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Story [Marvel] Ode of the Thunder God - Asgard's Might - THOR!

Discussion in 'Non Star Wars Fan Fiction' started by The Sith Camp, Apr 9, 2015.

  1. The Sith Camp

    The Sith Camp Jedi Knight star 4

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    *Thor Voice* BY THE MIGHT AND WILL OF ASGARD ... I CONJURE AND CAST UPON THE POWER TO SMITE THE WICKED AND UNLEASH THE MYSTICAL POWERS OF MJOLNIR AND THE HEART AND SOUL OF ASGARD ... IN THIS PIECE THOU SHALL READ WITH AMAZEMENT!

    (funny today is Thursday - and today I wrote this poem - funny enough Thor has his name which led to Thursday 'Thors-Day' :) )

    The Skies Loom,
    The Sudden Boom,
    From the Greying Clouds,
    The Sounds so Loud,
    Storms tis but my Message…
    Ancient God,
    A Vigilant Defender,
    Lord of Asgard,
    Prince of Asgard,
    Strength, Courage and Fertility,
    Protector of Midgard,
    Staunch Potector.
    I am the Heart and Soul of Asgard!
    Son of Odin,
    The Grand Skyfather,
    Be it the line of Odinsson!
    The Essence of the Odinforce fuels my Might!
    For my Strength … is the Field … of the Earth's Shield.
    I be my Fellow Man’s Great Guardian,
    Alas – the King of the Asgardians!
    Where I would too server as an Avenger,
    Always an Earth’s Defender!
    My name is Great, Grand and Loud!
    My name spells beyond the Might of the Roaring Thunder,
    I am a Storm’s Wonder!
    Foolish Mortals … only then will you learn your Trial by Thunder,
    You pay with your Foolish Blunder!!

    Fear not Wrath … but the Storms of Anger,
    For I be there when there is Danger,
    I am an AVENGER!
    A Loyal Hero and Defender!.
    Unleash Thy Fury.
    I am the Heart of the Storm,
    I am the ODINSON!

    The Thunder God!
    Power of the Might,
    The Evil I Spite!
    An Eye and Feats of Wonder,
    For I always Relish a Great Fight!

    Great Defender,
    The Villains and Frost Giant’s Bane and Foe,
    The Supreme Avenger!
    Wotan’s Great Judgement and Woes.

    Mjolnir’s Master,
    I be its Yielder,
    Erdu’s Director,
    Asgard’s Very Shielder,
    For I am … the Asgardian Protector.

    Friend to the Worthy and the Brave,
    The Innocent Lives I shall Save,
    I be a Listener and a Comrade to All,
    For we stand together strong and Tall,
    For I will never Fall,
    Whilst I carry my Father’s Law,
    Nature shall Obey my beck and Call,
    None too strong will make me Stall…
    And my name and spirit … will never Truly Fall!

    For I may be full of Pride,
    Yet deep inside,
    My vulnerabilities Lie,
    Where Arrogance my Weakness,
    I seek to end this …
    Where in the might of my Heart,
    I Fight to Stride,
    To Shield my Pride,
    Yet my Might … Never Falls Apart!.

    The Lightning Flash!
    Crashes of Thunderous Thunder,
    A Frightening Sight to behold,
    Yet no less a True Natural Wonder!
    Soon the Clear skies turned Grey,
    Where the Thunder would Rumble,
    When angered, your world I would easily Crumble,
    The Lightnings Lashes,
    The Lesser Beings Stumble,
    Be it the Thumble,
    By Wotan’s Judgement … Evil doers you better Cower before my Power!
    Far beyond the Skies,
    Across the Galaxies,
    A Bright Flashing Dart,
    I, the God of Thunder would Fly!

    My Glowing Eyes Signify,
    The Coming of a Red Dawn,
    A Great Battle shall Flow,
    Where the Red be Blood that Stains and Glows,
    Yet my Power Grows,
    Then when I grinned,
    You know when one has sinned,
    For enter Warrior’s Rage!
    Berserker’s Madness!
    Born to Fight,
    Bred to Fight,
    With the Battle’s Sight!

