Last Chance: Myn and Lara >New Year, new posts, and yes, the end is nigh<

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by _Derisa_Ollamhin_, Aug 20, 2001.

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  1. Fanficfan Jedi Knight

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    Jul 12, 2005
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    :_| Yes I would make her shoot ESB, and if the next post doesn't happen soon I'll make her shoot RotJ too.
    *Blasts DVD*
    "Damn it was a fake. You!" *Points at Mirax_Corran* "You'll pay for that!"
    *Starts shooting at Mirax_Corran, misses but vaporises real copy of ESB* :_|
    "See what you made me do! Again!"
  2. wedgesgal Jedi Padawan

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    Jun 16, 2005
    OK. You did it. I am a complete board virgin here. This is my very, very, VERY first post...

    This is an excellent, thoroughly enjoyable story. I love the Myn/Lara relationship as written in "Solo Command" and your portrayal of it here is wonderful. I love the characterisation of Kolot (I can see how you won an award for it :) ) and I'm absolutely hooked to see how you're going to resolve things.

    *coughs* You *are* going to resolve things? Please?
  3. Fanficfan Jedi Knight

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    @ Wedgesgal: Welcome to the forums. Care to join me in forcing Derisa to post more of this magnificent story?

    @ Derisa: Before I vapourise RotJ in my attempts to get the next part I'll go through the prequels.
    *Grabs TPM, points blaster*
    "Better hurry or the DVD gets it."
    *Looks menacing* [face_clown]
  4. skywalker64089 Force Ghost

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    Jan 16, 2005
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    Loved the story. The Rogue Squadron books kinda left the story of Myn and Lara hanging. I like how you are giving them closure.

    Eagerly awaiting the next post (that you mentioned three months ago).

    :D

    S.
  5. Fanficfan Jedi Knight

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    Jul 12, 2005
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    "Right. Your obvious disregard for the survival of my Star Wars DVD collection has forced me to take drastic action."

    *Steals Wedgesgal's copy of "A New Hope"*
    "I'm really sorry, I don't want to do this. But Derisa must be made to write more."

    *Blasts ANH*

    *Steals ESB*
    "The clock is ticking!"
  6. _Derisa_Ollamhin_ Force Ghost

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    Jul 31, 2000
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    lol
    you guys..
    okay... as it happens you are getting the next post... tonight unbeta'ed as my betareader has not managed to peel herself away from Galaxies long enough to check her email anytime in the last eight months...

    so... welcome new reader, and thank you for all the compliments... sorry for the sacry long wait... (I can't believe I still get new readers...) and the next piece will be posted tonight before I go to bed... I swear.


    *Derisa*
  7. Mirax_Corran Force Ghost

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    Jan 25, 2005
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    *runs around in circle screaming excitedly* Post! Post! Post! Post! [face_dancing]

    (So I'm nuts. :p )
  8. Fanficfan Jedi Knight

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    Jul 12, 2005
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    Can't wait Derisa 8-} It's about time too, if I wasn't already crazy waiting for this post would have driven me there.

    If you need a beta I'd be happy to help out. I'm not a prfessional editor or anything but I do love reading and Star Wars. I'm also pretty familiar with the Wraiths. Sling us a PM if your interested.
    But post more first or my offer is removed[face_devil]
  9. Fanficfan Jedi Knight

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    You promised us Derisa. You promised :_|
    But you were lying to us. How could you? We trusted you :_|

    *Runs away crying*
    I'll never trust an author again :_|
  10. LordPotato Jedi Padawan

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    Jul 26, 2005
    Wow, a post finally. There is a light at the end of the tunnel. Oh, no wait that's just the train. Well at least we know the penguins dont have her.
  11. _Derisa_Ollamhin_ Force Ghost

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    Dammit... I'm sorry, guys. My computer crashed... at least the post was on the laptop... lol

    Here you go, enjoy...
    and I warned you... it's *huge*

    *Derisa*



    "I know exactly how the Empire is going to trap you, Wedge." Even the distortion of hyper-light communications couldn't disguise Iella Wessiri's friendly derision. "You'll receive an emergency distress signal supposedly from an old Rogue, and naturally you'll come flying in to the rescue, turbolasers blazing, dismissing the need for groundwork, back-up, or actual preparation of any kind. You'll think to yourself, 'It's worked so many times before, why not this time? And that's it: they'll have you."

    Within his cockpit Wedge sighed, acknowledging the truth of her half-joking analysis. "Probably, Iella," he said, "Do you think that's what is happening now?"

    He heard the Intel officer pause before answering, no doubt to consider the situation and her impressions of the woman who had sent Wedge the cryptic tightbeam message,which Iella had helped him decifer. "Well, not that my saying otherwise would stop you, Antilles, but... no," she said at last, "I think she's genuine."

    "I trust your opinion, Iella-"

    "Not more than your own gut," she retorted, "But since they both agree in this case, I'll be very surprised if this is a trap. Corellia's antagonism to either side stands us in good stead this time, and Ms. Petothel's chosen Corellia for a reason. So... there's only one thing I can tell you, other than not to get too badly shot up."

    "What's that?" he asked. Another pause and this time Wedge felt an odd, weightless sensation as he waited for her reply. Was that hope? Anticipation? He'd put those feelings for Iella aside a year ago, when her husband had returned from the dead, only to be revealed as a sleeper agent who ended up actually dying at her hands. She'd thrown herself into her work after that, dealing with her demons in her own way. He'd set aside his powerful feelings for her until they both had the time to recover, and heal from their own losses and disappointments...

