Beyond Little Wonders 'Ch 19!' (10/19) ~Jaina/Kyp/Solos/ect.~ ?Its the end." ~ Complete.

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  1. Kailene Jedi Knight

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    What a lovely, sweet, beautiful update! [face_love] [face_love]

    And Kyp asking for Han's blessing...even sweeter!
  2. SITH_MAYO Jedi Master

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    Ceillean: Han was bound to have the 'chat' lol. Cheers!;)

    Kailene: Ah thanks! I know sweetness is good..:)
  3. SITH_MAYO Jedi Master

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    Hey! Sorry for the lateness.. DRL is killing my writing.[face_frustrated] But I'm on holiday now and my writing is finally back on game. :)

    Thanks for the nominations!!! [:D]:D I wish everyone else who also got nominations the very best![face_peace]

    Anyways.. the chapter you've been waiting for.. enjoy!

    Comments welcome! (Be prepared..);)





    Chapter 17
    The Greatest Day



    Six weeks on . . .


    [16:59]
    Coruscant/ Jedi Temple



    With a collection of valuable datapads in her hands, Jaina wandered through the hallways half reading what she carried. The information was for various missions about to launch and many of them were in co-operation with the new Empire. Jag?s Empire.

    Distractedly she rounded a corner. Silently her brother slyly stepped into sync with her and took all the pads from her grasp before she knew what was happening. Unimpressed, she stopped and glared.

    Handsomely Jacen smiled at her.

    He explained weakly,
    ?Before you stun-gun me, I?ve been sent here to collect you.?

    ?For what??

    ?Ah, see that I can?t say. And you can scowl all you want but I?m not saying anything.?

    ?Those pads you?re holding are important, Jace. I?ve got work to do, staff to talk with, meetings to arrange and missions that need my support, even if only from the temple. I haven?t got time for games.?

    Cheerfully Jacen offered her his elbow in a gentlemanly fashion and spoke meaningfully,
    ?You can save the galaxy some other time, dear sister, I?m escorting you to a secret location. And this, I personally guarantee, is most important.?

    Stubbornly, Jaina didn?t budge.

    ?Jacen??

    Persistently her brother gazed at her with a mysterious twinkle in his dark eyes that she couldn?t fathom. He just stood and waited for her. It was most intriguing though. He gave nothing away and just grinned at her merrily. She didn?t know whether to feel excited or worried.

    ?Alright,? She conceded, ?lead the way. But this had better be good.?

    ?Trust me, sis, you?ll love it.?


    [17:10]
    Coruscant/ Jedi Temple/ Hangar Bay 107



    Together Jacen and Jaina entered the deserted hangar bay. It was like any other. Nothing special. For a moment the siblings stood in silence.

    Jaina gave a tired sigh,
    ?There?s no one around, Jace, why have you brought me here??

    Enigmatically her brother pulled away from her. He gave her a long soul searching look before then leaning over to peck her cheek and whisper simple words of love,
    ?For you dear sister . . . Enjoy.?

    Carrying her load of datapads, Jacen strolled out, glimpsing back to give her another warm smile. With a whoosh the hangar doors closed behind him, leaving her alone and completely baffled. What the heck was supposed to happen now? For a second she just stood there, stunned.

    Curiously, she stepped around some old A-Wing fighters and scanned the hangar for anything out of the ordinary.

    Down the end of the long space stood a tall ship she couldn?t remember seeing before. Slowly she made her way towards it. She stopped and frowned at the huge structure. Even up close she couldn?t see it properly. It was almost completely hidden by enormous grey drapes.

    From what she could gather this ship was massive, new-ish and well built. She was tempted to peek under the cover to see if her instincts about it were right. It was probably parked here for a reason, perhaps for its own security or maybe as a loan to the Jedi.

    Keeping her cool, Jaina shook off the childish impulse to sneak a glimpse.

    She turned and halted instantly.

    With a heart-stopping grin on his face, he stood before her looking extremely pleased with him-self.

    Wearing a pair of black trousers, shoes to match and a fitted navy sweater that had a V-shape around the collar that dipped low to show a small glimpse of his defined chest, he came across as very casual. His stuffy Jedi Master demeanour was nowhere to be seen today. And it suited him, she thought, he appeared so relaxed.

    She wanted him to be happy.

    His short />
  4. LexiLupin Jedi Grand Master

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    :D *silly grin* [face_love]

    That was adorable and sweet and lovely.