    Mjolnir is Flung so Far,
    Where it never Missed its Mark,
    Where the Foe cries,
    Where struck helpless in the Dark…
    The battle rages,
    War is hell,
    Dying in stages,
    Then by Wotan’s Judgement I send foes to Hell,
    And there in the fiery ends of Nothing you but Fell.

    My War Hammer, Mjolnir… Forces Heaven’s Great Doors,
    I Glide and Fly about where only the Mightiest Eagles could soar,
    The Thunder Roars,
    The Lightning Scores!
    Lightning flashes left and right,
    The elemental power that is Thor's might.

    Blessed Asgardian and Elder God of my Father and my Mother,
    Yet I be more than an Asgardian God,
    Far beyond Mortal Man,
    Where Explosions, Impacts, Great Falls and Forces … I easily Withstand!
    The God-Force in my Veins … beyond Mjolnir’s own Name!
    The Life-Force of the God-Force fuels my Game,
    A Strength well Beyond 100 … to the Millions!
    Take that Godzilla! And other Monster Foes!
    To the Midgard Serpent or even the World Engine or the Yggdrasil Tree!
    The clash with Angrir and Gorr,
    Star Cores I hurled,
    Mending Moons by my Lightning Powers,
    Adamantium be but hollow failures,
    Leaning the Leaning Tower,
    Mending the Washington Bridge,
    To Wonder Man’s Superior,
    Or even surviving the Gravity … of the Neutron Star!

    Stalemating Banner … the Hulk by an Hour,
    Even matching the Silver Surfer’s Power!
    Knocking Namor of the Deep,
    Defeating Bi-Beast, Rulk and Gladiator!
    Stalemating Hercules and Juggernaut!
    Even Launching Jaekelsson with a mere Uppercut!

    Invulnerable to all but the most utmost Pains!
    Immune to Earthly Ailments and Diseases!
    Mead I enjoy all day … still but Sober!
    Flying thrown Hearts of Stars,
    Benching Weights of Planets,
    Blasts from the Destroyer,
    Glances of the Doomsday Bomb!
    Even from blows of my Father Odin!
    Yet too the blasts of the Celestials!
    Even Weakened and Crippled,
    I withstood Axe of Skurge,
    To the Absolute of Zero Depths,
    Extreme Pressures,
    Yet once always … in Battle I be Renewed,
    Where for Weeks I fight … yet Fatigue I never Drew…

    To the Speed beyond of Light!
    To striking Quicksilver,
    Now see to that Flash!
    Where even casting Mjolnir beyond the Speed of Light!
    An Fantastic Battle Sight!
    To the Universe and Dimensions in Seconds,
    Or even a Tornado I conjure … by the mere twist of my Cape!

    Stamina beyond the finest Athlete or even Asgardian,
    Augmented by the Belt of Strength!
    Or even Warrior’s Madness by 10 Fold!
    Tracking Senses to the Edges of the Galaxy!
    Yet too healing Most Horrendous Wounds!
    A Longevity augmented by the Golden Apples of Idunn,
    Hurricanes by my Breath!
    To the Cold Naked Fringes of Space I need no Sustenance!

    A Child of Gaea,
    I control the Earth as much as I do Love and Protect and Serve,
    Or escaping and travelling Dimensions,
    To Fantastic Energy Absorption and Manipulation!
    But in the End …
    It is the Lightning Powers and the Sum of Mjolnir I Generate!
    Thunder, Storms, Lightning, Winds and Rain,
    There is much Power from Mjolnir the Worthy could Gain!
    And too the All-Tongue in my Mind…

    Death to Frost Giants, Evil Doers, Sorcerers, Demons, and Foes of Wotan!
    None can hide before me … let alone Odin,,
    Our strength be no limits, backed by Divine Power,
    The Critical Hour,
    With the Judgement of Odin,
    Yet I, the Lightning was but so potent, and Mjolnir my very Sign!

