Lightswords of Fury | 8 Mos Post TLC | L/M AU | TAGGED| Important Note - Please read

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  1. Ireth_Tasartir Jedi Grand Master

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    Great Xmas gift!!!! :D

    I don't mind waiting for the next one if it's half as good as this one... ;)
  2. ChildOfWinds Chosen One

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    Nice job, Liz! This is really a great story! I can't wait to see what will happen next!
    This was a nice present for the Christmas season!
  3. JadenSkywalker Force Ghost

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    This is great, Jedi Liz! I'm only on chapter 4, but loving every bit of it. I just can't stop grinning through it all. :D

    *scrables away to finish catching up*
  4. Mara_Skywhiner Jedi Knight

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    that was great Liz!!! can't wait for part 2... lemme guess... Luke's turn?
    up!!
    ~Mara
  5. Suzuki_Akira Force Ghost

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    Great! I am really engrossed in this, I want more. By the way...WHAT EXACTLY WAS IN THE BOX?! And will Mara use it? ;)
  6. Tych_sel Force Ghost

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    Great post there, Liz. You've done a nice job of setting things up for the wedding, which I'm guessing will be coming up soon. (Unless something happens to prevent it, which I won't count out.)


    Force be with you,

    Tych_sel
  7. Jedi_Liz Force Ghost

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    I'll do my replies tomorrow. Sending this up for latecomers.....kind of hard to remember this fic is in here with the new boards.....

    Anyway, UP!
  8. MariahJade2 Former Fan Fiction Archive Editor

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    Hi Liz. Nice to see an update on this. Cute. :)
  9. Malz4JESUS Jedi Grand Master

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    WooHoo! :D New post! :cool:

    I'm scared to know what they have planned! :eek:


    God bless!

    -Malz
  10. Ariapaige Jedi Knight

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    Happy New Year to everyone here!

    Poor Mara! What are they planning... [face_mischief] I can't wait to find out.

    ;) Paige
  11. Jedi_Liz Force Ghost

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    Time for my Replies!


    Luney - hehehe, yes they are being themselves. Would I ever write them as perfect angels?

    J_M BullDog - oh, I wouldn't know......who says Han has something planned? :p [face_mischief]

    Lank in Disguise - Thanks. :)

    Ireth - oh, it'll be good....I just need to chat with my beta reader for small brainstorming session to finish the chapter off.

    ChildOfWinds - Thank You! Hopefully you won't have to wait very long for the next part of this chapter.

    Jaden - welcome! Thank YOU!

    MaraSkywhiner - not necessarily Luke's turn. ;)

    Suzuki - Heh.......I would usually say you'll see, but you'll have to use your imagination. ;)

    Tych - well, I wouldn't count anything out, but I'm not THAT cruel!

    Mariah - welcome back! I hope you're doing better with your health. :)

    Malz - Be Afraid, be very afraid. :p

    Aria - heh. Hopefully you won't have to wait 4 months to find out.



    Thanks for the replies everyone. :)




  12. Devi Jedi Master

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    Wedding preparations can be daunting ever for a Jedi, hm? ;) I enjoyed this chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next one. :)
  13. Lank_Pavail Jedi Grand Master

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  14. Ireth_Tasartir Jedi Grand Master

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  15. Master_Vicky Jedi Master

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    I liked it! :D I got to it a bit late, but it was definitely worth it. I can't wait for part two.



    -Vicster
  16. Suzuki_Akira Force Ghost

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    *powers up*KAMEHAMEUP!!! 8-}
  17. Lt_Jaina_Solo Jedi Grand Master

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  18. Jedi_Liz Force Ghost

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    working on the second half right this moment. I don't have a Estimated Time of Posting YET, but I'm hoping by Valentines Day. Which would be perfect cause that's the day I posted that VERY special chapter LAST year. ;) ;)
  19. Ireth_Tasartir Jedi Grand Master

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    Valentine's Day??? Great... :D That's only a couple of weeks away!!! :D
  20. Lt_Jaina_Solo Jedi Grand Master

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  21. Ireth_Tasartir Jedi Grand Master

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    Almost Valentine's day... [face_mischief]

    As if whith all this pink around we could miss that day... :p
  22. Lank_Pavail Jedi Grand Master

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    And up again. *looks for his nice outift so he can blend in at the wedding*
  23. Jedi_Liz Force Ghost

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    I'll be posting the end of chapter 16 either later tonight or tomorrow morning. Most likely later tonight. I just sent my final copy of it to my beta reader. The reason I didn't get it posted last night was cause her network at college woudln't let her logon, so she wasn't able to log on to AIM.