    I had a sneaky suspicion that, somehow, the thrill of him proposing would send her into labor, haha (or perhaps the thrill of his talented kissing?;)).

    Loved it and can't wait for more!

    [:D]
  5. Briannakin Grand Moff Darth Fanfic Manager

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    SQUEEEEE! I loved it! A perfect way for Kyp to purpose to Jaina!

    AND THE BABY IS ON HER WAY!!!

    BTW, I loved the ship's name.
  6. Nyota's Heart Combos & Paragraphs Host

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    Yes that was what I was waiting for :D wonderful gift and great description of Kyp ;)

    The whole thing just rates a huge squee!
  7. MiralukaJedi Jedi Master

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    Wow..talk about everything happening all at once.
  8. LoriLynn Jedi Master

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    Ahh! Yes!! I can not wait to see the baby!

    I also can't wait to see how the Solo men deal with all this? I'm sure there will be a lot of pacing and worrying. That seems to be what they do best!
  9. Hazel Force Ghost

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    SQUEE at the wonderful present and proposal. And the baby's coming. :D

    Wonderful update!

    @};-
  10. Chilla Force Ghost

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    I've finally caught up with you! Amazing story! I've been missing good J/K stories, there are just so many J/J shippers around. I'm so glad I can read a new one! *beams*

    Please, please add me to the PM list!

    As happy as I am about the peace, I'd like to see Commos brought to justice. Maybe Jaina will do that in a few months....
  11. CelseteAntola TF.N Books Staff

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    This was the most amazing post ever!!

    *melts*

    Thanks for that Sith_Mayo! Can't wait to meet the baby!!!

    [face_love]

    ~Celeste
  12. SITH_MAYO Jedi Master

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    LexiLupin: Haha! Kissing was always gonna help Jaina go into labour lol. Cheers!:)

    Briannakin:
    So glad ya liked it.. Thanks! I thought Deity would be a good name for the ship.:p

    Jade_eyes: Cheers, I'm glad ya enjoyed it. More squee soon..;)

    MiralukaJedi: Lol, that some's it up...

    LoriLynn: I know, finally the baby's coming, I'm excited to write the next few chapters.. :D Thanks.

    Hazel: Good to hear ya liked it! [face_batting] More coming..

    Chilla:
    Ah thanks so much for taking the time to read this, so glad to you like it and the main couple Jaina/Kyp. ;) Of course I'll be happy to add you to the PM list. You think Commos should come back.. oh don't worry I got a feeling he'll show up again. Thanks for clicking! [face_peace]

    CelseteAntola: Ah cheers, you're too kind.. more coming soon!
  13. Raphire Jedi Grand Master

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    I have a lot of catching up to do! Sorry for missing all these posts I haven't really been on much this summer. I pretty much worked and slept this summer. So my reading and writing really suffered. Lol but I can pay for college so that's all good!
  14. Kailene Jedi Knight

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    Aaahh, that was just so darn sweet, I think I'll be grinning all day. :)

    Can't wait to meet the baby!
  15. Rogue11JSF Jedi Knight

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    echchm.... I think i speak for all of us when i say, in the most polite way of course, postie please???? please please please??? Thank you.
  16. haleyskywalker2 Jedi Master

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    The baby is coming and they are getting married!!! What more could you ask for?!?!?!

    I absolutely loved this chapter of the story!!!
  17. SITH_MAYO Jedi Master

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    Raphire: That's okay, I understand, good to have ya back! :cool: DRL has been a pain for me too sadly.. work seems to be a constant threat lately..[face_frustrated] Congrats on college! :D Hope to see ya on boards more later.[face_peace] Cheers for clicking!

    Kailene: So glad I made ya happy with that post! :) More happiness coming!

    Rogue11JSF: I'm sorry, sorry, sorry! DRL has been getting in the way a lot. I've been working 6 day weeks, hence the need for more sleep and sadly less writing.. but I do have the next chapter coming.. within a few mins I hope. [face_mischief] Thanks for reading! More coming!

    hayleyskywalker2: Good to hear you enjoying it! I like happiness so more is coming.. [face_blush]
  18. SITH_MAYO Jedi Master

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    Sorry my updates have been far and few between.. but I hope the wait for this one is worth it.

