Loneliness ( AU ) Obi (angst)/Qui-Gon completed *10/5* !!!!!

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  1. Angel_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Malz4JESUS: Thanks for the upping :D

    Enigma_Jade: Thanks ;) . Of course, that´s areason. Have fun [face_devil]

    Thanks for the replies!


    Angel

  2. Jedi_Nifet Jedi Master

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    Ugly foul Nool!

    *Borrows a rocket-launcher and a rail-gun from her brother (Q3A)*

    "Come here, Nool!"

    *chases him around*

    Great post, Angel! :)

    Waiting for mush

    Nifet
  3. Angel_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Jedi_Nifet: Oh Oh, I don´t want to be Nool [face_devil] . He doesn´t seem to have lots of fans here ;) . Yes the mush part will be ready soon!


    Oh,oh, it seems as if I´m loosing lots of readers, I knew it was too much angst. I should better write more m u s h , right? :p Don´t worry!


    Angel
  4. sheleigh Jedi Master

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    Mush... [face_love]

    Hmm... don't suppose we could have some mush soon?


    Oh look- I accidently upped this. Oh well. ;)
  5. Angel_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    sheleigh: Thanks for this upping [face_love] The mush post will coming this week-end or earlier I think ;)

    Angel
  6. Obi_Wan_Kenobis_Gal Jedi Knight

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    NOOL YOU MOTHER.......OF....A......SITH

    HOW COULD YOU DO THAT. I'M GONNA KILL YOU FOR THAT

    WHO'S WITH ME?
  7. Jedi_Nifet Jedi Master

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    I'm with you, Obi_Wan_Kenobis_Gal (with all my weapons from 'Jedi Outcast')
  8. Seven Jedi Knight

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    ~glares at angel~

    If you think I'm going to let that scum near me he's got something else comming! Like a steel toed boot to his shin and other less plesant places.

    More story soon please, before I get frustrated and kick the thread!
  9. Angel_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Obi_Wan_Kenobis_Gal: Well Nool isn´t going to win the prize for the most populate charackter in this thread, right? In the end he´ll pay, don´t worry [face_devil]

    Jedi_Nifet: *LOL*

    Seven: Yeah, I know I should better post more... But until then you can kick Nool around, is that´s a deal [face_devil]

    Thanks for your replies :D

    Angel
  10. Arwen-Jade_Kenobi Jedi Grand Master

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    *kicks Nool*

    muhaha!!!

    MORE!!
  11. Angel_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Arwen_Jade-Kenobi: Good to see that you´re still reading ;) . I´m going to write more soon, but there are only a few posts left and I don´t want ot mess up the end ;)

    Angel
  12. Obi_Wan_Kenobis_Gal Jedi Knight

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  13. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Master

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  14. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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  15. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Master

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  16. Jedi_Nifet Jedi Master

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  17. Obi_Wan_Kenobis_Gal Jedi Knight

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  18. sheleigh Jedi Master

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    out of the abyss...

    More soon, I hope?
  19. Enigma_Jade Jedi Knight

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    Going up! ::hunts for Nool::
  20. Seven Jedi Knight

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    I get to kick Nool around? KOOOL!

    ~looks for Nool~

    ~smiling sweetly~

    There you are Nool my good man.

    ~begins to kick his shins~

    How dare you do that to Obi!

    ~Nool howls in pain (I'm wearing steal toed boots)~
  21. Angel_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Obi_Wan_Kenobis_Gal: ;) Thanks for the upping :D

    Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl: Thanks *smile*

    Jacen200015: That´s nice ;)

    Jedi_Nifet: Thanks!

    Sheleigh: Yes, the new post is even longer than usual, as a kind of apologize :p

    Enigma_Jade: Thanks! Well hunting Nool is always fun :D

    Seven: You have truly good ideas [face_devil] !!!