    "How about who you five are going to be while you're on the old homeworld?" Wedge's reverie was interrupted and the possibilities he had entertained vanished as she began to relay details from General Cracken as to their contacts and cover IDs, should they need them. She broke the connection briskly, leaving Wedge shaking his head at his own earlier romantic musings. No, she'd healed, and she'd moved on. Perhaps he even reminded her too much of those very tragic times. He didn't have time to dwell on might-have-beens, anyway: he had a job to do.

    Back to being the very picture of an efficient commander with cold-space lubricant in his veins instead of blood, he briefed his team. Minutes later they were free of the streaming light of hyperspace and slipping into a standard approach to the planet of his birth. From here, Corellia was a golden sphere hanging in space, an immense jewel on the diadem of some ancient goddess. Her sister worlds of Talus and Trallus, Drall and Selonia spangled the huge orbital plane around Centerpoint Station, complementary jewels to the central setting. They were small in the vast distances of space, but lovely in their remote light.

    "Remember, Rogues," Wedge stated over the squad channel when they'd aligned with Coronet City's approach vector, "We're here as a merc quad to escort Dur Khaima Outbound freight, so, I hesitate to ask this, but fly sloppier than usual."

    "Roger that, Lead," Wes Janson replied, unable to resist the opening, "Flying casual."

    "Can the chatter, Three," Wedge barked, before continuing with the in-flight briefing, "Our cover ship is scheduled to depart in thirty-six hours. That's a narrow window to do what we came here to do, but we'll deal with that at the time, if necessary."

    "So we detonate those bridges when we come to them?" Hobbie asked in a wry tone.

    There came a sound of a shared chuckle over the comms and then the team swung their loosened formation of ships down into Corellia's gravi/>
  12. KirneySlane22 Jedi Knight

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    Jun 12, 2003
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    *blinks*


    *blinks again*



    A post. A real, certifiable post.

    The end is nigh!!! (j/k)

    Great post Derisa! A bit wierd (I am so going to have to reread this whole story to truely understand what was going on.) but still, a post!!!

    Kir
  13. -thor- Force Ghost

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    Nov 15, 2002
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    *rubs eyes*

    Nah ... that can't be a post. I must be asleep and dreaming.

    *eyes pills he has to take and dumps them into the toilet*
  14. Mirax_Corran Force Ghost

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    Jan 25, 2005
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    *reads post*

    :eek: :eek: :eek: Wow, was that a good post! I really liked how Kirney sort of reverted to Gara at that moment. It really shows that Gara will always be part of her, which is really powerful.

    Great post!
  15. _Derisa_Ollamhin_ Force Ghost

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    Jul 31, 2000
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    ... grd crsed thing: can't update title... :(

    Thanks for responding guys. :) 'Preciate it. :)

    More to come.


    *Derisa*
  16. PsychoticEwok Jedi Padawan

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    Sep 4, 2005
    -drools- wow....Great job Derisa! Just stumbled across this the other day. And I happened to have just finished re-reading the Xwing series (up to #8 anyway)lucky me! Keep up the awesome work!
    oyah...^Ups^;)
  17. Fanficfan Jedi Knight

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    Jul 12, 2005
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    Finally, all my threats and destroying SW DVD's has paid off. Great post, can't wait for the next part.

    I'll be holding you to that [face_devil]
  18. REBADAMS7 Jedi Master

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    Feb 5, 2001
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    What's that quote
    "Never give up - never surrender!"
    Oh I am so glad I checked here today. Well written, tight action paced and REAL!

    Love how you do this - write more - faster!
    Reb!!!
  19. padawanlissa Jedi Master

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    Jul 31, 2005
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    I started reading this a couple days ago and now I'm most of the way through it. It's great. Keep up the good work Derisa:)

    I've finished it now. I want more!
  20. _Derisa_Ollamhin_ Force Ghost

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    Jul 31, 2000
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    I am working on it guys... believe it or not... there is more to come...
  21. Fanficfan Jedi Knight

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    Jul 12, 2005
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    :eek: *pinches self* "am I dreaming? Are you really there?"



    o_O Yeah, I've heard that before.......................
    Give us a new post please.
  22. Fanficfan Jedi Knight

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    Jul 12, 2005
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    Soo... Anything fun happening here?

    LIKE A POST!!!!!!

    You know you want to update Derisa, why don't you give in to the temptation? If you need a beta I selflessly offer my services for the greater good

    Please post soon
    fanficfan
  23. _Derisa_Ollamhin_ Force Ghost

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    Jul 31, 2000
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    so... life has taken its toll, I found a job, lost a job, had some investigative surgery, got myself a man, and found another job, not at all in that order. I have the hand written draft of the next post, and will set to putting it on pooter in the very near future, and eventually will finish this f-ing story, and the others I had started ages back and never finished: but I know what happens and all I have to do is write the bastards.

    fanficfan... you are willing to beta, hm? alrighty: PM me with your email addie, please please, and I will send you the draft of the next posts, plus the outline for the last chapters. :)

    Have a good weekend all: I work straight through till Tuesday: may have something ready for then.

    :)

    *Derisa*
  24. Fanficfan Jedi Knight

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    Jul 12, 2005
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    :eek: You... You're alive??? Everyone was saying you were dead.
    Can't wait for the next chapter.
    PM away
  25. padawanlissa Jedi Master

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    Jul 31, 2005
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    Yay!! We might have a new chapter soon!
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