Loneliness ( AU ) Obi (angst)/Qui-Gon completed *10/5* !!!!!

awe great post Angel can't wait for more

 

Go Yoda! Show that stubborn fool just what he's missing!

 

Yippee!

Your back! And your rockin'!

Thank you very much for the wonderful post. Ooo! Ooo! Do we get more soon?

Please say we do.

We'll wait semi patiently for it!

 

Yes, a wonderfull post Angel!!
Go to Obi Qui!!

 

sheleigh: Thanks ! I´m glad that you like it. We all know it´s Yoda´s favorit hobby to show Qui-Gon how to deal with Obi . I think the next post will be soon, we have holidays

CalaisKenobi: Well, perhaps after one year with Nool, the Agri-Corps seem to Obi like vacances. And don´t forget his self-confidence is nearly totaly broken.I think this will be clear later.
Don´t worry. I think after this "talk" with his old master even Qui-Gon got that he has not to be perfect, but that Obi needs him

ewen: I will do my best to write faster! Now, I have finally time to think about it

shanobi: Yes you´re right. Fleeing out of Obi´s room wasn´t the smartest thing ever, but don´t forget even a Jedi Master is only a human. He was just afraid of his own strong emotions, but now Yoda has told him the truth. Yes I hink mush will be coming but perhpas at first abit more angst? I´ll see...

Abbi_Cee: Thanks! Finally someone who still like Qui-Gon and understand his reaction! I think you´re right, he lost his own self-confidence as well, after he was betrayed a second time by an appreantice. Both are hurt and don´t worry they´ll realize that they both belong together, sooner or later.

JediFalcon: Thanks! I´ll do my best!

ShirleyLang: *grin* I knew that you would like Yoda in this. Yes, I think he picked up the main points . Perhaps Qui-Gon is much smarter now .

Seven: I´m glad to read that you like the post. I´m not sure, yet which aspect I´ll put in the next one, but I do´t think that I will need too much time...

RingThane: Thanks . Good advice, I think Qui-Gon could listen to it, but perhaps he´s not fast enough...


Thanks to everyone for all this nice replies . I will do my best to post soon !

Angel

 

Yay!!!!!! I get back from Michigan to see a new post!!! Really really good post!
Post more soon!
(but it's another evilness cliffhanger! What'd I tell you about those?)
I'm tired... I've gotten about 3-4 hours of sleep since... uhh...8am Monday morning!
God bless!
<3-Moose

 

Qui-Gon needs to go back and comfor the poor distraught boy that he left crying iwth the healers.

 

I will not hurt Qui-Gon, I will not hurt Qui-Gon *eye twitches* I will not *eye twitches again* hurt Qui-Gon.

*gabs lightsaber* Okay talking to your self dosen't help, I will hurt Qui-Gon!

Qui-Gon you better go comfort that poor kid that you left all alone in the healers *note to author: very good angsty situation though* No go and comfort so us readers can enjoy some mush!

LOL Great post more soon I hope ^-^ Oh and welcome back!

 

Malz4JESUS: Evil cliffhanger? What the hell is an evil cliffhanger? Angel tries to look innocent Thankd! I´m glad that you like it tha much .Well, sitting here and reading, it´s really hard to find the way in your bed

PadawanKitara: That´s a really good idea. But I think now he has got it himself and finally he has found the trust in himself to help Obi, but perhaps it´s too late now......

Ganki: Mmh, why do I have the feeling that you don´t like Qui-gon´s behavior? But dion´t hurt him, he has no time to loose, and well I think mush is coming soon, but perhaps you have (or better Obi has) to go through a bit more angst


Thanks for the replies

Angel

 

ARG!! Qui, get in there or else! You do NOT want an angry blonde with a lightsaber from a cereal box on your back. Trust me, it's not pretty!

 

Great post, Angel!

Poor Obi! Someone needs a hug! ::runs over and hugs Obi fiercely, gets comfy and falls asleep::

[whisper]MORE PLEASE![/whisper]



EJ

 

oooo poor porr sweet Obi. You are not destined to be a farmer. Yoyu are a great Jedi who will be famous for all you good deeds.

I think I better shut up now.

GGGGGGGOOOOOOOOO Yoda. When ever your in need he just seems to appear.

LMAO

Great post.

More soon.

 

Master_Comedy_Kitty: Here aren´t lots of Qui-Gon fans , or? Well let´s see what he´s doing, here´s the next post!

Enigma_Jade: You want to have more? Well here it is. I think he will need a hug after this post

Obi_Wan_Kenobis_Gal: Yes, Yoda is cute . And sometimes it seems, he does nothing else than helping Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan ( though handling both is a really hard job )



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Qui-Gon was on his way back to Obi-Wan. Although he had chosen a detour, the
Healer's wing was much too close. His self-doubt grew in his heart with every
step toward the healers' wing. What if he only brought more pain to the boy?


These last days had proven he was much better in fighting a hard battle or
overseeing long negotiations than dealing with emotions. If he was not even
able to deal with his own feelings, how could he deal with Obi-Wan´s?

Qui-Gon never intended to hurt the boy, by the force, no. He indeed did love
him with all his heart. It had taken a full year of loneliness for him and an
insane, abusing master tolerated by Obi for Qui-Gon to realize it. But was it
enough? Could he dare to get close to the Padawan again? It would mean risking being
hurt again. But on the other side, could he leave the boy alone with his fear and pain?

