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Saga My Name is Vader- One Shot, please post lots of comments=))))

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Darth_ShadowHawk, Jul 7, 2006.

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  1. Darth_ShadowHawk

    Darth_ShadowHawk Jedi Youngling

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    My Name is Vader


    My eyes are black.

    My heart is steel.

    Yet I Love,

    Yet I see.

    My legs are dead,

    My face is gone.

    But I can walk,

    I can be.

    I am loved,

    I am taken care of.

    Yet I am feared,

    I am shunned.

    I am strong,

    I am hateful.

    But I can?t breathe on my own,

    And I still love.

    Who am I?

    What am I?

    My Name is Vader

    And I am a Jedi?
     
    Darth_ShadowHawk, Jul 7, 2006
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  2. leia_naberrie

    leia_naberrie Jedi Master star 4

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    I don't know much about poetry :p but I know what I like. I like this. It reads a lot like a prologue or a teaser to a very interesting AU:

    My Name is Vader; And I am a Jedi?

    :eek:

     
    leia_naberrie, Jul 7, 2006
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  3. Darth_ShadowHawk

    Darth_ShadowHawk Jedi Youngling

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    wow! Already a reply, thanks a lot. Vaders such an interesting subject. Any tips?
     
    Darth_ShadowHawk, Jul 7, 2006
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  4. Lea-El

    Lea-El Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Aug 13, 2005
    Short but sweet, good work, you captured him in such a few words.
     
    Lea-El, Jul 20, 2006
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  5. 92SE-R

    92SE-R Jedi Master star 3

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    Apr 15, 2005
    Very nice, enjoyed it alot.

    As for a tip... read my Fic about Vader (shameless plug)


    http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/24072398
     
    92SE-R, Jul 20, 2006
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