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"Kyp" a short poem I wrote for school

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Dantana Skywalker, Sep 11, 2002.

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  1. Dantana Skywalker

    Dantana Skywalker Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    This is a poem I wrote for school. It's kinda dumb, but I felt like posting it.

    "Kyp"

    Green fire shaped into rings
    Surround a deep, dark hole
    A shuttered latched window
    Into a tortured soul

    A fallen god's twisted crown
    Silken black and silver
    A dark cloud of roguish wisps
    Curled like burnt cinders



    *bows* Thank you, thank you.

    Dana
     
  2. _Tenel_Ka_

    _Tenel_Ka_ Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Great poem Dana!

    I know how hard it can be for people to review them.

    I love that it rhymes. Most people don't bother.
     
  3. RogueJeedai

    RogueJeedai Jedi Padawan star 4

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    About Kyp + By Dantana = Good!! :D

    Poems that rhyme are the best kind of poems.
     
  4. Jaina_Solo_Durron

    Jaina_Solo_Durron Jedi Padawan star 4

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    awww..that's a great poem, Dana...wish i could write like you...

    -JSD
     
  5. Jez_3-14159265358979

    Jez_3-14159265358979 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    short and sweet dana! ::claps: Wonderful, just wonderful.

    Jez
     
  6. Duke-Dogwalker

    Duke-Dogwalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    'curled like burnt cinders'

    That's a great line. metaphorical, I think. If i can speak english properly that is...
     
  7. Amithyst_Blade

    Amithyst_Blade Jedi Padawan star 4

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