Need some ideas for a young Obi fic.

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  1. Neon Star Jedi Grand Master

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    Okay, it seems that the young Obi fic that I have been working on has hit a brick wall, hard. So here is a little about what it is about. Obi is five years old and is sent to live with Qui-gon for a while because the creche is over crowded at the moment. At the same time, Atrus has asked Qui-gon to take care of Nicholas, her younger brother, who is also five years old and barely in control of his Jagaar powers. Plus that to the fact that he can open a portal to any time, any where. This story is their adventures. Does anyone have any ideas?
  2. Neon Star Jedi Grand Master

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    Anyone have any ideas?
  3. Neon Star Jedi Grand Master

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  4. Alderaan_ Jedi Master

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    I have no idea what you're talking about with all those big words [face_blush]
  5. Neon Star Jedi Grand Master

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  6. Jedi Girl of Corellia Manager Emeritus

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    How about Nicholas and Obi both get lost in time? And have to figure out how to get back? They can hop all around, and maybe even meet Yoda when HE was five :D
  7. Alderaan_ Jedi Master

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    what's Atrus and Jagaar?
  8. Neon Star Jedi Grand Master

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    Atrus is a character of mine that is a good friend of Qui-gon's.

    Jagaar are a race that I made up that have powers such as shape changing and other things.
  9. Jane Jinn Jedi Grand Master

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    Well, I can't think of any great full-story plot ideas, but here's a possibility for a scene, perhaps at the beginning of the story.

    It's bathtime! Obi-Wan and Nicholas are having fun in the tub until Qui-Gon comes in and announces it's hair washing time. Neither boy wants to have his hair washed. Obi-Wan leaps out and races to the bedroom where he hides under the bed (in all those dust bunnies). Qui-Gon tries to follow him, slips on a pile of water, and lands flat on his face. And every time he approaches Nicholas with the shampoo, Nicholas changes into a shape that doesn't have hair. Or he changes into a small bantha, clambours out of the tub, and shakes himself like a wet dog, getting Qui-Gon soaked as well.

    Just an idea...
  10. KenobisGirl Jedi Master

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    Hehe Jane, what a funny mental image that one makes...

    I can't think of anything! My brain is fried! *Ashley starts mumbling something about wasted brain power and school...* :D
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