resisting gets on the comunicator and sais " Commander (cough) Hurry to the hannnngar bayyyy...." Esoj colapses. "Master Esoj?....Master Esoj?? Respond please!" [Static]
  17. siul-fer-nando Jedi Knight

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    siul was recover from the last encounter of maul. then take control again of the natilus conflict then a troopers said to him, general siul their force are weeken abd chatter. siul look down and said to him prepared to get the governor sac jumun to me he got alot to explain.

    then in a few hours siul was meditating in the cargo room on the ones of the at at advance walkers named advisors. the doors was open and the govenor said to him " mercy youre a jedi you know mercy rihgt" then siul fer nando told "am not vader a know mercy but why did you join foces with this new sith. a donth know they come here and invade the planet and get somethings from the old graves of the darkzone when the old wars was get past ago". then siul turn around and the governor get in the pocket a mini blaster . siul feels a disturbance in the the force that in that moment then igniate the lightsaber and take off the governors right hand to disable from the mini blaster that he was carried. then siul said to him youre a traitor to the new republic and a sith a can feel it but a will not be youre executor the courts will be, trooper take it away. then siul send a holographic mesage to the jedi temple. " thi is Siul fer Nando the nauyilis conflict is been take care of but theis forces are taking curses to Naborian sector luke a need the approval of the jedi consil and the new senate to send more reinforcemnts to get control of the situation" . then luke skywalker said to him with the others of the consil we aprove you recuest but a sence to much anger in you Siul, to much hate, suffering do you want to sitll part of this conflict " then siul said to ishi hiro yes master a will. but a discover that the darkside of the force in this planet is been droun masters a disturbance in the force it is. then luke and ishi hiro said now take care of naboria and a will join you there, may the force be with you, and with you.

    Siul send a mesage to esoj in the star destroyer " eveything is fine down here a can feel that exar kun is gone for good and the others sith are regrouping in my home planet naboria a will be ther in a few hours wait for my signal. and theres a disturbnace in the force the darkside is growing to fast, and this war is not a republic war anymore is a new kind of extition agenda from the sith to the jedi be aware.
  18. esoj-zetineb Jedi Knight

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    "Understood master Ill meet you there as soon as repairs are done." Esoj replied to his master. Esoj fully recovered faster than expected though he was still a little sore. Alisa was still recovering from her injuries. Esoj was a little concerened about her, but he had to help with the repairs. He felt an odd disturbance in his former master. Something was not right. "Commander continue with the repais and as soon as your done make best speed to the Naborian system." "Yes General Zetineb" the commander replied. Esoj made his way to sick bay to check on Alisa. When she was almost struck down by Exar Kun something in him woke up. He never felt something like this before but felt it was always there. He cared about Alisa. When they were kids they were the best of friends. They always hung out with each other. Once they were at the Jedi archives studying for their Jedi History course. When at that moment an old rival of Esoj's came by and mocked both of them saying, "Hey lessoj!! I guess you couldnt study without your girlfriend huh??" This always anoyed Esoj. Esoj replied " Shes not my girlfriend! We're just friends" Although this backfired when he saw Alisa leave upset and almost crying. " Wait Alisa dont go." Says Esoj " Thanks a lot look what you have done" Esoj went after her hearing his rival laugh as he left. He looked all over for her and found her in the last place he thought to look. At the fountains. He felt embarrassed And though of leaving her alone. "Don't leave" Alisa said. " I could use the company." " Listen Im sorry I..." Esoj tried to speak but Alisa interrupted him " Its ok. Im not mad. Its just I realy cared about you but I guess you dont like me the way I do you." " You care about me that way?" Esoj asked. " I cant believe you didnt notice." " Alisa, listen to me. I care about you a lot Its just Im a little surprised about your reaction back there. But I dont think the masters would approve of us young apprentices being in love at our age. Were to young." " Your right Esjo. They would not approve. But I was so hurt about that boy's comment." "Dont worry about him Alisa he doesnt know better." They both laugh and begin to meditate about what just happened.

