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Before - Legends Little fuzzy animals bother me (and nails too) Obi and Qui vignette thanks for the noms

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by earlybird-obi-wan, Jul 2, 2008.

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  1. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Jedi Grand Master star 6

    Aug 21, 2006
    Title Little fuzzy animals bother me
    Author: Earlybird-obi-wan
    Timeframe: JA
    Characters: Obi-Wan 22, Qui-Gon, Mace Windu, Yoda
    Genre: first sentence challenge vignette, humor
    Summary: Obi-Wan and nails

    Little fuzzy animals bother me

    ?Little fuzzy animals bother me.?

    ?Yes Obi-Wan. I know but it is only for a day and a night. Master Nas-Aena has to visit the healer?s for that ingrown nail job.?

    ?Sure, master taking after the animal she cares for.?


    ?She is Bothan and she has large nails.?

    Qui-Gon Jinn smiled when he pictured the old Bothan teacher with her large nails. ?Obi-Wan is right of course. Yes, she sure can be ticklish. Ticklish. Yeah that will teach him a lesson.?

    ?Geez master, don?t, you know I don?t like that?


    ?Screeeeech, screeeeeaaach?
    ?Screeeeech, screeeeeaaach?

    ?Using the Force to scrape your nails on that plate, frivolous use of the Force master. Grr, Aauw, stop it.?

    ?Screeeeech, screeeeeaaach?
    ?Screeeeech, screeeeeaaach?

    Obi-Wan was squirming on the floor of the apartment looking at the Rockhound in his master?s arms, trying to shut his ears from the screeching noise which even felt like the tickling of so many hairs of said rodent moving along his spine and waist. ?Hey! Can you ah grr aah stop.?

    ?Screeeeech, screeeeeaaach?
    ?Screeeeech, screeeeeaaach?

    ?Sure but you have to do something?

    ?No not that? and he felt more marching antsy ants on his back and the little rodent being rocked gently and making cooing sounds. Sounds like ?Oh noooh?

    ?Screeeeech, screeeeeaaach?
    ?Screeeeech, screeeeeaaach?

    ?Ye yeah ooh I will?

    ?I will stop, here take her. And about frivolous use, you know, masters can use that when they like it.?

    ?This is bad? Obi-Wan said and he took the offered Rockhound from Qui-Gon?s arms.
    He tried to hold the animal without moving it to suddenly but the rodent sensed his unease and started to move its little front paws.

    ?It tickles. Can I put it somewhere??

    ?After I have cleaned the box.?

    Obi-Wan saw his master starting to put new straw in the large box and hopped from foot to foot silently urging him to hurry.

    ?Yes Obi-Wan?

    ?Haa haatschi?

    ?Ah, come you can put her in the box.?

    With a relieved smile on his face Obi-Wan dropped the Rockhound feather-light into the box and ran towards the fresher to clean his hands and face.

    Qui-Gon just grinned and put the box with the Rockhound in the hallway.

    Coming back Obi-Wan said with a small grin on his face ?why have you offered master Nas-Aena our services. I know of a far better place to put this Rockhound. She appreciates them greatly.?

    ?Adi Gallia??




    ?Ah not that one. Nu Obi-Wan??

    ?Yes master. I have heard that story from master Perion.?

    Qui-Gon?s eyes started to gleam with laughter and he said ?serious Padawan??

    ?Yes master. I heard from him that master Nu appreciates Rockhounds, seven Rockhounds to be precise. Haatschi?

    ?Yes you and anything furry and little.?

    ?Haatschi, little fuzzy animals bother me.?

    Qui-Gon thought about his adventure with the seven Rockhounds and master Nu and found them interrupted by more haatschi?s from his Padawan. And seeing the tears streaming down Obi-Wan?s face ?He sure is allergic to cat- and Rockhound-fur, that brings me another idea. But will he appreciate it??

    ?Haatschi? and Obi-Wan disappeared again in the fresher.

    ?No cannot have a sneezing Padawan and a visit to the healers. Councilmember Mace Windu is at home and he will relieve me of this burden if I tell him about my Padawan?s peril. And he owes me a favour.?
    He picked up the box and walked down the hallway to the apartment of Mace Windu.

    ?Master Jinn, good afternoon?

    ?Mace, I have a little problem and you owe me. Can you help??

    ?Ooh no, you know little fuzzy animals bother me.?

    ?Mace, you were 8 years old when I brought that Rockhound in the crèche.?

    ?Yes and it brought trouble, big trouble.?

    Tip tap, tip tap.
    ?Trouble you say??

    ?Yes big trouble.?

    ?Cute little animal, take her I will. Sensed trouble little one had.?

  2. JediMasterAmanda

    JediMasterAmanda Jedi Master star 5

    Sep 7, 2005
    [face_laugh] poor obi he's allergic to fur. I'd die if I was allergic to animals. I love animals and I have five.

    good story here.
  3. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Feb 5, 2004
    I can't imagine life without my furry friends! :_| But I love what you did here! =D=
  4. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Master star 4

    Mar 27, 2004

    [face_laugh] I think Qui-Gon did that on purpose, he should know Obi is allergic
    to fur.[face_shame_on_you]
    It is time to get him back Obi, what is Qui-Gon allergic to.[face_thinking]

  5. ardavenport

    ardavenport Jedi Master star 4

    Dec 16, 2004
    Yes, Qui-Gon can't have a sneezey padawan! But he's so cute that way.:) Poor Obi-Wan, first the animals, then the terror of his master's nails. :p
  6. Valairy Scot

    Valairy Scot Backpacking One Pack a Day Mod of New Films star 6 Staff Member Manager

    Sep 16, 2005
    Cute, but poor Obi - having to suffer thru Qui's fondness for animals.
  7. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Jedi Grand Master star 6

    Aug 21, 2006
    Thank you for reading

    I have animals too

    getting ideas

    Thanks all for reading this little short story. It was great fun to write.[:D][:D]

  8. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Jedi Grand Master star 6

    Aug 21, 2006
    Thanks all my readers for the noms[:D][:D][:D]
  9. CrystalSaber_1

    CrystalSaber_1 Jedi Youngling star 1

    Dec 15, 2008
    *Snickers* Oh goodness, that was funny! Great job. [face_laugh] =D=
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