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Story [Narnia] The Lost Prince of Telmar

Discussion in 'Non Star Wars Fan Fiction' started by Halle Dray, Apr 12, 2016.

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  1. Halle Dray

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    Excellent!
     
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    Halle Dray, Aug 10, 2016
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  4. Mira Grau

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    It´s a good chapter, I like it that Nina frees her tutor from prison. :)
    In the books I always wondered how he knew so much about the Narnian´s.
     
    Mira Grau, Aug 11, 2016
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    Halle Dray, Aug 11, 2016
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  6. Mira Grau

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    Yeah your right, I remember that.
    Although it asks the question how his parents meet each other. :)
     
    Mira Grau, Aug 11, 2016
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    Awesome! =D=
     
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    Halle Dray, Aug 30, 2016
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  9. Mira Grau

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    Cool chapter.
    Maybe Ali should have been a bit more diplomatic. :)
     
    Mira Grau, Aug 31, 2016
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  11. Lady_Belligerent

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    I like Nina, she's a fun character.
     
    Lady_Belligerent , Sep 4, 2016
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    That makes sense.
     
    Darth_wanderguard, Sep 6, 2016
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    Halle Dray, Sep 22, 2016
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  14. Mira Grau

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    Nice chapter. :)
    I like it.
     
    Mira Grau, Sep 22, 2016
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    Quite liked Chapter 1.

    Bit surprised at the force she could muster after two weeks on hard bread and salty water, but the flight through the secret passages was well realised.
     
    Sith-I-5, Sep 22, 2016
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  17. Darth Osnil

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    I say this was well written. I can't wait for more.
     
    Darth Osnil, Oct 19, 2016
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    I'll be watching for it. :)
     
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    Well done. I can't wait for even more.
     
    Darth Osnil, Nov 2, 2016
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  23. Mira Grau

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    Nice chapter. :)
    I like how you integrated Nina and Ali in the original plot.
     
    Mira Grau, Nov 2, 2016
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    Nice update!
     
    Darth_wanderguard, Feb 13, 2017
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