    As he entered the sick bay he saw Alisa was fully recovered. He felt a relief as he saw her standing getting ready to help him with the Stardestroyer's repairs. All of a sudden Esoj's comlink came on " General Zetineb all repairs are complete and were on our way to the Naborian System" "Verry good commander. Contact me as soon as we reach it." Esoj turned of his comlink. Esoj and Alisa looked at each other. They said nothing but their stares said everything. " I..." Esoj said but Alisa's lips interrupted him. He did not resist her kiss as he too was feeling the same thing. They both were waiting so long for this. As they cut their embrace these words come out of their mouths at the same time " I pledge my heart and life to yours" As they finish this sentence again the stardestroyer shakes. " Not again" Esoj said...
  19. siul-fer-nando Jedi Knight

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    Siul fer Nando calmly meditating resive a holo mesage from the native Planet of Naboria. that said to him this is governor allan non if the republic is here because of war am not alow it in my sector do you copy. then siul replied this is Siul fer Nando son of sual Nando of the clan Nando im were you exency because war is in youre yard the sith are there regroupin and a search for youre consul and permision to get inside and finish as a Nando" but youre a JEDI youre not permited in this planet as a Native naborian, you deside to part of them not part of the naborian enforcement. siul said im a jedi because my father instructme to be and am so sorry to batter but as a Nando and a naborian a will land my troops to get over the conflict with the sith cosin. then allan said as you wish but remember if you try something else you will be executed and the jedi will not help you. and you know why. then siul shut of the holo and remember when the slaughter happen. Siul what are you doing, nothing father am just practicing with my new lightsaber, then sual get and look very closely to the lightsaber that hes son did and said to him youre skills are complet, ok son let me show you some moves . then siul smile and remember when his father show the way of the lightsaber and the moments with hes father. then a one night siul and shiro was practicing and sual was meditating but there were thre of them but two were there practicing the other was in the way to the town to get some grosceries for the trip to the montains but siul looking down a tear show up in hes face and the sound of a lightsaber whuming and then the head of his father on the ground adn a firing from the left flank and a shadow get running to the bushes. and then siul tell to the commander . do not land a will land with some troops and you will take over of my absence contact esoj zaniteb to report and a need him in naboria asap. yes sir....
  20. esoj-zetineb Jedi Knight

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    Meanwile In Esoj Zetineb's Stardestroyer All power except Auxiliary and life-suport has shut down. Esoj felt a little frustrated but soon let it all go with the help of the force. He got on his communicator but all he got is static. " Alisa Lets check the bridge." "OK." Alisa answered. As soon as he reached the bridge a republic commander came to say " I apologize for the delay General. Our engines have been shut down." "How is that...." then he sensed it. A disturbance in the force. A dark presence on the ship. It was familiar Like Exar Kun but somehow different. This sith was smart, using the heat of the battle Between esoj Alisa and Exar to cover his tracks. He felt something in this sith that was familiar almost as if he knew him personally. "Alisa stay here and try to make contact with Master Siul. Tell him Well join him as soon as we can." "On that note sir," the commander added " We were receiving an important message from Siul's Stardestroyer but were cut off in the blackout." " All right. try to contact him again. Use the auxiliary power to restore communications if you have to." " But sir..." " Just do it Ill be fine." Said Esoj. "Yes sir!" Esoj made his way to the engine room but was stopped by Alisa. " Let me help you with this Sith." "No. I'm grateful you want to help me but this is between me and Cole" "What? How do you know it is him?" Alisa asked. "Cant you feel it?" Alisa tuned her senses on full and she also felt that familiarity. "You know how he is Alisa If your there He will use you to get to me. He knows your here and he wants you to come with me. You can help my by staying here and trying to get this ship back on course." Alisa looked at him with concern in her eyes but soon she composed herself and said " All right. Just be careful." With that he made his way to the engine room.

