Saga Never Fall In Love With a Stranger - An A/P AU, Mystery - Updated 6-3-10

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  1. Lieutenant_Jaina Jedi Knight

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    Geeze, that Palo guy is damn annoying. I hope Ani appears in your story soon enough. [face_love]

    I'm eager to read more!
  2. alexceasar Jedi Knight

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    1. He grabbed Padme? Someone is not gonna like that at all.o_O
    2. He threatened Padme? Same someone is definately not gonna like that![face_devil][face_skull]

    Anyway, nice chapter. Poor Padme having her sister pushing her to marry and having Palo chasing her. Good work.

    P.S. Thanks for the PM.
  3. Across_The_Stars-24 Jedi Knight

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    Great chapter.

    Padme fiesty as ever. And into this mysterious stranger.

    Sola obtrusive sisterly self who only means good. We all have our family problems.

    Palo has an obsessive streak in him. Not good.

    Can't wait until Anakin enters into this story. Can't wait until Anakin dices him down to size.
  4. Galactic_Girl Jedi Knight

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    Jun 19, 2005
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    Ugh. Palo. Will he ever learn? Jerk, Padme has no interest you! :rolleyes: Ani better come soon. It sounds like Palo has something awful planned for Padme...[face_worried]

    @};- =D= Thanks for the PM, Gina.
  5. Amidala66 Jedi Master

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    Jul 14, 2005
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    Yeah!!! An Update!!![face_dancing]

    I like how you describe Padme in this story. She is strong and knows what she wants( helping people) and doesn't want(Palo)

    When will the eyes come out of the dream?

    Great update Gina=D=
  6. JediArym Force Ghost

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    Jun 24, 2005
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    Sola means well and is concerned about Padme but I think she should just
    let Padme live her own life. Let her be happy by her own standards and
    not anybody else's.

    Palo is a real jerk, isn't he? I hope a certain blonde blue-eyed hottie
    shows up in Padme's life soon. ;) I bet he can take care of that Palo.

    Thanks for the PM and I hope you'll update again soon. :)
  7. WendyGage Jedi Knight

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    Feb 1, 2006
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    Loved your update
    Palo seems pretty desperate
  8. HandmaidenVeme Jedi Master

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    Jun 28, 2004
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    Your update was well worth the wait!!!! I can't wait for Mr. Blue Eyes to show up:D
  9. anakin_luver Jedi Grand Master

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    "No, Palo," Padmé interrupted, barely able to contain her anger. "As I have told you on countless occasions, I have no interest in dining with you, taking walks along the lakeshore with you, or in any way pursuing a relationship with you. Now if you will excuse me, I am tired, and I want to go home."

    Well first I thought that was a little harsh! But then...

    "Soon, Padmé Naberrie" he hissed under his breath, "you will learn that no one refuses me."

    I had a change of heart ;)

    Is he going to be one of those crazy stalkers? Oh dear...Padme Padme Padme

    I can't wait til she meets the "stranger"!

    Great post!
  10. jedi_princess18 Jedi Master

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    Interesting. Padme is not a Senator, and the Empire already exists. I can't wait to see where you take this! :)

    Glad Padme brushed Palo off, he seems kind of nasty.

    Thanks for the PM! [:D]
  11. Darth_Father-in-law Jedi Master

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    This is just too good to be true. This idea is so wonderful! But the way you write, is something unique. I can nothing but admire your work.

    Palo...I've always thought he's disgusting, but now he's that even more. And what is Sola trying? If Padmé is having dreams about those adorable blue eyes, let her have them. I know something strange is going to happen soon.

    Thanks for the PM, and I hope you update soon. Your writing is always a pleasure.

  12. Anakin_Heartbreaker Force Ghost

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    Gina - I remember when we had that interesting conversation about Padme's occupation, and I have to say, you made it look flawless. But then again, this is you we are talking about!!!!! :) [face_love] [:D]

    Is that SCENE that we talked about coming next?!!!!! I hope it is!!!!! :D


    Once again, I can't thank you enough for writing this. And update whenever you can, I know you have alot of other fics that you are working on.


