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Lovers Fate -A/A--O/NC-- A/U I'M ALIVE!! a.n. 10/26

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Anakins_Goddess_01, Jul 10, 2002.

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  1. AlexKenobi

    AlexKenobi Jedi Youngling

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    ^Uppers^

    \\//Cassidy\\//
     
  2. Anakins_Goddess_01

    Anakins_Goddess_01 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    WOW! Page 6!

    Jedi_jem Thanks. The Post will be my next reply!

    Alex_Kenobi Thanks for the great up! The next post will be here today! Hope you stay!


    I'm sooo EXCITED! :D
    And I've got GREAT news!! The post is almost finished it should be up by NOON! :eek:

    Did you guys really like the last one ?[face_plain] I mean! Wow! I got a lot of replys to that little scence. [face_blush]

    Well thanks! And the next post will have a little bit of MUSH in it, but it's mainly just leading up to the next post and what will happen in it!! Hope you still like it tho!! SOON!!!

    ~*Taryn*~
     
  3. Jedi-Roxy

    Jedi-Roxy Jedi Youngling star 3

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    He He He, poor Obi. Poor Ani.

    The story is lookin spiffy.

    I live for the next post.

    *~Roxy~*
     
  4. Heather_Skywalker

    Heather_Skywalker Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Really Great stuff Taryn! Just got totally caught up on reading!

    Can't wait for the next post!
     
  5. Hermoine_Bagwa

    Hermoine_Bagwa Jedi Youngling

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    Well, before I started reading this fanfic... I wasn't that big of a fan, but now that I have, I think I'm starting to become obsessed :-D. Anyway, just write some more! I'm addicted to your story!
     
  6. Jedi_Suzuran

    Jedi_Suzuran Jedi Knight star 5

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    May 22, 2002
    *pouts*
    Taryn, where's my postie? :mad:

    ;) ;) ;)
     
  7. Anakins_Goddess_01

    Anakins_Goddess_01 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Umm see what had happened was....... Yea I'm not even gunna try to make up an excuse!

    OK Now I have most of the post done and it will get finished today but my friend invited me to go to San Deigo with her so I will be leaving friday so I am just gunna post it right before I leave and then I will be back Monday and I will post because I will be writing the post when we are in the hotel room!

    Everyone ok with that?

    I'm sorry for the short notice, but I just got invited like 5 minutes ago soo SORRY. But PLEASE reply for me while I am gone! If you do I will make it EXTRA LONG!! :D

    So please reply I do wanna be able to find this on the boards when I get back lol

    Thanks!

    ~*Taryn*~



     
  8. EMFreek

    EMFreek Jedi Youngling

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    ::whines::
    Wheres the new post, are you done with it yet?

    Hurry up

    -_+Ashi+_-

    P.S. Up
     
  9. PadmeJainasolo

    PadmeJainasolo Jedi Master star 2

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    I can't wait for more! :) :) :)
     
  10. Anakins_Goddess_01

    Anakins_Goddess_01 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jedi_Suzuran Here's your post lol! Thanks for the up!
    Quit Whining Ashy! Here's the post!
    PadmeJainasolo You're waiting is through!!!


    Well here's the post! Sorry its a day late! But I am leaving today so I waited! I will be back on Monday with a post written!

    Enjoy!

    HERE'S A LONG ONE FOR YA!!!


    ***************




    The suns rays poked through the curtains of Anakin's room. Slowly opening his eyes he looked over at Padme who was watching him sleep.

    "Morning," she said kissing him.

    "How long have you been up?" He said looking for a time on the wall.

    "Only about 5 minutes or so, its only 7:00 am"

    He quickly plopped his head back onto the pillow and looked over at his wife, rapping his arms around her waist he leaned in and kissed her.

    Breaking away from their embrace Padme sat up."I have to go, Depa will be wondering where I am."

    Sitting up as well Anakin held her hand for her not to move, "Cant you stay awhile longer?" he asked with a plea.

    "No, I cant..I....I.." Looking into his eyes she gave in with a sigh. "Only a little while longer."

    Anakin gave a big smile, only to hear the door open and close in the next room and a call for them. "Anakin, Padme, Are you in here?" It was Master Obi-wan.

    Padme sank down into Anakin's hold once more, "Doesn't look like I can stay anyway."

    Anakin gave her a mischievous smile, "Shhhh.." He demanded, " They don't know we are here, don't answer."

    "They will find us Anakin!" She pressed.

    He let out a big sigh and continued once more, " No, they won't our shields are up."

    Padme was just about to press the subject once more when the bedroom door swung open and in walked Obi-Wan, Starr, and Depa. Padme just straight into Anakin's arms and wrapped the sheet tightly around her.

    "Well, I guess you chose the night you would stay over." Obi-Wan hinted.

    Padme was absolutely embarrassed and was at a loss for words, " Umm,"

    "It's OK Padawan, we understand." Depa interrupted, "Just get your things we need to practice your meditating."