    As he got there he took his lightsaber out to be ready for anything. " Long time no see Lesoj" Cole laughed as he said that. " You always were a smart one Cole. I should have known you would turn to the Dark Side". " O not only that, I have seen the light. Everyone in the temple were jealous of my power, my realism, my truth". "Your truth leaded to a path none of us wanted to follow and never will", Esoj Added. "How did you turn and bacame a sith? Last I heard you were expelled from the academy by Master Luke himself". "Even you should know this one Lesoj". Esoj thinks and then he realizes it "You have been in contact with this new Sith Lord". "You always were to smart for your own good". Then Cole activates his lightsaber " that is why I have been sent to kill you and your little girlfriend". As he hears this Esoj activates his own Lightsaber getting ready for the fight of his life...
  21. siul-fer-nando Jedi Knight

    Member Since:
    Dec 30, 2002
    star 2
    in naboria Siul landed and the first ones to get off the ship was the rapublic troops and siul behind them then siul said to the republic officer"do not fallow me this task is my own, and a will contact you if a need youre support" yes sir. then a naborians guards with the allan un comes to with a carrier speeder. allan said there no sith here, if we seen it we will be at war right now you better know that, because of the sith or the empire our world suffer the scars of thuose times. then siul seen the racket naborian city and the metropolis repairs. tells me Siul the sith are extinct by the hand of skywalker youre master. then siul said to him never understimate the power of the darkside of the force, tell me something cousin how is the family. allan saw siul with like anger and then allan said their fine at matter a fact after we get to the goverment city hall a had something to show you, then siul sense the force in allan but it was so thin that siul donth batter to talk about it. then when siul and the others land in a old naborian massion and then siul remember, that it was he`s home and land. then he saw the magnificense land and the dawn in the horizon. allan call him and then a teen boy saw Siul and then embrace him and said to him papa welcome home. siul was surprised and a beatyfull women comes out the manssion exited and happy with long black hair, yellow hazel eyes saw him and said to him my husband at last is home........Siul was paralized and no a word comes to his mouth then he just stare at everybody said how this is possiblea can belived this then a flashback come to siul mind. siul this is monka itru she is youre to be wed in a few hours son but remember you almost had 8 years but you also going to be a jedi and a family head at the same time, but at 8 years old siul was only a child and almost tlak to much to justified this action. then siul ask to her am so sorry to be apart for so long a didnth know this. then her voice has an galra angel song it was youre father`s choice me an the others men of the Nando clan were slain on the empire wars and the only hope for the clan is that you and me get married to fortified the clan but do not worried allan is very nice to us and get us everything we ask for him, and youre here then monka embrace siul and give him a lovely kiss that siul ever encounter .siul sit down and then a tear come to hes cheak and monka with her finger graped and tel siul no more tears my love am here with you now. then a mesage from the starship get in line" master siul we get a masage from alisa and thir very bad shape their engines are out and then... siul remark him esoj a sense a disturbance in the force. a need to talk to alisa and send some reinforcements to atend that delay comander yes replid the trooper..... and then siul tells to allan how this happen and when. then allan start when youre only a child the emperor send troops to naboria to conquer the planet because we got the ore one of the most riches possetions the planet had then the naborians embarcs of war because of this some of the planet was with the emperor rules and another donth. must of the males naborians died in the war and then youre father comes with more rebels and fought this war for naboria. siul but what about my self and monka when this happen. then allan siad monka was the daughter of cheif tientu of the senate on caruscant then him and youre father get toguether and negociete to forfide and embarc again the clans and you and momka get married at 8 years old rmember siul the males in our planet was realy extinct the emperor knows that we naborians had sencitive to the force and we can heal with out medications tru the force. the emaperor and his puppet vader made a crusade to naborian sector to elimainate all males that is why must of the males got long hair and women aspect to camuflage the males from them. then siul saw a microfilm holophoto and then he saw him self. buyt my my son how that happen. allan the adna of youre were taken to do that child of youre able to put on her womb at time been you must
  22. esoj-zetineb Jedi Knight

