Discussion in 'Mojave Desert CA' started by Stridarious, Feb 21, 2003.
[face_shocked] *gets writting*
That's what I thought. *puts shot away* I'll keep it close just in case.
C'mon guys. I'll give a sneak peek of an upcoming chapter to whoever can guess the real world nations first.
But its so hard!
I have no idea.
Chapter 1: Italy
Chapter 2: United States
Chapter 3: China
Chapter 4: France and Cuba, with a mention of the next chapter's nation.
Is the answer Cuba?
Hmm, good point there
Oh its being showcased at the Fan Fiction Category. Although after they redid those boards, I lost this story completely, however I do have the chapters saved on my windows My Documents drive. And I may post it agian soon enough, once we get to a certian point in the story .
We really should be posting our stories in the fan fiction area so people can read it!
Maybe I'll post it and then we'll continue it!
I've been posting our story and people seem to like it.
I've been continuing it as if we were going in our order too. It's all great!
Could you please post a link?
I'd like to see their reactions.
//EDIT: More (server not found) errors!
Sure I guess I can post the link here to the fanfiction
I think the fanfic we've been working on and that I took to the fanfiction forum has died. I've had no time to write and I don't remember what's going on. Has anyone been writing anything lately?
Not on that story sadly, I encountered severe writer's block and lost all interest in continuing when I couldn't get the next chapter to feel right. But....
The New Sith Order: Youth Lost
The New Sith Order has taken over the galaxy and for the first time has complete control, but their war with the Jedi has taken its toll on their resources and they are in need of a time of rebuilding. That is when they show up, the strange invaders from beyond known as the Yuuzhan Vong. This story takes place in a time in the New Sith Order RPG arc that was never talked about or portrayed. While it doesn't focus on a galaxy wide conflict it focuses on the first line of defense on a lonely planet and a group of young teenage Sith fighting an enemy they don't understand with technology they don't understand.
Tray(Traythina) Asatii- Female human and pilot of the experimental fighter
Koningi Rare- Male human and pilot of fighter 1
Osketa Sortie- Female human and pilot of fighter 2
Tristan Undule- Male Human One of Koningi's friends and later pilot of fighter 4
Joey Williams- Male Chiss, Another of Koningi's friends, his dad works in the military base
Raith Rare- Male human and father of Koningi. He is also the Commander of the base.
Mallonie Kattsy- Female human and captain in control of the experimental fighter project.
Rilina Haokl- Female Chiss Doctor in charge of the well being of the pilots
Raige- Male human
Oh I absoultely love the fact that you incorporated our RPG's into this story: "This story takes place in a time in the New Sith Order RPG arc that was never talked about or portrayed. While it doesn't focus on a galaxy wide conflict it focuses on the first line of defense on a lonely planet and a group of young teenage Sith fighting an enemy they don't understand with technology they don't understand."
However, showed the main factors of what is going on during this time zone. Very well written and thought out!
Oh sounds very interesting, looking forward to more
Lately, I have been focusing my attention on the area of creative writting within my stories. As so I noticed that my idea were a little too off balanced as so, I have decided to re-construct the main RPG based story, "The New Sith Order." Not the one mentioned within this thread, but the one that had been acted out many months back when I first joined as Lord_Athrenino in June of '02. Any and all help would be appreciated. Perhaps a few ideas of what should be mentioned within it, could be posted below .
No black lightsabers, ever...
Well what'd help is to find the rpg and go there for reference