Saga MY IMMORTAL: darthlauren

Hi everyone, this is my first fic that i've posted so be kind to me,
please. I love the song My Immortal by Evanescence and I thought it
would fit perfectly with Padme's story, so here it goes.

MY IMMORTAL-BY darthlauren
Summary: A dying Padme reflects on her husband, Padme's POV. (note:
the memories are separated by stansas from the Evanescence song My
Immortal. A couple of the stansas are added from an older version of
the song)
Rating: PG
Now to the story...
I walk in a golden field on Naboo, my thin blue dress blowing around
in wind as it whips against me. I don't notice the stinging slap, nor
could I care. Caring has only brought me pain and suffering. All that
I have ever truely loved has been taken from me: my parents, my
sister, my nieces, my home, my children, and my husband.

His name now is Darth Vader but twenty one years ago when I first met
the little boy named Annie on Tatoowien he was a normal ten year old
boy, and yet he was so very different. When he was twenty I met him
again after a ten year absence, he was known then to the great Jedi
Order as "The Chosen One" or Anakin to his friends and Master. In our
ten years of marrage I called him many different names, like Annie, or
husband, but mostly I called him Anakin.

But now Anakin is dead, forever hidden in the shroud of the Dark Side
of the Force. The little boy and loving husband I knew all those years
is gone, hidden in the back of Vader's sick mind.

I'm so tired of being here
Suppressed by all my childish fears
And if you have to leave
I wish that you would just leave
Because your presence still lingers here
And it wont leave me alone

"Are you an angel?' the dirty little boy asked me.

"A what?" I was entirely bafled by his question.

"An angel," he said. "They live on the moons of lego, I think. They're
the most beautiful creatures in the univers. They're good and kind,
and so pretty they make even the hardest space pirate cry."

"I've never heared of an angel before," I said.

"You must be one," he said as if it were the most obvious thing in the
galaxy."Maybe you just don't know it."

The rest of our fist meeting is a blur to me, that is until he told me
he would marry me, I didn't believe him. Why should I have believed
him? We would be leaving Tatoowine in a few hours and I would forget
all about Anakin. Or so I thought.

These wounds wont seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase

I'd grown to care deeply for the little, messy blond haired, blue eyed
boy in the two days we had spent in their hovel. He was a really
interesting person and it pained me to think that when we left he
would still be a slave, a possetion.

Qui-Gon supprised us all by freeing Anakin and bringing him with us on
the royal cruiser to Coruscant. He seemed to think that Annie was the
missing link in some Jedi profesy.
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I found Anakin curled up in a corner, trying to stay warm. At first
when I entered the room I thought I was alone, but I felt his ever
watchful eyes on my back as I listened to the message from Naboo.

I walked over to him and gave him my firy red over cloak to keep him
warm. I teased him about him being from a warm planet and space being
cold but he didn't respond to my teasing.

"I'm-I'm not sure what's going to happen to me," he said in a
whisper."I don't know if I'll ever see you again."

"Annie, our fates are tied together. If you promised to marry me,
than, yes, we will meet again."

"I made this for you,"he said."So you'd remeber me. I carved it out of
a jopor snippt."

I took the roughly carved pendent hanging on a rough leather coard and
put it around my neck."I don't need this to remember you by," I
said."Many things will chang when we reach the capitol, Annie. But my
caring for you will remain."

"I care about you, too," he said."Only-only I miss-"

"You miss your mother," I finished his sentence as I pulled him into a
tight hug, shushing him to sleep.

When y

 

Not a bad songfic, darthlauren. You might want to in some way or form make it a bit clearer what in this is the lyrics, and what's the story.

I likes it though!

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