    LOL, Mr blue eyes....is it really Anakin??????????????? [face_thinking] :p
    I know!!!! I know!!!! But I'm not telling! [face_mischief]
  13. Luna_Nightshade Manager Emeritus

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    Ah, Palo. A wee bit character who finally gets himself some attention... albeit, some very negative attention. This chapter had a very Beauty and the Beast feel to it, in that Palo reminded me of Gaston, Padme Belle, and Sola... um... whatever Belle's father was named. Needless to say, Palo irritates me, and naturally I want Padme to find Anakin as it should be. I too thought that Padme's occupation really fit her, and I certainly hope that she can hold out from her family's wish for her to marry so that she can be with you-know-who. [face_whistling] Wonderful job, Gina. I enjoy the eloquence and fresh beauty you bring to this couple. =D=
  14. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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  15. naadi Jedi Knight

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    What an interesting start.Absolutley fantastic,I can't wait to see what padme finds out about those mysterious blue eyes,which belong to the wonderful anakin.Will he be making an appearance soon?Maybe he could do something with irratating palo,but padme seems to be doing fine at the moment!!!I love the difffernt take on this story,anakin and padme don't really know each other yet,and she hasn't turned queen yet.Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!


    could you please add me to ure pm list pleaseeee!!![face_praying]
  16. Vivid_Scripts Jedi Master

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    WOAH! A bright red Danger sign went up as soon as I read that. We have a powerful (his father is Regional Governor! O_O), immature, unstable and sexually frustrated man throwing threats at our heroine. I have a feeling that this might get ugly. But who knows? Maybe Palo's attack will give our favorite dark horse knight an opportunity to slide in to the rescue.

    UP
  17. Gina Force Ghost

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    Thanks so much for reading, everyone! [face_love]



    leia_naberrie

    In that one sentence, you captured the essence of Padmé Amidala Naberrie.

    Thank you! :D And I'm glad you liked Padme as a teacher. And as for Palo, well, more on him in the next chapter.


    VA_Parky

    Are you so certain the mysterious eyes belong to Anakin? [face_batting]


    Princess_Elisabeth

    Palo is a jerk, that's for certain. :mad:


    CrazyAni

    Hmmm...Everyone seems convinced the mysterious man from Padme's dream is Anakin. [face_mischief]


    Star_Angel

    I don't like Palo, either. [face_beatup] Well, at least not in this story. LOL!


    JediMasterRev

    Methinks you don't like Palo for some strange reason

    Now whatever gave you that idea? O:) Oh, yeah, maybe it's because he is an utter creep in two of my stories! [face_laugh] Hey, it's nothing personal against the guy. :p


    VaderLVR64

    It's easy to see Padme in the role of a teacher.

    Thanks! I thought it was suited to her generous, caring natue.

    I don't see Padme with stupid Palo! I hope he gets what's coming to him.

    [face_whistling]


    jmsbndgrl

    Oh, believe me, don't feel sorry for Palo. [face_devil]


    randomangel22

    Thank you! [face_blush] I'll be glad to add you to the PM list!


    AnakinLuver

    I love the paragraph where Padme blew off Palo straight up and forward... hee hee... that's the girl I love!!!

    Thanks! :D Padme is a strong woman, and she definitely held her own with both Sola and Palo.


    Daenarrah

    Is it wrong that Sola irritated me like anything this chapter?

    No. She irritated me, too. :p

    There's going to be trouble ahead.

    Indeed there is. [face_devil]


    Lieutenant_Jaina

    I hope Ani appears in your story soon enough.

    Have I mentioned that I'm not above accepting bribes? [face_whistling]


    alexceasar

    1. He grabbed Padme? Someone is not gonna like that at all.
    2. He threatened Padme? Same someone is definately not gonna like that!


    Yes he did, and no, someone is most definitely not gonna like it. ;)


    Across_The_Stars-24

    Sola obtrusive sisterly self who only means good. We all have our family problems.

    Yes, I think we all have a Sola in our families. [face_laugh]


    Galactic_Girl

    Ugh. Palo. Will he ever learn?

    No. Some guys just never do. [face_shame_on_you]

    Ani better come soon. It sounds like Palo has something awful planned for Padme...

