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Before - Legends Lamentations for Padme

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Mystralgurl, Apr 10, 2005.

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  1. Mystralgurl

    Mystralgurl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oct 9, 2004
    This is a songfic I wrote... lately I've been reading some of my old master's songfics and thought 'hey I could do that..'

    In order to get the full effect you have to listen to the song while reading it...

    *****


    Long lost words whisper slowly to me

    Padme stood looking out of the window, the window of her prison.

    Still can?t find what keeps me here

    Anakin?s ghost flitted about the room. Outside, in place of Anakin, stood Darth Vader.

    When all this time I?ve been so hollow inside

    Padme felt hollow, a shell, her children gone, her husband gone, in his place?.

    I know you?re still there

    A monster?.

    Watching me
    Wanting me
    I can feel you pull me down
    Fearing you
    Loving you
    I won?t let you pull me down


    Padme felt determination?.

    This monster would not rule her.

    Hunting you I can smell you ? alive

    She felt him enter, heard his raspy breathing?.

    Your heart pounding in my head

    Felt him watching her?

    She felt him leave?.. and knew it was time.

    Watching me
    Wanting me
    I can feel you pull me down
    Saving me
    Raping me
    Watching me


    Vader entered later, and saw Padme on the floor. Dead.


    *****

    Thanks for reading!
     
  2. Phoenix_Reborn

    Phoenix_Reborn Jedi Master star 4

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    Feb 23, 2003
    Try posting this on the saga board.
     
  3. Mystralgurl

    Mystralgurl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oct 9, 2004
    the sage board? why?
     
  4. Mystralgurl

    Mystralgurl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oct 9, 2004
    oops.... nevermind! [face_blush]
     
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