The Jedi Master reached for the force to get an answer. But there was none.
It would have been too easy. Maybe Yoda was right. He should trust his heart.
Perhaps it would be a mistake. But it was not like he had not made mistakes
where Obi was concerned. Maybe Obi was indeed worth another chance even if
he did make another mistake.

His thoughts gave him enough courage to continue on his way to the healers..
Suddenly a viciously sharp pain stabbed through his chest. He could not breath. Standing had become almost impossible. Qui-Gon sank to his knees as he gasped for air.
His mind was gripped with panic. What was happening to him?


Concentrating on the force, he calmed himself.. Now he could search for the
source of his distress. He soon discovered that he was totally unharmed.
There was a new wave of shock in his mind and tears sprung from his eye.


How is this possible.

Suddenly he had found the reason. His face paled. Ignoring all the pain, he stood up and started to run through the corridors. The healers' ward suddenly seemed
much too far. With all his strength he touched the damaged bond he shared
with Obi-Wan.

Obi-Wan! He cried, but there was no answer....


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Obi-Wan was still lying in his bed. He was exhausted from the combination of
being ill and crying. There were no tears left but the gulping sobs still
continued. He felt hollow and dizzy. As Obi-Wan stared at the stark blank wall of
his room he started to tremble. Was it colder than before?

Looking at the monitors next to him, he noticed that the temperature hadn't
changed. Perhaps it was only his imagination because of the fever.

But after a few minutes it became worse. The cold was creeping through his
body until it reached his heart. Obi-Wan´s eyes widened in shock. He crawled
to the wall that his bed was leaning against, and pushed his back against
it. Then he pulled his knees to his chest; every move seemed to drain his precious
strength. He was becoming more and more tired. Because of his so hard shivering fingers, he it was difficult to pull even the covers closer to him. His hands seemed as if they were numb.

Nothing seemed to help. The room was getting colder and darker.. Obi-Wan
panicked, as fear ran through his entire body. He wanted to scream but he
couldn't. His tongue was thick with heaviness. So heavy he could not form
words.

Obi-Wan was thrown into a deep state of shock when he realized he could feel
none of his body. He felt totally numb. Obi-Wan wanted to clench his fists,
but his hands wouldn't move with his mental command to do so.

And what ever had happened to him, it was not over yet. His vi

 

With one last cruel laugh the voice without a body ceased, leaving Obi-Wan alone; caught in his own mind with never ending pain............

As if Obi-Wan hasn't been alone for the past year, now he is stranded again just when he could have had Qui-Gon back!!!

Good post though!

 

NOOOOO Obi! I am here for you. *goes and beats Nool over the head witha lightsaber*

Great post but just one little problem there is this small little cliffie at the end of this and i well NEED MORE SOON!

heeheee Amazing post again more soon i hope ^-^

 

*releases death grip on mouse* Argg......Nool, you're just BEGGING to be shot in the head, aren't you?!

 

poor Obi Wan,

begins to beat nool senseless

post more soon Angel

 

DIE! NOOL! DIE! DIE DIE DIE! ARG! Come on mobs! Form up... we have to hunt some master.

And Qui-Gon! Go kick Nool's butt right now!

Excellent Angel!

 

NOOOOOOOO

MUSH SOON- NEED MUSH

 

Angel we need this part first so we can get to the mush.

Now onward to the mushiness we all love!!!

See I told you it wasn't "too" much angst!!


PEACE ewen

 

Hey...
Ahhhh! You did it again Angel!!! grr!
Poor Obi-Wan! :'(
Save him Qui-Gon! Hurry!
Whoa...
ok... I'm done!
That was an awesomeness post!
Great writing!
God bless!
<3-Moose

 

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!

What have you done?

You've left us hanging yet again!

.... I'm impressed. I've never seen so many cliffers in a story before.....

But even so, More soooooon pleeeeeeeaze????

Alrught I think I'm done.

~picks up and ignites a lightsaber~
(I sugest you move.... I've never used a lightsaber before and weather I can or not has yet to be seen...)
~begins chasing Nool around her living room~

Prepare to meet PAIN!!!!!

^perants watch the teenager with a confused air^

Mom : Myst be a teenage thing.....

Dad: ^nods^

Seven: DEATH TO NOOL!!!! DEATH TO NOOL!!!!

 

CalaisKenobi: Thanks, I´m glad you like it. Yeah, poor Obi, he can´t stay out of trouble

Ganki; Thanks, I´ll do my best to continue soon! Glad to see, that you are still loving Nool

Comedy_Master_Kitty: I think that is his dearest wish, do you wan to help him

JediFalcon: I´ll try to . Well, beqting Nool senseless sounds to be funny, right?

sheleigh: Thanks, I´m happy tha you like it. Hunting Nool? Could be fun!

PadawanKitara: Don´t worry, wait for the next post

ewen: Hey, I promised a mush part, and the next one will be full of mush, or at least I think so...

Malz4JESUS: It´s always nice to read that the post isn´t the catastroph, I though of . Yes, Qui-Gon should better hurry. But I have the feeling that he finally got this as well

Seven: Cliffers? Me? You are kidding, aren´t you? Angel tries to look innocent
To work with a lightsaber, you need a bit training, and I believe Nool is a good training object ....



Thanks to everyone for replying
The next post will be a mush part!!!
R E A L L Y

Angel

 

Up!
Yay! Mush!

 

[face_shocked]

Great post, Angel! I'm sorry if I don't say more, because I have to go and KILL NOOL now. Grr!!

::Nool slinks away, but EJ spots him anyway. He begins to run:: COME BACK HERE YOU JERK! ::gives chase::

EJ