    Member Since:
    Jan 23, 2006
    While siul was in his home planet onbord Esoj's stardestroyer Esoj was in the middle of his battle with Cole. Every time Cole swung his lightsaber Eso blocked his own. The both knew eachothers move well. Esoj felt exausted and he knew that Cole was too but esoj used the force to let go of the exaustion and the pain, Cole used it to make himself stronger. All of a suden Cole force pushed Esoj away from him. Then Cole takes out another lightsaber ang twists both of them together to make them one. "Now lets see you fight me with only one lightsabes Lessoj". Before Cole could atack he felt a metal cylindar hit him. Esoj had used the force to hurl it to him. Esoj also took out another lightsaber and made his own Double-bladed Lightsaber. Cole failed to realize that Esoj took Exar Kuns Lightsaber after he defeted him. "You think we didnt covered this at the academy?" Esoj said. " No matter. Ill kill you and soon Alisa will fall by my hands" said Cole. "Not if I have anything to say about it" Esoj replied. They both go at it, faster and more intense than ever. Lightsabers clashing and humming. Then Alisas voice comes up the PA system and says "Esoj we were able to contact Siul and able to tell him of our slight delay". "Your girlfriend really knows how to interupt someone in the middle of something" Cole says while still fighting. Esoj says nothing trying to use the force to beat his soreness and exaustion. "No remarks from you. Now you really have gone soft." Cole continued with his attacks but he was getting tired and he was trying to distract Esoj. After an intense 45 minutes of battle Cole made a desperate move to try to kill his former rival. In his desperation he missed and Esoj broke Coles lightsaber in two twired his own double lightsaber aroung him and plunged it into Cole's torso.

    After Esoj deactivate his lightsabers he goes to Cole and exhausted askes " Who is this new sith lord? Tell me now!" Cole replies " Ill never tell and you Siul and Alisa will be to late to stop his plans. The Sith will rise again HaHAHacough!" And with those words he dies. Esoj feels as thoiugh he has failed but he gets up goes to the main generator computer and reactivates all power and comunications. His communicator Beeps and it was Alisa " Esoj do you copy." " Loud and clear Alisa. What is our status?" " Whe are back on course to Naboria and have recieved word that Siul could be in trouble. Also he told some of his toops to join us to help us out with the repairs. Should I tell them to come?" "No" Esoj reeplied " Tell them we are on our way and also contact Master Luke. Once you contact him tell him I need to speak with him of an important mater." "Sure thing Esoj." Esoj was woried for his master. He felt somethig was wrong.
  23. siul-fer-nando Jedi Knight

    Member Since:
    Dec 30, 2002
    star 2
    then monka get he boy with her and some dark troopers start firing to monka and fer she ingnited the lightsaber by instict and block the firing and then the boy uses the force to push by instict then she slain the tree of them but some of them start firin them again and then monka tells the boy to take one of the blasters that the others drops and she star firing as well.

    Siul sense this darkone but this one it wasso powerfull that siul only word was bane.then this one star talking to siul you and youre patetic family will die at my hand. first a will kill you and then a give slain her and the boy ahhh is to strong in the force maybe a will get him and he will learn the darkside of the force yesss, that will be better and my master will be greatfull for this. and then siul attack this opoenet with anger and said to him you will never touch him and her and a will slain you. then both of them were so skillful in the art of lightsaber swordship that everytime siul or bane attack they block with grace and presision, for minutes they fought with anger and grace then bane said to him the only way to destry me is if you strike my down with all youre anger and become of the dark. then siul those words come like sweet on he`s veins then bane said to him lore him to the darkside of the force. ahh a can feel youre anger and hatred and youre frustration of falling for your family. then bane attack siul with more intense and siul block mosly presice then bane with a ortodox attack siul`lightsaber get broken and bane had he`ligthsaber blade in he`s face and told him ahh the end, now a will release you from youre misery bane swin up hes lightsaber and then siul grap the other lightsaber from the back and ignitated and block bane. bane was furios because of this than siul said to him a can fell it to but a will release you from the darkside and with a stroke with anger and hatred siul end his live with a nuhorizontal stroke from the left shoulder to right wrist. then Siul fer Nando fellt another powerfull being and then said monka, fer then siul run and saw the fighting betwen monka and sith troopers with blaster then siul jump tru them and slin them with so much anger that monka said to him it can be, you are not my husband you change then siul said to her no am me siul what do you talking about then monka said to him a will protect my son from you get back. siul said no am here for you then drop of he`s lightsaber and then told to her see am not here to kill you am ghere to rescu you. then monka felt love in hes words then a lightsaber ignited, and in the shadows stab manka from the back fer screm "mama" and tells siul ahhh is about time a was looking for you Siul fer Nando. then siul said to fer run my son run and go and alert my tropps yes father fer , then he drop the dead body of monak and then said to him am the one you looking for the one that murder you father and take off the clock and it was ishi hiro san the jedi master and part of the consil of coruscant.You Siul jump to him with all he`s anger and then star a intense fighting both of them demostrat their power of the force....
  24. esoj-zetineb Jedi Knight

