Before - Legends May the Drabble Be With You (Obi/Qui/Dooku/KOTOR/OCs/CCs...all welcome!)

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  1. Kestrel_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    Note: Ok, I've been writing drabble (piece of writing of exactly 100 words) as a way of trying to get past this darn DWB...I thought I'd post some up and then I thought perhaps others would like to add their drabbles as well? So, please have a go and add your own! Any Before characters welcome!

    Title: A Part of Me
    Author: Kestrel_Kenobi

    I lean over and gently stroke his face, he grins before slowly opening his eyes and looking at me.

    ?It?s morning. Time to rise little one.?

    He nods, his bright blue eyes gazing into my own.

    I move away, but he holds out his arms to me and how can I help but lift him from his bed and hold him close to me.

    He rests his head on my shoulder and I smile at how right it feels. He is a welcome weight in my arms and in my heart.

    He is a part of me already. My Obi-Wan.
  2. LilQui-Gon Jedi Youngling

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  3. Kestrel_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    Thanks LilQui-Gon - gonna play? [face_batting]

    Title: Confused
    Author: Kestrel_Kenobi

    ?Master!? Urgent.

    ?Yes, Qui-Gon?? Patient.

    ?Have you heard?? Excited.

    ?No, Qui-Gon.? Patient.

    ?They haven?t told you?? Confused.

    ?Told me what Qui-Gon?? Not so patient.

    ?Master Yoda said that you would know!? Frustrated.

    ?He did? Well, I don?t know Qui-Gon.? Impatient.


    ?Well Qui-Gon?? Annoyed.

    ?Yes, Master.? Obedient.

    ?Are you going to tell me?? Frustrated.

    ?Tell you what Master?? Patient.

    ?What it is that?s so urgent.? Confused.

    ?I don?t know Master.? Not so patient.

    ?You said Master Yoda said I would know what?? Frustrated.

    ?Oh. He said...he said...? Thoughtful.

    ?Yes?? Impatient.

    ?Er, well, um, you see...I?ve forgotten.? Worried.

  4. jaina_clan_solo Jedi Padawan

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    These are great Kes! The first one was quite sweet, and the second was so funny and cute!

    =D= I'm looking forward to seeing more of these!
  5. LilQui-Gon Jedi Youngling

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    [face_laugh] How cute! I'll probably give it a shot. It will take me a little while. [face_thinking]
  6. LilQui-Gon Jedi Youngling

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    [face_idea] Here's mine!

    Title: What?!
    Characters: Padawan Qui/Tahl

    "Hello Tahl."


    Qui-Gon stares at Tahl.


    "Oh nothing. Uh... How's your day?"

    "I've been better. Yours?"



    "Huh? Oh! Mine was okay, I guess. Have you worked on your project for Physics yet?"

    "It's was difficult, but I manage to get it together. Thanks to my master."

    Qui-Gon continues to stare at Tahl.



    "What is up with you? You keep on staring at me like I'm a freak! What's wrong with you?"

    He shift from foot to foot. "You look pretty today,"
    He said quietly.

    "Oh. *Blushes* Thank you."

  7. VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus

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    Wonderful! =D= Can't wait for more! :D
  8. Kestrel_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    Jaina and VaderLVR64 - Thanks :D

    LilQui-Gon- [face_laugh] Loved shy Qui - great stuff!
  9. Healer_Leona Squirrely Community Mod

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    I really liked A Part of Me, very sweet.

    The title of Confused says it all! [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    What?!?: Awww, very cute! [face_love] [face_love]
  10. micky-nikki Jedi Youngling

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    Ah these are all so great! =D=

    Just a little something that came to while enjoying a midnight snack.

    Still Alive

    A small dish was set before Obi-Wan and Master Qui-Gon with great flourish. They were dining in the royal hall of Racembro and the king was serving them his planets most prestigious dishes. Obi-Wan eagerly dug into the dark red delicacy but the Master was wary.

    ?Obi-Wan look,? he whispered. He then tapped the food with his spoon. It wiggled in the bowl for a moment then stilled. ?It?s moving. I think whatever this is, is still alive.?