    Avenger, Protector and Defender of Earth and Humans,
    Mjolnir, Sword and Shields protect Asgard’s Sacred Land,
    The Thunderstorms I smite with my Hand,
    With my Great Strength and Determination you shall Learn,
    Bravery and Loyalty that is Earned,
    Decency, Humility, Love and Respect, I, your God of Asgard, shall gladly give in return.

    The message of the Great God of the Thunder,
    Fools shall pay for their Blunder!
    I carry the Will and Blood of my Ancestors,
    Of the Millennia Before,
    The Elders and the Scholars of Asgard will guide and teach me,
    Humility with Light,
    Plight of the Right!
    Endowed with the Strength of Mjollnir's Magical Might!
    This was but a Taste of Power …beyond … any Earthly Delights!

    For the Waves may be but Water,
    The Wind is to but the very Air,
    Lightning and Fire,
    Yet in the end … Thunder is the Utmost Element!
    Where none could endure nor appreciate … the True Torment!
    Where I would spite the Master of Evil!

    Palpable Disbelief,
    There be realms beyond Earth and Asgard,
    Yet I have my own Destiny,
    The Path of the Warrior,
    The call of the Clarion!
    The Existence beyond the Realm of Thunder!
    Victories of Legend!
    Triumph of the Nine!
    God and Man work together,
    War and Avenging Evil …
    For this is … the words of an Avenger…
    Be my friends … Captain America,
    Or the Rage of Banner … the Incredible Hulk,
    Yet I be the Toughest Avenger,
    Where in the depths of Hel, you will see Atonement for your Convictions!
    Before Wotan’s Judgement!

    And when the Day Broke,
    We shall undo the Wrongs,
    Repair the Rights,
    Hence join me in Battle,
    For United Allies Stand,
    None Stand Truly … Alone …
    Hence we Avengers Assemble!
    Defeat! The Fate for the Villains and Foes!

    Even without Mjolnir,
    Hand in Hand … I will settle the Score of Fate Once and For All!
    Thou should not enrage the Anger of the Thunder God,
    Where should Thou desire Strength … then this Battle be fit for You!
    Even Rivalries … where Olympus … will know the Asgardian Wrath!
    I serve my Anger and Defiance to Foes… even be it in a dying Breath!
    Light and Truth … Lightning’s Judgement … it melts and burns Concealment!
    Harvested by Mjolnir … be it like the Winter’s Harshest,
    Yet Mjolnir only yields … to the Worthy’s Command!
    Not even that of Jor-El … could truly Master or Withstand!
    Proves be that Mjolnir could not be matched … by the Might of Superman!

    I fight for Asgard! The Herald of the Midgard!
    Speak be Worthy! Or Thy be Facing the Might of The Thunder God!
    For you will know the Innocent are always under the protection of the Avengers!
    For yet I too learned … it is not always Power at the Critical Hour,
    But the Wise whom know how to use Power,
    For the Benefit of Justice!
    As my Heart and Soul be pledged to the sacred Asgard and Earth,
    So long as I am around … I ensure there is no true Danger!
    Where Victory be best with Brain and Brawn!

    Legends be True! With the God and Asgard’s Sacred Will,
    I Rise again from the Afterlife!
    The Thunder God,
    Be it Thursday named by me,
    The Lord of the Lightning,
    The Skies Humble before me and the Might of MJOLNIR!

    Where as Great Power means Great Responsibility by fellow Avenger Spiderman,
    Yet the pondering question … should Power so Great … heed such Great Responsibility?
    Battles of Honor,
    For loyal Warriors,
    Are forever Honored,
    In the Halls of Asgard…
    A War to Fight … A War of Murder,
    What is True Sacrifice?
    Where even in the Bad Days of the coming,
    There be worse,
    Where the real menaces of frightening Power,
    We must raise our Guard,
    We fight to the Last,
    So nothing be forgotten of the Past,
    All Good and Brothers and Sisters Stand,
    Never Relenting,
    For we are now at War!
    For the Villain will Yield,
    The Battle is my Playing Field!

