Last Chance: Myn and Lara >New Year, new posts, and yes, the end is nigh<

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by _Derisa_Ollamhin_, Aug 20, 2001.

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  1. bkwormlisa Jedi Padawan

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    Feb 10, 2005
    Hi. Just wanted to say that I'm also new here, and I also like your story.

    I have just one comment about the last bit. Wes is almost certain to recognize Lara/Kirney, but the fourth pilot (Hobbie?) has a good chance of it too. The Rogues and the Wraiths worked together for several months. And whoever it is also has to know that Donos went to Corellia on leave for some reason, so they'll be looking for it.
  2. -thor- Force Ghost

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    Nov 15, 2002
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    *p .. ppp ... ppunnnttt* ;)
  3. REBADAMS7 Jedi Master

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    Bt any chance are you going to CIII?
    Bests
    Reb
  4. Tarrsk Jedi Padawan

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    Oct 19, 2002
    Derisa: Thanks for the reply! :) I agree that it is something of a stylistic quirk for Allston to refer to characters by their surnames, but I think it's significant that he only does it for certain characters, and more importantly, that he is very consistent about it. Donos, Phanan, and Janson are always referred to by surname, whereas Lara, Wedge, Kel, and Face are always referred to by their first names. In each case, the name used subtly affects the reader's perception of the character, and I think Allston does this purposefully.

    Again, this isn't saying that you must (or even should) follow Allston's nomenclature exactly... I just think it's something worth considering. :)
  5. Stoked1984 Jedi Padawan

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    Apr 30, 2004
    is this going to be updated any time soon?
  6. -thor- Force Ghost

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    Good question ... It's been half a year :(
  7. Mirax_Corran Force Ghost

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    Jan 25, 2005
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    I read this a while ago. It's really good. I really like Myn/Kirney or Lara of whatever her name is.

    Have to agree with thor, though. Has it been abandonned?
    Myra
  8. REBADAMS7 Jedi Master

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    Hey - can I have another post for my birthday? it's on the 7th

    Reb
  9. Mirax_Corran Force Ghost

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    My half-birthday is on the eleventh. O:)
  10. _Derisa_Ollamhin_ Force Ghost

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    My birthday was yesterday. Guys... you've been very patient, and I will tell you now the next post is in progress. It's also huge and unweildy and chock full of action and suspense...

    And that's all I will say. I will go now and finish it. :) With the beta's assistane it should be up within the week.

    And just so you know, I love you all.


    *Derisa*
  11. -thor- Force Ghost

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    [face_thinking] ... Hmmmmmmm ... [face_thinking]

    Nah! That can't be Derisa. Must be some kind of imposter [face_whistling]
  12. imiller Force Ghost

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    Yay! Hope to see it soon.
  13. _Derisa_Ollamhin_ Force Ghost

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    Hardiharhar...

    Post si finished: being beta-ed... and it's *HUGE*...
  14. Mirax_Corran Force Ghost

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    Really? I'd actually forgotten that I was reading anything here, but now I'll remember. :D
  15. REBADAMS7 Jedi Master

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    Yeha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    postie soon
    Yeha!!!!!!!
    oh and we did get Rachel a Horse!
    Reb
  16. Mirax_Corran Force Ghost

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  17. -thor- Force Ghost

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    *tick ... tick ... tick ... tick ... tick*

    Sitting at table, staring at clock, waiting for post ;)
  18. Fanficfan Jedi Knight

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    Jul 12, 2005
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    Just going to quietly up this. It's too good to be on the second page.
    Hopefully Derisa will get th hint and UPDATE!!!! it soon... Please?

    Fanficfan
  19. REBADAMS7 Jedi Master

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    Please Beta Reader
    RELEASE THE POST

    Reb
  20. Fanficfan Jedi Knight

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    *Uses mind trick*
    "You will post the next part of the story now!"
    Please? You're killing me.
  21. Fanficfan Jedi Knight

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    Ok, mind trick didn't work so lets try something new.
    *Pulls out blaster* "New post now! Or the Star Wars DVD gets it!"

    Please get some more of this story happening so I don't have to blast my SW DVDs. You don't want to make me do that do you?
  22. Fanficfan Jedi Knight

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    Right that's it. Say goodbye to "A New Hope"
    *BANG!*
    "NNNOOOOOOOOOOO! Derisa! Why? :_| You let my DVD die!"

    I'm going to keep upping this until I get the next part of the story or I get banned.

    Fanficfan
    P.S. I hope I get the next part, not banned.
  23. LordPotato Jedi Padawan

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    Jul 26, 2005
    Excellent! Most excellent!!! Just finished a two day marathon of old post, and I will keep coming back for more. Thanks for a little more expanded universe.
  24. Fanficfan Jedi Knight

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    *Pulls Empire Strikes Back out of case*
    "If you don't post something soon this innocent DVD gets it!"

    No! Derisa, please save my DVD. This madman is destroying my SW collection cause you haven't updated your story in so long. I don't know if I can live without ESB. Help me please.[face_praying]

    Fanficfan
  25. Mirax_Corran Force Ghost

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    *yells LOOK OVER THERE!*

    *grabs DVD out of fanficfan's hand*

    *replaces with look-alike DVD*

    You wouldn't make her shoot her ESB, would you?

    :p
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