My latest thread {[(enter at your own risk)]}

So, when can we join the next game?

Ysanne[/i] "Valyn's 'Sanney"? Do I even want to know?

DoY: Likely not, but if you're reading those "True Adventures" you will soon enough.

Ysanne: Your sig looks very weird without the first line.

I was afraid of that.

I have Poem, a spoof on a Robert Frost Poem

ahem,

Whose Woods these are I think I know
I shot him in the village though
He will not see me stopping here to
Take stuff from his bungalow

My Little car must think it queer
To stop without a copper here
In the woods on the Forzen lake
The Darkest evening of the Year

I give the little trunk a shake
And dump the body in the lake
The only others sounds the blaring
Sirens on Downy Flake
The Woods Are Haunting Dark and Deep
But I have contrcts to keep
And other people to put too sleep
And other people too put to sleep

What do you think of my poem

Upping htis for Jacens girl. all me poems are on the first page.

from a defunct thread that was pruned:

AT's Untitled French Song

If you like to sing,
if you like french,
or if you just have a short attention span, and no rythm what-so-ever,
then come and sing this as-yet untitled french song with meeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
(incredible intro right nnnnnnnow)

(chorus)
Manger the dog!
Open the fenetre!
Throw away your un livre!
Porter you clothes!
(/chorus)

You can see i am good at french, right?
i good at song, too!
(Guitar solo)
je vais un good at french, oui?
Je sing song pond waddle*, deux!

(Chorus)

Mittens are for une je wearing,
this song is for une Tuuuuuu,
that's the french word for you!
regarder un des T.V.,
un scarf et un chapeu une pailles,
S-S, o-n-s-snnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnneak right out!

(Chorus)
Bongo solo
(chorus)

Mimes are une freaky!
Clowns are pathetic, too!
i can conjugate "Ils vont portent"
And now so can you!

*falls to floor laughing until she can't breathe then catches breath and starts laughing harder*
EDIT: *sucks in breath* Can't.....stop.......laughing.....must.......breathe

PS- I love Tammy's poem about Atty, thats great

I've started working on some more serious stuff, and my friends have a band going and they want to take a lot of my new, serious poems and use them for lyrics, sometimes.

So here's some of the new stuff:

Song 3
Beat me at every turn,
Always another step ahead.
How many times,
Have I wished you dead?
Even when I?m right,
You make me wrong.
I?d laugh if just this once,
You lost, and I laughed.
Next time, maybe.

Retrospect
Look into the mirror,
Can you see
Anything but a sad reflection,
Of what should be?
Been through so much
That I?ve lost that human touch.
Tried to adapt, to change,
But humanity?s out of my range.
Look into the mirror,
Can you see
Anything but a sad reflection,
Of what should be?
Important to remember,
That it all started from an ember of my inaction,
And now it?s burning to my dissatisfaction.
It?s getting hard to see,
What it was all worth,
To me.
Look into the mirror,
Can you see
Anything but a sad reflection,
Of what should be?
Look into the mirror,
Can you see?
Can you see?
Can you see,
Anything but a sad reflection,
Of what should be?



i really want your opinions on this stuff, so tell me what ya think

Oh, c'mon, someone say something.

[face_shocked] Wow!

is that a "wow, thats good" "wow, thats bad" or "wow, you've got a huge, ugly insect on top of your head" ?

Wow, I'm really impressed.

i like impressing people.


Some more stuff:

Seperation Anxiety (the name of my friends band )
Left me by myself.
Wasn?t your fault,
But it brought my world to a halt.
Gone forever.
I?m alone forever.
Withdrawal sets in,
And I begin to swim,
In a river of pain.
I forget everything,
Except you.
How could I,
Live this lie,
Without you?
Every breath kills,
No more thrills.
I would rather die,
Than try,
To live without you.

Suspense!
What will happen next?
We can hardly know,
We can only guess.
If the future gave us some clue,
If the future gave us one clue,
The surprise wouldn?t be,
And the future would be set.
Suspense makes it all worthwhile,
What will happen next?
We can hardly know,
We can only guess.
Action gives us some ascendance,
But suspense is still in attendance.
What will happen next?
We can hardly know,
We can only guess.
Time to take control!
No more luck or debate,
From here on in
There?s only fate!
What will happen next?
We can?t always decide,
But they can only guess!

Wow, you've got a real gift, Adam.

Flattery will get you everywhere.

Naturally.

I'm gonna save you guys and gals the time and space. If you want to check out some of my stuff it's at www.allpoetry.com and my username is CrystalTiger

I like it, dude.

i just signed up on that site.

i'm adam1138

Yay.

I'll check out the poetry site tomorrow. I'm too tired to really appreciate anything right now.

Lots of AT poems

It's getting so late,
And i would hate,
To leave you hear.
I just wanna hold you near.

No one knows we're gone.
Sitting on the lawn,
In these early hours.
No one could stop us from doing something wrong.
But i just want to savour this moment,
And belong.

This will seem melodramatic,
But i feel so ecstatic,
And at the same time rather mellow.
I love these hours without the cars,
Where all that exsist are us,
And the stars.

Soon we will see the sun,
It'll ruin our sad little fun.
Let's enjoy the here and the now,
Even if later, these moments we will disavow.