    Obi-Wan carefully set down his spoon and gave his Master an exasperated look, eye brows raised.

    ?Master, it?s jello. Just eat it.?
  11. obi_webb Jedi Master

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    i loved all these! this looks like fun so kes, here is some kotor drabble since you asked so nicely![:D]

    Bastila leans back in the kitchen chair and lets out an anguished moan.

    "Was it that bad?" Gando asks, concerned.

    She doesn't say anything, she just looks at him, a sick look on her face and nods yes.

    "You don't look too good hon.." he notices.

    She takes a second and tries to stop her stomach from churning and says.."...I really appreciate you trying to cook this time but.."

    She stops mid sentence, her face suddenly looking a color it's not intended to look and runs to the 'fresher.

    "Did I use too much rancor pepper?" he wonders.
  12. jodiwent Jedi Master

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    These are all great. It is soooo hard to write something exactly 100 words too.
  13. Kestrel_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    micky-nikki - [face_laugh] fantastic!

    obi - :D aw, good to see you here...I think Bastila will be avoiding Gando's cooking in future then?

    Here's another...for all the Qui-inclined ppl [face_batting]

    Title: The Night After
    Author: Kestrel_Kenobi

    You open your eyes to find that Qui-Gon is already awake, his gaze, so full of love, washes over you and you smile. His eyes crinkle in the corners as he does so, and a hint of a dimple in his chin shows through. Automatically you reach out your hand and brush against it with your fingertips. Qui-Gon bends his head to kiss the tips of your fingers.

    ?Good evening my love.?

    ?Evening?? You reply. ?What happened to the morning?the afternoon??

    ?They?ve been and gone.?


    He opens his arms and you move towards him, move into his embrace.
  14. LilQui-Gon Jedi Youngling

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    [face_love] [face_love] [face_love] Oh how I wish that was real! =P~ =P~ =P~
  15. Charmisjess Jedi Youngling

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    [face_love] These are all so sweet, especially What?!. I haven't read a Tahl fic in ages! :)

    My own little contribution...



    Dark amber eyes glanced up, rather distractedly. "Did you need something, Qui-Gon?"


    " just...I?" Qui-Gon dithered, staring. ?I don?t mean to interrupt, but??


    "-But what are you doing?"

    Dooku was perched precariously atop a table, amid of sea of Younglings and paint containers. A smear of colorful paint marked one cheek and several long fingers. What was more, he was leaning over what appeared to be an absurdly precise finger painting. ?I?m supervising,? he murmured, returning to his work. "Of course.?

    ?Oh.? Qui-Gon blinked.

    There was a slight pause; Dooku thoughtfully considering his painting, Qui-Gon watching in baffled silence. Finally, Dooku shrugged. ?If you?d like, there?s more paper over on the table.?

    Qui-Gon grinned.
  16. Jennifer_Lyn Jedi Master

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    Jun 8, 2005
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    oh, these are lovely! i look forward to seeing more of them.

    drabbles, hmm? my muse is intrigued.
  17. Kestrel_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    Charmisjess [face_laugh] funny!

    The Night Before

    ?Are you hungry??

    You shake your head.

    ?Do you want to get up??

    You shake your head again and are rewarded by a deep chuckle which brings a sleepy smile to your face.

    ?And I thought I was the old one in this liaison!?

    ?You?re not old Qui-Gon,? you murmur.

    More laughter.

    ?Thank you. You know you?re obliged to say that though by the very nature of our relationship.?

    There is a brief, but comfortable silence and you can feel yourself drifting back to sleep.



    ?Are you asleep??


    ?Well, wake up and kiss me.?

    And you do.
  18. LilQui-Gon Jedi Youngling

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    Wow! That was nice Kestrel. =D=
  19. kenobiwanobi Jedi Youngling

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    I really like all of these great job to everyone
  20. Stella_Ripple Jedi Youngling

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    Here you are then- a fully qualified drabble! [face_dancing] Don?t ask where it came from or where it could have gone- all I know is that it was here before I realised I was even writing! Do I get brownie points for using Yoda, Dooku aaand lil Qui-Gon- all them are first timers for me! :D

    Between Master and Padawan


    He didn?t move.