    I know I´m really late and I´m happy that you all are still reading ;)

    Here´s the new post! And thanks to my beta it´s much better now ;)

    I hope you´ll like it:



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    Qui-Gon rushed down the corridor, trying to ignore his painful heart and
    burning lungs. With the help of the force he at least knew that he himself, wasn't in
    any true "physical harm" But the fact that these strongly realistic imaginations came
    through the bond he shared with Obi-Wan, didn´t make it easier.


    He finally reached the healers wing. Two healers looked up and stared at him
    with surpris. But Qui-Gon had no time for them. He ran towards Obi-Wan´s room.
    The dark feelings he was experiencing him encompassed him even more, becoming
    stronger as they did so. Suddenly out of nowhere Master healer Shaar steeped
    forward and blocked his path. She seemed too be a bit annoyed.

    "Master Jinn, what are "YOU" doing here again? I made it clear
    the last time we spoke that the boy needs to rest!"

    Master Jinn made eye contact with the healer, as he spoke in his strongest
    voice.

    "He needs me!" The woman raised an eyebrow.

    "Obi-Wan is suffering. Can't you feel it?"

    Qui-Gon tried again to reason with the Master healer.

    Le´van saw the panic in Qui-Gon's face with tears in his eyes. For a moment she wondered if he truly had gone "mad". She thought perhaps it would be best to ask a mind healer for assistance to get him calmed down.

    She smiled trying to share her own calm with Qui-Gon.


    "Well, if you are that worried, I'm going to check on him in a few minutes.
    You are welcome to join me. You will see that he is fine."

    Qui-Gon breathed heavily. This was absolutely absurd. He knew something was
    wrong with Obi-Wan. He felt it through the force, through their bond..

    "I'm sorry Master. But I don't have the time for this."

    He pushed her to the side, causing the surprised healer to fall to the floor.
    Without losing any more time, Qui-Gon opened Obi-Wan´s door, switching the light on simultaneously.


    He suddenly stopped dead in his track. The picture before him was even worse
    than he had expected. He slowly stepped to the boy's bed and knelt in front of him.

    Obi-Wan´s eyes distended and glazed over, stared blankly into space. His mind
    seemed far away. His body sweated and shivered at the same time as his muscles violently cramped and jerked as if he was seizuring. Qui-Gon spoke to his former
    padawan. There was no reaction. At least not from the boy. The reaction he got came from the healer who had just entered Obi-Wan's room and saw the condition he was in.

    "Oh, force. What has happened?" She asked.

    Qui-Gon shook his head, not understanding the situation himself.

    "I don't know. I felt his despair and distress and ran here to him."

    This recent dilemma brought so much pain and confusion to Qui-Gon Jinn. He should have stayed with Obi-Wan he thought to himself. Now it was too late.

    Luckily Master Shaar stayed calm and level headed. She carefully guided Qui-Gon to the side. She first attempted a physiological examination on Jinn's former padawan. Then she gently touched the boy's forehead to make mental contact through the force. After just a short time, shaking her head she
    broke the connection.

    " Sith!"

    "What's up with him? What's his problem"

    Qui-Gon wanted to know NOW.

    She looked horrified. Like maybe she was even afraid to tell Master Jinn what
    she had found in Obi's mind.

    "I'm not sure, but I think someone has invaded his mind. He seems far away,
    elusive, trapped in his own mind. I'm sorry I can not help him."


    "
  22. Arwen-Jade_Kenobi Jedi Grand Master

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    *blows nose*

    that was beautiful angel!!! Very angsty!!
  23. Angel_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Arwen_Jade-Kenobi: Thanks I´m glad you like it ;)


    Angel
  24. Malz4JESUS Jedi Grand Master

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    Awww!
    Yay! Qui-Gon stopped being evilness! :D
    And Obi-Wan came back! :D
    Yay!
    Awesomeness posts!
    God bless!

    <3-Moose
  25. Falcon Chosen One

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    awe nice post

    need more soon.


    I have Nool clones get them while their hot to do with as you see fit.

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