Lightswords of Fury | 8 Mos Post TLC | L/M AU | TAGGED| Important Note - Please read

I wish someone had replied since ismaren did last night....but oh well.......I'll be gone most of today, so I thought I'd up my story for others to read while I am gone. I'll be working on chapter 3 this weekend so hopefully, it'll be up my next wednesday........the 17th.......

Any more guesses about what will happen next??? here's a hint: go back to when I gave a clue, it's probably back on page 2......

 

I know what happens next... but then you probably don't want me blabbing about it

 

UP please.

Hmmmm. I had to go check your clues.... Hmmmmm..... I think I want to be surprised! (that's code for I have no idea!)

~Baroness

 

here's the hint again: someone from Luke's past returns.....and its NOT Callista (she does not exist in my story because she died on the Eye a long time ago).
I don't know anything about Shira Brie (never read the comics) so its NOT her either.......that only leaves one person



I'll work on Chapter 3 probably tomorrow (maybe some tonight).....I was gone most of today to a bigger city nearby to the zoo, a mall, a big furniture store that has an electronics/computers/etc department and a bookstore (B&N).

 

I'm still totally lost. I gather It's a female that returns then? *thinks*

 

Gosh, golly gosh - great Liz! You know better than to call me "Amidala"

Am

 

I know, Amses


I'm going to finish up chapter 3 to send off to AngelQueen, by this afternoon.

Hopefully, the next post will come Wednesday(probably/possibly late) or Thursday, depending on when she gets back from her short little trip. (She'll be gone Sunday-Wednesday and she's going to take chapter 3 with her to make notes on )


I don't know how long chapter 3 will end up being.......but its definitely going to be shorter than chapter 2 (that was 11 pages long! [face_shocked])

 

okay, I know its ridiculous for me to be upping this *again*, but this fell to page 5 after I upped it this morning........

Chapter 3 has been sent to AngelQueen......I'm guessing it depends on how many changes she wants me to make, on when it gets posted. (I'm still aiming for wednesday or thursday or at the very LATEST, Friday........)



::uts down a big plate of freshly baked cookies:::

hello?
Anyone?

 

BEAUTIFUL!!!!

Not getting a clear answer out of Mara, Luke walked back to his bedroom to dry his hair. Mara was about to think Luke was just insane, when the information at last scrolled onto the screen. Luke, drying his hair inside his bedroom, felt a great disturbance in the Force coming from his sitting room.

LOLOLOL!!!! A great disturbance indeed!!!

Oh, and the AUNT MARA SILLY - beautiful!!!

 

mmm, cookies

 

inez: Well, yes and no, as Emmi said, babies talk at different ages, and it may have been a *FORCE*-induced word. (would *induced* be the right word?) (My oldest niece called me "GiGi" when she was around 10/11 months old - and my estimates say that Jaina and Jacen are closer to 10 months than to 8 months - and my youngest niece could say Mama or Dada by around 6 or so months or at least she was starting to......)


AngelQueen: Nope, Mara is not happy. He tries to explain and SLAP! He gets hit......hopefully he'll be able to explain without getting hurt again


Obi-Zahn: Nope, she isn't happy!


Baroness: :::whistles::: I am not saying a word. You never know about poor Luke getting a defense for himself!

JM-Anakin Solo: Yeah...your scenes will get a lot of replies.....but.....um.......

U_KnOwWhOo: where's that motivation you promised?
Yeah.....poor Luke.....all he does is give her a gift and she takes it the *wrong way*!

Amidala: Thanks for replying and supporting my writing!
You were a great help with all those tips back in the beginning.

J_K Dart: Thanks for reading! Glad you liked the *Aunt Mara* part!

ismaren : Yup, it *really* bruised his face. I believe she probably slapped him on his scarred side - the one where he has the wampa scratch scar.

Okay, that should be everybody - don't try to pump Emmi for any kind of hints - she's on vacation!

And AngelQueen is too full of *ice cream* to say anything......

 

Just a little UP for Miss Jedi_Liz!

 

up again......hmm, seems every other post I am making is an "UP"


I'll try to get a teaser line from chapter 3 up here as soon as I can.......


I know its hard to wait a week, but it'll be worth it.....and I'll probably put chapter 4 pretty soon after chapter 3, like on say, the next Monday or Tuesday, but that would only be if I think that chapter is ready.
Or it might be because I might have a vacation trip planned.

If I do go on vacation, there will be *NO* story posts at all (probably wouldn't have internet access and anyway, my stories are kept on my desktop computer, not my portable one........) and I would count on my readers to keep this story "UP" for me


If I do end up going on vacation, I will make an annoucement here........

Up!

 

1st draft of chapter 3 is back and 2nd draft is being written as I write this!


This *may* be a long chapter after all! (Depending on how much gets whacked by the beta reader!)


I hope you guys are still out there!


hmmm, I know what to do......

::takes a freshly baked extra extra large pizza out of the oven::::

Free Pizza!!!!

 

*sighs* I finally gave in to... uh... myself? and read this story... or at least this part of the revised thingy... can I have a link to the older one? Por favor?
BTW, it's a really good story and I look forward to reading the rest!
God bless!
<3-Moose

 

here is a link to the ORIGINAL thread.......its not the best writing in the world and does *not* flow as well as this revised version does.........

OLD Lightswords thread
Its locked, so you *can't* reply to it anymore.

Thanks for delurking, Malz!

 

about 5 hours since the last up.........I'll be heading for bed soon.......

update on chapter 3 2nd draft - its *now* the longest chapter yet, but that remains to be seen - when AngelQueen gets her hands on it.

Good Night!

 

oooo, a long post! Long posts are very nice. Still trying to figure out who mystery person is that returns. My mind runs on autopilot over the summer.

 

That was great, Liz. I loved how easily Mara found herself liking baby Jaina. It's good that she gave the lightsaber back since it clearly had different meanings for Luke and Mara when it was given.

Waiting happily for Chapter 3.

 

Sara Yeah, well actually its *baby Jaina* that likes Mara .......and that will probably make some things difficult for Mara

ismaren You still can't guess yet? Wow.....hmmm......I'll have to help you out there......think of someone who Luke met not long after the battle of Endor.......there, that probably *should* give it away!


If it actually stays around 18 pages, I may end up dividing chapter 3 into two parts, like Chapter 3 part A and Chapter 3 part B, but again, that depends.




::uts out a plate of cinnamon rolls:::

There's nothing like *FREE* food to attract potential readers!

 

well, shows how much I know about babies *looks at all the goodies* you sure know how to bribe us into staying Liz! *stuffs face*

inez

 

So Liz, do you keep hinting about a certain senator with multi-hued eyes?????

 

FREE PIZZA!?!?! GIMME! I already gave my guess, but hints about a certain person whose name begins with a "G" are abundant as plot bunnies...

Saber

 

Inez: Bribe? me? (discretely hands a $20 credit to Inez under the table and whistles)

Baroness: Your insight serves you well.......

Saber: Same comment as I gave to Baroness


As soon as AngelQueen gets back from her grandmother's house tomorrow night or Wednesday, and has looked over the next draft, I'll let you know if I'll be posting Wednesday or Thursday.

 

Yay! But before Monday (please?) so I can read it before I go to Michigan!
Can't wait for more!
God bless y'all!
<3-Moose
*steals some of the free food that happened to be sitting right next to her*
mmm...unprocessed fishsticks...
wait a minute...