    You have to let him go.

    Baleful young eyes held my own, until I flinched and turned away?only to stumble onto a pair of unblinking citrus eyes.

    It was a rare time when Yoda failed to lecture my Padawan in front of his own master. As if the Temple itself would crumble if I were to take into my incompetent hands such enormities as disciplining my own Padawan.

    A strange coincidence therefore, that we should be in the lower levels- where the walls were slowly cracking into disrepair- when he found us in this silent confrontation.
  21. Jennifer_Lyn Jedi Master

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    Kes, thank you so much for starting this!

    i love all of these. ooh, romantic Qui.
    Stella, congrats you! three characters in one little drabble and you wrote them well!

    Same Old Situation

    ?Obi-Wan?? He?s grumpy.

    ?Yes, Master?? I?m tentative.

    ?Your elbow is in my back.? He?s grumpier.

    ?Sorry, Master.? I shift. The space is tight, the transport over-crowded and we share a small bunk.

    ?Your ankle?? Concern is under his fatigue.

    ?Throbbing.? I answer.

    The Force shifts, warmth flows over my leg. The pain is lessened.

    ?Thank you, Master.? I sigh.

    ?I shall teach you how to do it yourself, young one.? He sighs, ?Just as soon as I get some rest.?

    I nod, he can?t see it. ?Yes, Master. I think it would be a good thing for me to learn.?
  22. Stella_Ripple Jedi Youngling

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    This was such a good idea Kes! It's really helping me write little somethings in a pressure free zone! [:D]
    Now then, replies!

    Kes Drabbling suits you!
    A part of me- absolutely melted me [face_love]
    Confused- [face_laugh] Loved it! The quintessential conversation between friends- we've all had them- and this really got to the heart of it!
    The night after- [face_love] need I say more?
    The night before- lovely dialogue!

    LilQui-Gon Awww Qui blushing :D loved that side of young qui!

    micky-nikki [face_laugh] *chokes* killer last line! I can just see qui's enthusiasm and obi the exasperated and patiently irritated at the follies of the aged teenager! (i'll stop running on now!)

    obi About time we had a bit of kotor in here! Poor gando, try to do a nice thing and it blows up in his face [face_laugh]

    Charmisjess Loved it! The idea of Dooku concentrating that hard on finger painting.. *snrk* and the ending actually made me see why qui-gon and dooku would be such a good team!

    J_L [face_laugh] What a nice new angle on the 'same situations' I loved how they had an almost unspoken (or at least, monosyllabic) routine- makes you wonder just how often they do deal with this!- it really shows how seamless a pair they are! Nice one!
  23. LilQui-Gon Jedi Youngling

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    Hey Stella_Ripple, thanks for the review! I might have to correct you, it's Tahl who's blushing not Qui. But that's okay, thanks to all who reviewed. I need some more ideas for another drabble. :D [:D] [face_love]
  24. LilQui-Gon Jedi Youngling

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    [face_idea] Oh, oh, wait here's another! :D

    Title:Braids & Bows
    Characters: Qui/Obi/others

    "Master Qui-Gon, may we play with you hair?" Qui-Gon was surrounded by
    four crenche girls. All looking at him sweetly.

    "No girls sorry, I have to leave."

    "Please Master. It won't take long. PLLLEEEAAASSSEEE?"

    Qui-Gon sighed. He didn't want to break the girls' hearts by the looks on their faces.


    The girls gave each other a smile.

    30 minutes later...

    Obi-Wan woke up from his nap on the couch at the sound of the door opening.

    His eyes widen at the sight of his master.

    Qui-Gon pressed his lips and bust out, "Don't ask, Padawan! Just don't."

    His hair was in tiny braids and numerous colored bows at the end of each one.

    Obi-Wan said nothing. He watched his master stomp to his room.

    When he heard the bedroom door slam shut, he burst into laughter & into tears.

    You Likie? :D
  25. Layren Jedi Master

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    Oct 28, 2003
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    All of these are so cute!! Just what I needed to lighten up my mood :D
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