    Member Since:
    Jan 23, 2006
    Esoj is on his personal quarters of the Stardestroyer Meditating as the ship makes his way to Naboria. At that moment Master Luke Skywalker appears before him on the monitor, ?May the force be with you Esoj!? Esoj replies, ?And with you Master Skywalker.? ?Report on your progress,? Luke asked, ?although I have already felt a few Dark warriors go down.? ?Yes master, and one of them will surprise you when you here it was Cole.? ?It is an unusual coincidence that he joined the dark side when he was expelled from the academy? Luke added. ?Master, I do believe that he was in contact with this new Sith lord even before he was expelled. The dark side was always with him although very secluded from us.? Esoj said. ?How can that be possible? It would mean that we could have traitors in our midst and never know about it.? ?A dreadful and dangerous thought if that were true.? Then Luke says, ?Esoj Go and help your Master Siul ASAP I sense he is in great danger?? ? I sense it too, a dark figure is close to him.? Then Alisa?s Holo-figure appeared before them, ?I?m sorry to interrupt Master Luke but we have reached Naboria and there is a battle on the surface. Master Siul is in the middle of it.? Esoj replies, ?Meet me at the hangar bay Alisa and tell the troops to send a battalion to the surface and to defend the Star destroyer?s in orbit.? ?Yes Esoj? Alisa?s figure disappears and Luke ends his transmission by saying, ? I will try to send more Jedi to your coordinates to help you with this new threat. Esoj, be mindful of your surroundings. The enemy may be closer than you think.? With that note Esoj was a little confused. Did Luke sense something evil from Alisa or was it because he knew about the relationship he has started with her. With that he went to the hangar bay. Alisa was already there waiting for him. Also a full battalion of Republic troopers were there. ?Lieutenant, Once you land make sure all innocents are rescued and cover them so they can make it to your crafts.? ?Yes sir General Esoj.? ?Lets go Alisa.? Esoj felt so weird saying that after hearing what Luke had said. Was she a spy for this new Sith Lord or did he misinterpreted Luke?s warning?
  25. siul-fer-nando Jedi Knight

    Member Since:
    Dec 30, 2002
    star 2
    then when everything was under control siul took monkas body and then a loud screem cames from siul. then a tear but the battle was not over yet then a two sith with lightsaber jump to siul and then siul grap the other lightsaber and he`s and start battle with this tow sith lord then in the open some more sith troops star firing to siul, even when siul was fighting with this two sith lord he also felt inside him because the dead of the love that he found out in that day, the darkside of the force becomes more and more tru he`s vains and with only a doble slash cut in the half the fighters then siul with more anger than ever jump tru the blasters attakers and dismised with very skillfull and anger. then Siul eyes becomes more hazel he runs tru he`s son and grap him, then more troops comes to and siul runing dismised with he`s lightsaber then he just starved and tired from the battle. he get he`s eyes to see the sunset but he felt that he was surrounded then siul tells to hes son take this my son if i die or you we die with honor like father and son but remember this the force is strong in you, fallow my lead, both of them fouhgt the troops and then siul republics troops fund them fightign alone then a commander tells to siul master siul master esoj is in naboria is coming to help and aid you, then siul replid to the comander take my son with you a donth need youre help for now, but master siul then siul said in voice more grave a donth need you here take my son and get back to the shattle, yes sir. then the republic troops firing get back to the shattle and took fer with them only siul was there fighting the sith troops that shatered... then esoj and alisa cames to them and finish the sith troops and esoj felt hes master darkness he saw he`s former master crying but with anger,firous and he knew that he`s master was walking tru the darkside of the force and then a shadow remarks and a voice tells to Siul" master Siul this is the real enemy of the cause the real threat of this darkness and then siul ignitated hes lightsaber and look tru esoj and alisa.........
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