Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 3/3/05.....FINALLY!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by janiasolo, Oct 13, 2002.

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  1. janiasolo Jedi Knight

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    *EG* Of COURSE I'm gonna leave you hanging! That's what keeps ya coming back for more! Duh! Anyways...if I don't get another post today, you'll have to wait until Wensday because I have a 3-9 practice for the play tomorrow, and I will be way too tired to try to post. But, I hope to get a post up today...it all depends...
  2. Tinuviel_Jyana Jedi Master

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    i shall await your next post anxiously and attempt patience
  3. BobaKoon Jedi Grand Master

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    *runs into thread* AAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!! Why didn't I find this? :_| :_| :_|

    *bows down to jania* So sorry, I hadn't stopped in earlier. I'm glad you missed me though :) . The story is great so far! I especially love the "Forgive the intrusion, cherub". Hehe. Excellent.

    Can't wait to read more, as always! :) :) :)

  4. Jade_Max Force Ghost

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    *grins* Looking good there jaina!
  5. bobilll Jedi Master

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    is adrienne being tortured by palpatine? if so, i'll personally go there and beat up that raisin for her!

    ugh, you CAN'T leave us hanging! it's too cruel!
  6. BobaKoon Jedi Grand Master

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  7. Jade_Max Force Ghost

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  8. bobilll Jedi Master

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  9. janiasolo Jedi Knight

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    BobaKoon! You're here! YAYYY! I'm so happy. I'm glad you all like it, but Palpatine has nothing to do with this story (so far), sorry Bobill. I would post more but my disk is all the way up in my room and I'm too lazy to get it. I'll post more later...maybe. *EG*
  10. Jade_Max Force Ghost

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  11. BobaKoon Jedi Grand Master

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    I'll up this as well. UP!

  12. Lucid_Lady Jedi Master

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    I can't believe it took me this long just to get cerious enough to read this!
  13. janiasolo Jedi Knight

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    I would like to say "welcome" to Lucid_Lady...I'm so happy when new people come! And now...a song. AHEM (clears throat and sings) *Tommorrow! Tommorrow! I'll post here tommorrow! You're only a DAAAAAYYYY AAAAAAAAWWAAAAYYYYY!!* (windows shatter, dogs howl, ears bleed, etc.) Thank you...thank you. No, really. I am going to post tomorrow sincs I didn't post on Monday....if I remember. I have to go to the football game and perform (being on color guard and all) and then there's a dance where the guy I like might be. I hope so! See ya tommorrow!
  14. Jade_Max Force Ghost

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  15. janiasolo Jedi Knight

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    Okay boys and girls..ladies and gentlemen...here it is! A post. I know you've all been waiting for it. I'm sorry it's so short, but I have been having technical difficulties since I write my story on MY computer and my mom's the one with the internet access and I have to save the story on a disk and it has been acting up, so once I get it all straightened out, I will post more...though I can't promise it will be on Monday since we have play practice from 3 until 9.



    Oh, and wish me luck tonight! It's the senior show and during halftime the color guard has to lie down on our sides for one formation and it's cold and rainy right now and I so don't want to lie down on the muddy field. Ugh.


    Just as the horror appeared, it left and he shook his head, chuckling. ?Well, what do ya know? The bahishi helping to take down the Jedi IS a Jedi.? Adrienne calmed down, but anger still flashed in her black-green eyes.

    ?Was, Jorj. I was a Jedi.?

    ?Did they betray you?? ?No? almost escaped her lips, but she stopped herself, knowing that would give it all away.

    ?Yes, they hurt me deeply and I have vowed to devote the rest of my life to destroy them.? She eyed the handsome man warily and hoped he swallowed the line.
    His face was a mixture of compassion and lust. Adrienne was suddenly very aware of her body, accentuated in the small dress. He began to walk towards her again.

    He stood before her, his body looming over hers. He leaned down, kissing her with a passion she wanted to feel from the Jedi. She kissed him hungrily, imagining that it was Obi-Wan kissing her, rather than Jorj Car?das.

    As he gently carried her to the bedroom, she knew that this would be her last paying customer. She was going to the Jedi Temple that afternoon.



  16. Tinuviel_Jyana Jedi Master

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    great post there :) can't wait to see more

    and i'd prefer having obi too ;) [face_love]
  17. BobaKoon Jedi Grand Master

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    Short post, but still good. :) Can't wait to read what happens when she returns to the temple.

    UP till then!