    Anakin perked up at once, that would be his favorite class with Padme, he could see her thoughts and her secrets, he was definitely beginning to like this!

    Depa turned to walk out to leave Padme to gather her things when she swung around once more, after hearing Anakin's thoughts. He wasn't that great at shielding, especially with a Council member.

    "Anakin," Depa began, " Me and Padme will do this class by ourselves, your assistance wont be needed."

    Anakin frowned and nodded his head, "Yes, Master."

    "Oh," Depa added. " I suggest that you learn to block your thoughts better, you don't want the wrong people to hear them." With her words a wide smile plastered her face and a deep blush covered Anakin's.

    "Yes, Master." Anakin answered with a cracking stern voice.

    When the group finally left the room Anakin fell back to the pillows with Padme still in his arms.



    *****



    After the couple was dressed and ready they made their way out to the Sitting area tightly holding hands. Something was wrong. As they walked in to the Sitting area Padme noticed the look on everyone's faces and quickly lost herself in thought. Why would they all be here. I mean I didn't think I had to tell them the night I would to be here. Some thing important is going on!

    "Padme...Padme?" Padme was brought out of her worrisome thoughts by Depa, "Padme we have decided to take a trip, or a Mission I guess." Depa now had Padme's and not to mention Anakin's full attention.

    "Really Master?" Padme said with excitement in her voice, "I have always wanted to go to some unknown Planet. Where will we be going?"

    "Well," Padme's Master began. "I'm afraid that you won't be doing that on our first mission. We will be going to.... We are going to Naboo."

    Padme froze in fear, the last time that she tried to go to her home she was attacked by the Sith. What if it happens again, and we not so lucky! what are we doing there anyway, other than torturing me with my old life.[
     
  11. Queen_Sara

    Queen_Sara Jedi Master star 4

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    I told them, that little 'I don't like sand' line...
    :p Haha Ani, knew that one was gonna come back and bite you in the ass!

    Great post Taryn!


    :) ~*^SARA^*~ :)
     
  12. PadmeJainasolo

    PadmeJainasolo Jedi Master star 2

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    NO! why did you have to leave,I can't wait till the next post!! :) :)

     
  13. PadmeJainasolo

    PadmeJainasolo Jedi Master star 2

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    well it's Ok that you went with your friends somewhere cuz I do the same thing :p
     
  14. AlexKenobi

    AlexKenobi Jedi Youngling

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    Great post once again :D [face_love] ..
    I can't wait for the next one :_| So hurry on home, and I hope ya have fun with her friend. :cool:



    \\//Cassidy\\//
     
  15. Jedi_jem

    Jedi_jem Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Good post! :D

    "I told them, that little 'I don't like sand' line." [face_laugh] Poor Anakin...
     
  16. Jayners

    Jayners Jedi Youngling

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    hey Taryn. The story is awesome. I can't wait to read more. You're good at this!
    See you soon. later,
    Jayna [face_clown]
     
  17. Anakins_Goddess_01

    Anakins_Goddess_01 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    SHEESH! I guess everyone really like what I did to Anakin with that line! I don't know what it is about it but I love it!(could it be that HAYDEN say it?!) But I just had to use that agaisnt him LOL!


    OMG!! JAYNA!! [face_love] ?[face_plain] Did Travis put you up to this? :mad: Oh well! Well I'm glad you keep reading it!

    As you can tell I'm back! YEAH LETS PARTY!!!

    And OMG everyone go to the DEL CORNADA hotel the ocean there is soo OMG!! And the San Diego zoo is sooo cool but don't plan on seeing the Pandas the line is like 5 hours long!! See the birds! BIRDS RULE!!!!!!!!


    OOOO......But I got to see two weird species pigs doing...::COUGHS:: Umm yea I think ya know what I mean!


    Well the post is coming!!!!!

    THANKS FOR THE REPLYS

    OH And the credit for the next post goes to my WONDERFUL FANTASTIC BROTHER WHO DIDN'T REPLY WHEN I WAS OUT OF TOWN!!! ::GRRRR:: He is a great help with this story THANKS!! :D


    ~*Taryn*~

     
  18. Jedi_jem

    Jedi_jem Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Welcome back! :D
     
  19. Jayners

    Jayners Jedi Youngling

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    No Taryn, Travis didn't put me up to that. I was just reading what I hadn't already read and I thought I'd let you know how much I liked it and since you out having fun with out me and your brother... :_| ...and we all know Travis woulda forgotten to tell you if I told him to tell you, I thought I'd just post it.
    Anyways you gotta crack the whip on Trav....tell him to hurry his butt up with the next part of the story.
    Anyways, sounds like San Diego was awesome and I'm glad you had fun.
    later,
    Jayna
     
  20. PadmeJainasolo

    PadmeJainasolo Jedi Master star 2

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    Its monday so I am waiting for my post. Hopefully I get it soon! :D hum...I wonder if anyone on naboo is going to reconize padme'.
    welcome back
    AG
     
  21. AlexKenobi

    AlexKenobi Jedi Youngling

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    Hey, wheres postie?! :mad: hehe..Im very impatient [face_blush] ..Anyways nice to see ya back Taryn! :) Hurry up with next post! :D hehe :D



    \\//Cassidy\\//
     
  22. Anakins_Goddess_01

    Anakins_Goddess_01 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Hey sorry my brother is being a...... I'll be nice, A Dodo Bird!