    Meet the new Solo-Durron! :D

    Please feel free to comment!:)





    Chapter 18
    The Perfect Joy



    [01:45]
    Coruscant/ Jedi Temple/ Medical Centre



    Exhausted, sweaty, tired beyond belief, Jaina lied in bed beaten by the pain she?d experienced for the last several hours. All she wanted was to sleep. She breathed with focus as another contraction rippled over her, a wave of sheer agony, long and excruciating. Biting her bottom lip hard, she tried to hide the low groan she couldn?t stop escaping from her self.

    Around her the doctor and nurses supported and advised. But it was getting harder to listen to them. Her patience was running low and her mind was too overwhelmed with the painful experience to make sense of things.

    Finally, after many hours of torture, it was time to push. Jaina wanted this baby out of her. She wanted the agony to stop. She wanted to rest, most of all though, she longed to hold her dear baby.

    After few attempts the baby started to crown. With encouragement from the medical staff and Kyp at her side, Jaina gave a last strenuous push and at last the baby arrived.

    Hair damp with perspiration, breathless from the strain, red-faced with the effort, Jaina gave a huge sigh of relief.

    It was over.

    A scream erupted from the tiny babe. The newly born Solo/Durron wasn?t happy. She squealed loudly as if upset to be taken away from her haven and into the bright real world. The noisy baby was taken across the room to get checked over and cleaned up.

    Tightly Kyp held Jaina?s shaking hand in his and kissed her tenderly on the cheek.

    Jaina wearily turned her head to his and quirked a genuine smile,
    ?I can?t believe she?s finally here.?

    ?You did it, sweetheart, you brought her here.?

    A little embarrassed about the last couple blurry hours, Jaina frowned and asked quietly,
    ?Did I swear at you .. a bit??

    Flashing a devilish smile, Durron kissed her softly in answer,
    ?You swore continuously, Jay. But I forgive you.?

    ?Did I hit you at one point?? Jaina asked have ashamed, half amused.

    ?You were very .. physical. But again I forgive you. As you said, ?I deserved to be in pain too?.? He chuckled deeply in her ear.

    One of the nurses came over with a small bundle wrapped in a cotton blanket. Carefully the nurse handed Jaina the petite baby and showed her how to hold the child.

    With trembling hands Jaina pulled the coverlet further down to see her daughter?s tiny pink face for the first time. The instant her gaze connected with the baby?s big eyes, her daughter stopped fussing and calmed.

    Unchecked tears rolled down her cheeks as she took in the sight of her little girl. A wide smile brightened Jaina?s gorgeous face; it was full of indescribable joy and great unabashed love. Mentally Kyp cherished the moment, closely watching Jaina and their daughter get acquainted. The happiness he felt was more than words could explain. He never thought he?d be in this position, so lucky, truly content and blessed.

    Even Durron had to wipe his eyes, too overcome with emotion at the sight of his two most precious girls.

    Glimpsing at him, Jaina spoke gently,
    ?You okay there, tough guy??

    Swallowing back the lump in his throat, Kyp nodded merrily,
    ?I just can?t believe I got so lucky.?

    Grinning from ear to ear, Jaina used her free arm to pull him close. The kiss she gave scorched him to the core, it lit fire to his blood, turned his stomach into knots, made every part of him warm and tingly. Only she could give him peace with a single loving touch. He returned the kiss passionately, tasting her lips with the fiercest possessive desire he?d ever known. She was a rare gift, his love, his light and now the mother of his child. This was their perfect moment.

    ?Ahhhhhhhh!?

    The pair broke a part at the sound of their daughter causing a commotion. She squirmed r/>
  19. Nyota's Heart Combos & Paragraphs Host

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    [face_dancing] =D= Great name for a youngling who will also be legendarily spoiled [face_laugh] and fussed over ;)

    Daddy Kyp is just something too wonderfully droolicious anyhow :*

    Evelyn's a cutie pie! Already! Yes! [face_dancing]

    So....Jaina curled his toes did she? Always a good thing [face_laugh]

    Big hugs!

    And SQUEE!



  20. Hazel Force Ghost

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    Sweet baby mush :D [face_love]

    Lovely! @};-
  21. LoriLynn Jedi Master

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    It was Kyp. And it would always be Kyp.

    That was beautiful! And I love the name!!

    Please tell me you're not just going to stop it there, right? I mean we have yet to see grandma and grandpa with Evelyn!! You know that's just a big pile of fluff waiting to be written!! [face_praying]
  22. LexiLupin Jedi Grand Master

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    ?Did I swear at you .. a bit??