    Anyway, I'll post it ASAP. Thanks for being patient. :)
  24. Jedi_Liz Force Ghost

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    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    Chapter 16 - THE WEDDING
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~


    As Mara's bridesmaids finished turning her from awkward woman into stunning bride, Luke Skywalker stood at the top of the platform, nervously playing with his tie. He hated wearing it, but after Han had put up a fuss his sister and fiancé had insisted he wear one, it being his wedding day. Han had smirked in satisfaction afterwards, and now Luke was stuck in the most uncomfortable clothing known to humankind. And Leia was going to kill him if he tugged on his collar one more time.


    Luke heard his brother-in-law, who was standing near by, clear his throat before he placed a friendly hand on Luke's shoulder. "You don't have to be so nervous kid. Its not like Mara still wants to kill you.?


    ?Or does she?? Chimed in a new voice, that of his other good friend Wedge Antilles. Luke gave them a half smile, the butterflies suddenly leaving him.


    Within a few minutes, joyous music began playing over speakers set throughout the gardens. Luke?s other groomsmen went down a side stair to escort their chosen bridesmaids, leaving the groom alone with his thoughts.


    Talon Karrde offered his arm to the veiled Mara as she stepped behind her matron of Honor, Leia, and Han Solo. "Are you ready my dear?"


    "Ready as I'll ever be, Talon." She smiled awkwardly, taking a deep calming breath as her final journey towards her new life began.


    Every step she took was part of a new beginning; the beginning of starting a new life and trying to reconcile with her past. She thought marrying Luke was the best thing that was going to happen to her in her entire life as the platform came into view. She could see Luke waiting for her at the top of it, and he looked nearly as nervous as she was.


    Within another minute, she was nearly face to face with Luke. She felt Karrde?s arm go slack as she let go of her arm and she opened her eyes, which she didn?t remember shutting, and was staring into Luke?s alluring blue ones.


    The Master of Ceremonies, Admiral Ackbar, was standing directly in front of her. Luke had taken his place next to her and quickly gave her hand a reassuring squeeze. They just had to survive the ceremony before the fun could begin.


    Admiral Ackbar spoke, ?Today we are gathered to celebrate the nuptials of Luke Skywalker to Mara Jade. It has been many a long journey to this point for these two and today those journeys end and a new one begins. They have written their own vows, so let us begin.?


    Luke turned so he was facing Mara, and looked into her brilliant green eyes as he began. Taking her hand in his own, he placed a ring on her finger, saying, ?With this ring, I pledge my love to you Mara, always." Mara smiled as the cool band slipped into place perfectly on her right hand.


    She took the ring Leia was holding and placed it on Luke?s hand. ?With this ring, Luke, my heart will forever belong to you.?


    After they had placed the rings on each other?s hands, Ackbar spoke again. ?The New Republic takes it as a great honor to present Mr. and Mrs. Luke Skywalker. ? Turning his head towards Luke, he said, ?You may kiss your bride.?


    Luke gently tipped Mara?s face upward, placing his lips on hers in a gentle kiss. Her arms snaked around his neck as their first official kiss as husband and wife deepened. It only ended when Jaina squealed out Mara?s name from the audience of guests, making both Luke and Mara chuckle.


    Due to his honorary military status, two lines of New Republic soldiers gave Luke a special salute as he and Mara left the ceremony. They were greeted at the exit of the gardens by a chauffeur who led them to the hoverlimo which was to take them to the reception.

    As they made their way to the limo, a holographer - the only one that had been allowed into the high security wedding - asked to take their holograph. Luke and Mara smiled, then Luke assisted Mara into the limo. "Let me sit beside my wife first, and then you can take it," Luke said with a grin. The holog
  25. Ireth_Tasartir Jedi Grand Master

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    He hated wearing it, but after Han had put up a fuss his sister and fiancé had insisted he wear one, it being his wedding day. Han had smirked in satisfaction afterwards, and now Luke was stuck in the most uncomfortable clothing known to humankind.

    Good one...make him suffer ;) :p

    Great chappie...Lovely wedding :D

    //Luke, please drink the wine// She gave him a pleading look he had never seen before.


    //Mara, you know I don?t drink alcohol// //Luke, its important. I found out that Han and Wedge are planning to invade the bridal suite if you refuse to drink wine. They want to make sure that they know when we have?? // Luke?s face flushed a deep red. He immediately stood up and gestured for a waiter to come back.


    [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    Those guys!!! :p What a pair,han and Wedge!!!! [face_laugh]
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