    He said he will work on the post tonite and that it should be done by morning, But thats what I heard yesterday too!

    But if he don't do it tonite then I will just do it all by my lonesome!

    The post is coming I havent left this story!

    I will PM everyone when it gets posted which should be Tuesday (tommorow) Morning!

    Thanks for waiting!

    ~*Taryn*~
     
  23. PadmeJainasolo

    PadmeJainasolo Jedi Master star 2

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    I'm going in the corner and pouting. :mad:
    were's tesdays postie? :_|
     
  24. Anakins_Goddess_01

    Anakins_Goddess_01 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Sorry for the delay everyone!! Here it is! Compliments of my brother!!


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    The Nubian Cruiser rocketed past the Naboo moon, flying close to the mining operations there. It was now on approach to the main landing area in the northern part of the western hemisphere. Their trip to Naboo was uneventful, as planned. Anakin and Padme slept the whole way in each others arms. Obi-Wan and Starr were still deep into lightsaber constructions lessons. Master Billaba was, of course, deep in meditation throughout the trip. The ship deployed its landing struts, and begun its descent.

    Obi-wan had come to awaken Anakin and Padme, only to find them already up and ready.

     "I couldn't bear to be asleep on this planet. I'm too afraid to even close my eyes now," explained Padme.

     "Come Anakin, we must clear the landing pad before Padme can get out," Obi-wan ordered his Padawan.

    Anakin nodded, feeling the seriousness of the situation, and left the room without a word.

     "I hate being treated like I'm still a senator. How often do Jedi get this much protection?" she questioned.

    "Not very often, but then again you are still a Padawan, not full Jedi yet," Master Depa stated, entering the room.

    With just a glance at Obi-Wan she sent him to join Anakin in clearing the pad.

    "Now please, Padme, we need to speak with the queen. You must pull yourself together and overcome your fear. Remember, as a Jedi, one cannot know fear," Depa said, speaking with a knowledge that spanned many thousands of years.

    Anakin then entered the room again, and told them that the landing pad was clear.

    After Depa, Padme, and Anakin met up with Obi-Wan and Starr outside, they were escorted to the palace by the Royal Elite Protect Force of Naboo (REPFN), which was formed to protect the goverment officials from assassination after the Trade Federations attack. The ride was short, but tense. With every corner turned, Padme and the other were looking in all directions, worried about what could be hiding around the next bend. The soldiers of the REPFN seemed unfazed by anything. The palace loomed overhead, and within minutes, the five were being escorted to the Queens chamber.

     "My heart tells me this isn't a social visit, Padme," the queen said as the group entered the room. The sun setting in the window behind her gave the chair the queen an ominous glow.

     "No, I'm sorry but it is not. The senate is concealing something, and has locked the Jedi out of its meetings. We need to get into contact with Jar-Jar," Padme responded.

     "And the only direct link to Jar-Jar in the senate building is here at the palace," the queen said, in an almost annoyed tone. "Please, take a seat and we will attempt to contact him."

    The shades in the royal chamber room came down, and the transmission pedestal appeared out of the floor of the center of the room.

     "Jar-Jar? Come in Jar-Jar..." Padme said into the transmitter. Minutes passed, no answer. They were about to give up, when a very familiar voice appeared.

     "You'sa lookn for me'sa?" Jar-Jar said, his holographic image projected in the center of the room. "Cuz me'sa have'n muoy muoy work to be doin'."

    Padme, Obi-Wan, and Depa asked Jar-Jar question after question, and got answers they were afraid to hear. The Senate was blaming the Clone war on the Jedi, and was planning strikes on the Confederate planets without the Jedi's knowledge. This troubled council member Billaba, for the Council and Senate had worked closely together since the founding of the Republic. The first knights of the republic oversaw the senate actions, protecting them and the people. But now the Senate was hiding its actions. What could have prompted such a change? The questions only became more complex the more and more they got from him.

     "Thank you, Senator Jar-Jar. You have been a great help to us." Master Depa said with a bow.

     "Always a biggo' pleasure to be'in helpin' the'sa Jedi's," Jar-Jar said before his image disappeared.

     "This news is greatly disturbing. Obi-W
     
  25. SRB_Jedi_Knight

    SRB_Jedi_Knight Jedi Padawan star 4

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    great post.
     
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