    Flashing a devilish smile, Durron kissed her softly in answer,
    ?You swore continuously, Jay. But I forgive you.?

    ?Did I hit you at one point?? Jaina asked have ashamed, half amused.

    ?You were very .. physical. But again I forgive you. As you said, ?I deserved to be in pain too?.?


    [face_laugh] Well, she might have been right about that one. But poor Kyp...

    The kiss she gave scorched him to the core, it lit fire to his blood, turned his stomach into knots, made every part of him warm and tingly. Only she could give him peace with a single loving touch. He returned the kiss passionately, tasting her lips with the fiercest possessive desire he?d ever known. She was a rare gift, his love, his light and now the mother of his child. This was their perfect moment.

    ?Ahhhhhhhh!?


    A new baby, and they're immediately all over each other again! I think Evelyn might have had a point with that scream! :p

    So cute. :D Glad the baby is arrived and all is well. [face_love]
  23. Chilla Force Ghost

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    A little embarrassed about the last couple blurry hours, Jaina frowned and asked quietly,
    ?Did I swear at you .. a bit??

    Flashing a devilish smile, Durron kissed her softly in answer,
    ?You swore continuously, Jay. But I forgive you.?


    [face_laugh] I can so see this happen! [face_laugh]

    ?Did I hit you at one point?? Jaina asked have ashamed, half amused.

    ?You were very .. physical. But again I forgive you. As you said, ?I deserved to be in pain too?.? He chuckled deeply in her ear.


    [face_laugh] I wouldn't be surprised if she had broken his hand.

    Mentally Kyp cherished the moment, closely watching Jaina and their daughter get acquainted. The happiness he felt was more than words could explain. He never thought he?d be in this position, so lucky, truly content and blessed.

    I'm glad Kyp finally found peace and happiness.

    Even Durron had to wipe his eyes, too overcome with emotion at the sight of his two most precious girls.

    Glimpsing at him, Jaina spoke gently,
    ?You okay there, tough guy??


    Awww at the crying Kyp and lol at Jaina's reaction!

    ?No,? Durron whispered, ?just completely, utterly, totally in love with you.?

    Awww! [face_love]

    In unison Kyp and Jaina tearfully gazed down at their little daughter, their own little wonder. She was so adorable, with plump rosy cheeks, the tiniest fingers, a small mop of dark brunette almost-black hair and not forgetting that she had the biggest brightest emerald eyes that shone trouble, in the best way of course.

    Great description of the baby. Love the part about her being trouble in a good way. [face_love]

    Looking into those strangely familiar eyes, it was then Jaina realised, this was a whole new beginning. She was a mother. And soon would be a wife. Life hadn?t turned out the way she expected or planned.


    This makes me wish Jaina would have gotten this in profic. She might still get it with Jag, but so far her life has been... :_|

    In the cute baby Jacen saw both Jaina and Durron. This child would be a fighter, a strong minded individual to add to the Skywalker-Solo-Durron legacy.


    With those parents, how could she be anything else? :D

    Only she would write a new chapter, Jacen felt it, in his gut he knew this gorgeous little girl would have a most adventurous story to tell.

    Love how Jacen can forsee this!

    ?You shouldn?t look so happy, Jace.? Kyp smirked as he walked over, ?If Tahiri catches you looking so comfortable with a baby she might start making demands of you, if ya know what I mean.?


    Awww! [face_love] [face_laugh]

    ?See you later sis. Kyp, treat her like a queen or there?ll be trouble.?

    I like seeing the protective Jacen here. The way he should have been....

    She couldn?t imagine going through this, parenthood or marriage, with anyone else. It was Kyp. And it would always be Kyp.

    Why, why is she with Captain Cardboard in profic? (He's not bad, but I just like Kyp more.)

    ?Evelyn Solo Durron,? Kyp added quietly, ?. . . another rebel.?

    ?No,? Jaina chuckled light-heartedly, ?another legend.?

    That part is so cute!

    Love Kyp with the baby!

    =D= Wonderful update!
  24. Briannakin Grand Moff Darth Fanfic Manager

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    Wow. That was really beautiful. Sweet name too. She is indeed going to be a rebel, and a legend.

    Sweet scene with Uncle Jacen! I can't wait to see Grandma Leia and Papa Han!
  25. MiralukaJedi Jedi Master

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    Very nice and a fantastic climax to the story.
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