    Leagues and Realms!
    Be the day of Remembering and Reckoning!
    The World of Nine will bellow with Echoing Fury!
    The Judgement has Begun,
    Worth even Ragnaroth’s Run!
    The Power granted by Asgard,
    I condemn the Evil to Die,
    Yet even there be only True Satisfaction … when the Thunder God realized … he aided his Fellow Man!
    Where even in the odd Days,
    I am never truly Helpless,
    Let alone Worthless!
    For remember the Thunder … it shall leave many but Breathless!

    The Wise and the Worthy,
    Seek the Doth in one’s Heart,
    Where Life has its Storms,
    Yet when in the Heart of the Maelstrom…you will discover … your inner Wisdom!
    Glory and Power and the Time …
    Where as long as you endured,
    Life is but to the Full… with no true regrets…
    Only the Evil and the Unworthy will Profit None …

    Yet of all my Powers,
    Be it Time! The Luxury I Yearned,
    Yet that many would not Appreciate nor Learn!
    Yet in the Hearts that Burned,
    Only can I only Ponder … Life’s Paradoxes…by the Will of Asgard!
    Yet should Disaster still Strike,
    Let the Asgardian Protector Strike … with Mjolnir’s Mystical Might!
    For beyond that of the Smoldering Blazes … yet have no Fear,
    Where I, the Protector of Asgard and Earth be There!
    Because it is the Will and the Way … of the Warrior Gods!
    Foes Beware … Empty Words of Threats I do not Care!
    Challenge the Thunderous Might … if you Dare …
    For to Fight an Earn the Honor of a Battle with an Asgardian was but so Rare …
    Never will a Cause be but Lost,
    Where to think who doubt that I would Falter?
    I will Endure and Weather,
    Whilst Hope be but Gone …
    The Gods shall Speak and Fight!
    Of Bravery’s Might!
    Tis but a Duty … to Safeguard Earth as much as my beloved Asgard…
    Yet I too have Pity … where there is the Fall of a Worthy Foe…

    The Greatest of the Great!
    Asgard’s Finest,
    Never shall we Buckle with Weakness,
    From the Beginning … to the End,
    I shall lead the Gods … to Ragnaroth and Beyond Vahalla!
    Now the Elements my Toys,
    The Storms I Yield,
    Mjolnir I Wield,
    Thunder Claps my Shield!
    The Atmosphere my Field!
    Like the Rising Serpent’s Wrath!
    I Raze the Foes in my Path!
    Warrior’s Hath!
    We carry the Fallen to the Destiny!

    The Swift Lightning!
    Elemental Storm and Fury I Brew!
    Wrath I Drew!
    Many I will Slew!
    Strength Lies in the Victory!
    Bound by a Sacred Oath,
    The Worthy can Wield Mjolnir,
    Which goes beyond the Infinity!
    Flee if you wish … for it may be your last…
    Perhaps yet there be those Worthy for the Throne,
    Words that Speak beyond Nobility!
    Since Ancient Tranquility!
    Where since Balder the Brave!
    With Justice and Righteousness of Odin!
    Yet Balder be worthy of Asgard’s Golden Realm!

    But when Pushed beyond Anger,
    To the Desperate Danger,
    I will Unleash the Utmost Power of Asgard!
    Where thou shall see it matched too Galactus … the Devourer… or even the might of a Celestial!
    This be the Ancient God-Force in my Blood and Veins,
    With the Mystics and Faith in Mjolnir … of Sacred Uru,
    This be known too be it … the Berserker’s Rage!
    The Warrior’s Madness!
    For I and my Hammer be but One Living Supreme!
    Yet always Remember… I the God of Thunder,
    Hold my Vow … you I shall protect,
    The Might of Asgard in my Soul and Blood I project!