    [face_whistling]


    Amidala66

    I like how you describe Padme in this story. She is strong and knows what she wants( helping people) and doesn't want(Palo)

    Thank you! :D And as for the eyes, well, you'll see. ;)


    JediArym

    I agree! Sola should let Padme find her own path! But, she does mean well. And yes, Palo IS a jerk! :mad:


    WendyGage

    Palo seems pretty desperate

    And a desperate man is a dangerous man... [face_worried]


    HandmaidenVeme

    Thank you! [face_blush]

    I can't wait for Mr. Blue Eyes to show up

    [face_whistling]


    anakin_luver

    Believe me, you CAN'T be too harsh with this guy. :mad:


    jedi_princess18

    Thanks! :D Glad you're enjoying the story!


    Darth_Father-in-law

    Thank you very much. [face_blush] This story was the brainchild of the wonderfully talented Anakin_Heartbreaker, and I'm just grateful he entrusted it into my care. :)

    Sola's problem is that she doesn't believe in Padme's dreams. She wants her to focus on what is "real." But, Padme has faith that her dreams have a purpose for her life. ;)


    Anakin_Heartbreaker

    I remember when we had that interesting conversation about Padme's occupation, and I have to say, you made it look flawless. But then again, this is you we are talking about!!!!!

    Thanks! [face_blush]

    Is that SCENE that we talked about coming next?!!!!!

    Indeed it
  18. randomangel22 Jedi Master

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    :eek: whoa what an intense chapter!!! but very well written as you had me on the edge of my seat during the whole abusing incident. but i was glad when anakin showed up [face_dancing]and kicked palo's butt he deserved it :mad:. please update soon i'm dying to know what happens next [face_praying]!!
  19. ehopepower Jedi Knight

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    Jul 20, 2005
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    Nice update. This certainly took what I would call an interesting turn! Am totally hooked even more on this story. Looking forward to the next installment!
  20. AnakinLuver Jedi Master

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    wow... wow... just wow... go Anakin, right? Anakin kicked Palo's butt... me so happy... I wonder what Anakin will do with Padme now... probably just take her home... why can't I be Padme? I want Anakin to rescue me... *sigh* can't wait for the next update!

    Rachel Rose@};-

    I always knew Palo was up to something...:mad:
  21. jmsbndgrl Force Ghost

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    Dec 31, 2004
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    Palo broke an important rule. You do not mess with the "Stranger's woman". It only angers him and causes the "Agressive Negotiator" (I loved that part), to come out to play.

    I did find it interesting that the "Stranger" held himself back in his attacks of Palo. I know he was doing it for Padme's sake, but at least he has some control. It adds depth to his character because we get to see that there is more to him than his dark cloaked form.

    So I wonder if Padme is going to wake up to see Mr. Blue Eyes, or if she will be all alone and the mysterious "Stranger" will be gone? I have a feeling it will be the latter, but maybe you'll surprise me.

    Excellent update, can't wait until the next one! :)
  22. anakin_luver Jedi Grand Master

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    Oh my gosh! He's my HERO!!!!

    I love the dream Padme had of the stranger standing underneath thr tree and looking up at her with his peircing blue eyes...I can imagine it so clearly now. I think I would have fainted if I was Padme!

    Gosh darnit Palo! Now why would you be so foolish as to pick on a watched girl such as Padme? Sure as heck learned your lesson though didn't you?

    I love the "fight." If you can call it that! The stranger took those suckers down like a couple of pansies!

    Okay...sorry, just watched highlights from the World Cup and now I'm getting all "fan crazy." (calling people pansies ;) )

    Loved it! I absolutely can't wait for the next post!

    By the by, something else I liked about the fight was how the stranger didn't use any weapons. Makes him all the more dreamy =P~
  23. HandmaidenVeme Jedi Master

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    Jun 28, 2004
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    Excellent update!!!

    I knew he'd come:)
  24. leia_naberrie Jedi Master

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    Wow! What a dramatic entrance of our blue-eyed hero... I loved the 'aggressive negotiations'... ;)
  25. CrazyAni Jedi Master

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    Feb 23, 2006
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    :eek: Wow! The stranger is finally in the picture!

    Okay, I surrender.:p I have no idea who it is, but judging from this chapter I would go with Vader.

    Loved the fighting scene! Your descriptions are so vivid and rich, that I could see it as if I were rescued.=D= [face_blush]

    Palo is a jerk, but I didn't except him to go that far! His attempt at rape caught me off guard.

    Wonderful update, and please update soon! Thanks for the PM.:)

    CrazyAni
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