  18. bobilll Jedi Master

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    short, but sweet.

    who's jorg? didn't quite get that.

    seems like he wants to use her pretty badly, though. fight, adrienne, fight!
  19. Lucid_Lady Jedi Master

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    That was an evil ending!!!
  20. Jade_Max Force Ghost

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    Yup... she's got talent, she does *grin* ain't she evil? *sniff* I'm so proud!
  21. janiasolo Jedi Knight

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    Thank you all! I just want everyone to know that even though it was cold and rainy Friday, the color guard DID NOT have to lie of the field! YAY! ALLELUIA! I was so happy. AND, last night I went to a Halloween party and my friend and I dressed up as Jedi. She was Barriss Offee (excuse the poor spelling) and Lumaria Unduli (I KNOW that's not the right spelling). It was fun until I ran over something and got a flat tire. It was a bad experience. Anyways...I am posting today since I have 3-9 play practice tommorrow and I don't know how the rest of the week is going to be like.

    BTW...BobaKoon where did you get your Harry Potter icon?


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    Adrienne stood before the Jedi Temple, it?s spires looking before her, drudging up not-so friendly memories. She took a deep breath and walked towards the main building. The plush carpet gave way beneath her lather boots and she could not help but stare in awe at the number of Jedi in the circular main room. A large statue of some Jedi Master towered over her and she stared at it until someone bumped into her. She turned, ready to berate them out for their carelessness, but whoever had hit her was gone. She frowned , the shrugged it off as she continued to look around.


    She swallowed hard, trying to find the courage to go further into the temple, to step into the world of Jedi she?d left so long ago. She was in the process of taking a step forward when a familiar voice had her spinning around.


    ?Adrienne? Adrienne Satine Eurethe, is it really you?? Adrienne smiled at the man standing before her, Mace Windu. She embraced him in a hug, then held him at arm?s length, admiring his Master status Jedi robes. He noted the sad look on her face as she studied the yards of cloth that hung on his shoulders. A lot had happened to her friend in the time she?d been gone.


    ?It?s been long, Adrienne. We haven?t seen each other in at least ten years.? He looked her up and down, a familiar sparkle in his eyes, one she?d missed very, very much. His face never changed from its serious expression as he spoke, but she could hear the teasing note in his voice. ?Should I be flattered you?ve deigned to come see me at last??

    She laughed, she couldn?t help it and it fell good to laugh with him after so long. ?Mace, you always knew what to say.? Her smile slowly died and his expression became concerned.

    ?Is everything alright??

    Adrienne was glad she had such a caring friend. She knew he would gladly help her, though she felt a little funny about having to use formalities with him.

    ?I?ve decided to come back to the order, Master Windu. I don?t want to be in the streets anymore. I want to turn my life around.? A smile crept across the Jedi?s face. He looked her straight n the eyes, then thew his head back in joyous laughter.

    ?This is wonderful! Master Yoda will surely agree with me when I ask him to allow you to return.? He took Adrienne by the arm and led her down one of the many corridors.

    ?What will happen if I am allowed to return?? She asked in a low voice, avoiding the many Jedi streaming through. Mace sighed, thinking.

    ?Well, you?ll have to decide whether you want to study under one of the Masters who train older Jedi like yourself or alone.?

    ?So I have to work with a Jedi who pities me or be forced to set my life straight on my own?? She said cynically. Mace eyed her, and opened his mouth to speak when a blur of blonde hair and blue eyes smacked into his torso. Adrienne looked down to see a small boy with a sheepish look on his face as he stared into Mace?s dark brown eyes.

    ?Excuse me, Master Windu.? He said in a small voice.

    ?Walk, Anakin. Walk.? The tall Jedi said softly. The boy nodded and finished his trek down the hall walking, though at a hurried pace. Adrienne watched the young boy go and turned back to Windu.

    ?Another young Padawan eager to get to lightsaber practice?? She asked sarcastically. Mace smiled, and looked back at the way the boy went.

    ?Anakin Sky
  22. Tinuviel_Jyana Jedi Master

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    OOOO!!! You brought in Anakin lol!!! wonderful dipiction lol...

    love that she meets up with Mace... he's my favorite smack down Master from the Council (excluding Yoda...)

    can't wait to see what else is in store for her :)
  23. bobilll Jedi Master

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    Walk, Anakin. Walk

    I can't tell you how many times I've heard that said to me!

    Yay, Adrienne's finally pulling her life together!

    Hmmm, wonder who will take her as an apprentice... and how she will interact with Anakin...
  24. Jazz_Skywalker Jedi Master

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  25. Lucid_Lady Jedi Master

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    Anikan was so cute as a child. What happened?





    Hee hee, just kidding!
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