    The Lord of Winds,
    The Lord of Lightning,
    The Master of the Storm!
    The Tamer of Thunder,
    The Thunder and the Lightning are but my Servants,
    The Rain be my Messages,
    The Natural Phenomena of Earth … was but my Steed … since Birth!
    Where no True Mortal … dare stand defy this!
    For I be the Elemental Bliss!

    Then be the Day,
    With the coming of the Old Ways,
    Where I be free of my Chains!
    None shall bind me or Thee!
    Where we vanquish Trolls, Giants and the Unworthy,
    We Free our Beloved Asgard!
    For the Free stand with Me!
    Where so long as even I stand … Asgard will never Fall!
    Banded Together we Stand,
    Even Divided Alone… with the Judgement of my Father … and the Mastery of Thunder … I shall make my Final Stand…

    As the Weather wore the Rock,
    Storms Calm the Fury,
    Regardless of the Time,
    My Will shall be always Bound,
    And I will Summon and Surround,
    To the Mystical Powers … of Mjolnir…
    Yet when Summoned I be of the Son of Odin,
    I am the Legacy of Asgard!
    For in my Audience,
    You seek my Presence!
    Speak your Piece,
    And come in Peace!
    For what Attendance?
    Be but so needed of I, the God of Thunder?!
    For Remember,
    This is the God of Asgard to Whom Thou is but Speaking!
    Where careful Thy Words be when Addressing!

    Then Alas the Final Great Ragnarock!
    The Final Battles,
    Despite the Doom that Looms,
    For the Courage I muster,
    We shall Conquer!
    There is the Day of Reckoning!
    And the Light’s Beckoning!

    And though there be the Pain’d and Sadness of Defeat,
    Yet the Occasions be Drawn so Strong,
    The Great to the Splendid,
    The Shame to the Guilt,
    Yet too we Mourn the Fallen,
    Where the Right was the Law,
    The Sound Wisdom and Words that Speak such Judgement!
    The Unequalled Honor,
    Yet without those before us,
    We are less than nothing,
    Yet I, the God of Thunder,
    Shall ensure all be no true Blunder!
    For just Remember,
    Through the Eyes of Midgard,
    You face the New Dawn!
    Where Graced with Aspiration,
    For the Golden Age of Asgard,
    For with the Might of Mjolnir,
    I, Thor … the Thunder God … shall Protect and Guide the Innocent,
    For be it the Vow of Thor,
    The Son of Asgard,
    Master of Thunder,
    Wielder of Storms and Rain,
    For I am of Odin’s Blood,
    Thor Odinson I am,
    The Strongest of Asgard,
    Thor I am,
    The Thunder God of Asgard
     
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  2. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    The battle rages,
    War is hell,
    Dying in stages,
    Then by Wotan’s Judgement I send foes to Hell,
    And there in the fiery ends of Nothing you but Fell.


    This was my favorite! I love this poem. Very nice, posting it on a Thors-day :D
     
  3. Mira_Jade

    Mira_Jade The (FavoriteTM) Fanfic Mod With the Cape star 5 Staff Member Manager

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    Ahh, I enjoyed this poem a ridiculous amount. You did a great job creating a mighty, epic feel - much like the Eddas where these tales originally come from! =D=

    (And I especially liked your posting this on a Thursday. That was brilliant. ;))
     
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  4. The Sith Camp

    The Sith Camp Jedi Knight star 4

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    Mar 10, 2015
    Ladies Ladies! *Smaug Voice* By the Power of Dragon-Speech - The Sith Camp has but composed a Grand Ode about ME SMAUG THE MAGNIFICENT!

    Ok Ok - as you requested and as promised I have just posted the SMAUG poem then - you will find it in the threads ;) Enjoy!
     
  5. The Sith Camp

    The Sith Camp Jedi Knight star 4

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    Funny enough - on a 'Thors-day' last week AGAIN I gave hard-copy of this to one of my fellow school-mates who incidentally teaches humanities well Social Studies and English classes - and her topic was on poetry in the English classes :)

    The next day one of the teachers asks me 'honestly do you even sleep writing these long poems?'