Before Love In The Shades of Grey (OC Story)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Cushing's Admirer, Jan 29, 2011.

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  1. Jedi_MasterSkywalker Jedi Grand Master

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    Aug 29, 2010
    star 4
    We I must say I was quite entertained the whole way of the story. Toru is truly the father figure that I think would be best for Varlet. The relationship blossomed into something beautiful and wholesome inspite of the danger surrounding it. I would have liked to see more development of Varlet's mother though, she was very interesting to me. Xylon's death was unforutante like Furio said. He was valiant in death which wrapped up his story well. Well done Dooku-Darklighter and Sistros.
  2. Lady_Jedi93 Jedi Grand Master

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    May 11, 2010
    star 4
    Sorry it took me so long to finish the story [face_blush]
    While I was sad that Xylon died, it is a beautiful :) =D=
  3. The_Zeltron Force Ghost

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    Sep 29, 2010
    star 6
    Don't worry, LJ, it took me even longer.:p;)

    That was so awesome, Dooku and Charn![:D] I really loved it. Great job, guys!:D
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