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Saga Luke Naberrie AU (Revised) Luke, Sola, Darred and Vader later on. Update 12/10/15

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by SatineNaberrie, Jul 24, 2015.

  1. SatineNaberrie

    SatineNaberrie Jedi Master star 4

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  2. Admiral Volshe

    Admiral Volshe Chosen One star 10

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    This is great. I like the originality!! I am looking forward to reading more :D
     
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  3. Ewok Poet

    Ewok Poet Force Ghost star 6

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    At first, I wondered if this was a continuation of the story I remember starting to read some of a couple of months ago, and then I remembered Padmé being pretty much alive in that one and everything happening on Tatooine. #brainfail here.

    I can sense that Darred and Sola are not aware of Luke's Force-sensitivity and that there will be trouble...definitely intrigued so as to what happens next and loving it when Luke mirrors his father's excitement upon first arrival on Coruscant. :)
     
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  4. Cushing's Admirer

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    I echo Poet. I remember the older one and this is completely different. I think your confidence in writing has improved a lot since I first helped you. :) (I offered help on the older one).
     
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  5. SatineNaberrie

    SatineNaberrie Jedi Master star 4

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    I realise that. My statements still hold. :)
     
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  7. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

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    Very good start & I look forward to seeing what changes. @};- I find it quite believable that Luke could be "hiding in plain sight" with Padme's family as much as with Owen & Beru. [face_thinking] But of course since Darred is a Senator, :oops: the not attracting attention thingy will be tougher.
     
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  8. SatineNaberrie

    SatineNaberrie Jedi Master star 4

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  9. Ewok Poet

    Ewok Poet Force Ghost star 6

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    This is going to be fun...I assume that, in your AU, Bail has no idea what's going on. [face_whistling]
     
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  10. Admiral Volshe

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    Woo, loving this still. :)
    I have an interesting feeling about Ishard, but I'm sure we'll figure him out soon enough.
     
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  11. SatineNaberrie

    SatineNaberrie Jedi Master star 4

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  12. Ewok Poet

    Ewok Poet Force Ghost star 6

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    The Gungan who speaks basic Basic (!) is...suspicious, to say the least. Shapeshifter? Dressed up?

    And yay, broke my fear of leaving comments. Thank you. <3
     
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  13. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Enjoyed seeing Bail getting Darred acclimated to things and how they run in the Senate. Valens - we'll have to see how things go with him and a Gungan who speaks flawless Basic? [face_laugh] Something I never expected!
     
  14. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    I love Doctor Who and therefore I am interested in alternative SW universes where different choices or different live lines exit. This story is well written! Cannot wait to see more of Luke Naberrie.
     
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